Cultivation: Proving Eternal Life Through the Dao of Formation

It's a local novel. The author is a dog meat seller; I read 10 chapters and still haven't seen any formations. I can't continue.

I read 30 chapters and didn't find a single formation.

What kind of book is this? Not only is there no strategy involved, but it also goes out of its way to help others. Could someone write a book like this without a brain full of water?

Can't you learn from your mistakes? Can't you at least improve your writing style? He only read a few pages of his first two books before putting them off the shelf; he's still the same old lousy writer.

Having followed the series from Qinglian, Wanshou, and Hanshi, including several books that were cut off along the way, I'm thoroughly tired of the later parts. The constant loop of dungeons, auctions, exchange meetings, and grand ceremonies, with no hints or foreshadowing to keep you excited or surprised, is incredibly tiresome. What's most tiresome is the phrase "aesthetic fatigue," especially the line "Finally, I met the real person today!"

You don't have to be in this state, do you? You've been writing books with an annual volume of two or three hundred thousand. There's always been a market for family-based cultivation novels, so why not study how to write them now and improve your writing skills? Stop focusing on descriptions like fireballs the size of water tanks and giant blue hands. If you figure that out, wouldn't it be better than what you're doing now?

I've read up to chapter 46... Where's the formation?

The protagonist is an indigenous person with average talent, but his cheat ability is a teapot that can turn water into spiritual water. The plot is bland and easy to pass the time.

I hate those novels where the protagonist's parents are killed in the early stages of Qi Refining, and the protagonist continues to cultivate normally to pad out the word count. I feel like if you don't take revenge, you'll never break through to Foundation Establishment, and even if you do manage to break through, you won't be able to break through to Core Formation.

Old Mo, keep it up! Don't play strategy games, because your mind will become like that too, constantly trying to wipe out your opponents. This will cause your novels to casually feature phrases like "extermination of an entire race." Because of this, your novels will lack a certain element. If you wipe out a hundred races, frankly, your novels will become very empty. And all the character development you've done over several chapters, just like that, spewed out like a handgun, will be wasted.