Cultivation: Proving Eternal Life Through the Dao of Formation

It is an indigenous text. The author is a dog meat seller, and I didn't even see the formation after reading 10 chapters. I can't stand it anymore.

After reading Chapter 30, there are no fart formations.

What kind of ridiculous book is this? You don't say anything about it when you go in, but you even rush to help others apply eggs. How can you write this kind of book if you don't have two kilograms of water in your brain?

If you don't have a long memory, can't you improve your writing skills? The first two books he read were thrown out of the bookshelf after reading a few pages, and he still behaved like a dick.

From Qinglian, Ten Thousand Beasts, Han Family, and a few cut-off books in the middle, I am really tired of the later ones. The copies, auctions, exchange meetings, and ceremonies are constantly looping, without any hidden foreshadowing, etc. That make people look forward to or surprised. The most tired adjective is the adjective of aesthetic fatigue, especially the sentence "I finally saw a real person today"

You don't get to this point, do you? You keep writing two or three hundred books? There has always been a market for family cultivating immortality. Why not study how to write about family cultivating immortality now and improve your writing skills? Don't worry about the descriptions of fireballs as big as water tanks and giant blue palms. After researching them, is it no better than now?

I've seen Chapter 46, where's the formation?

The protagonist is a native with average qualifications. The plug-in is a teapot that can turn water into spiritual water. The plot is as bland as water and can pass the time.

I hate those kind of situations where my parents were killed in the early stage of Qi training, and the protagonist is still practicing normally. If you don't take revenge, I feel that I will never be able to break through the foundation building. Even if I break through the foundation building by luck, I can't break through the core formation. I'm talking about the formation in Lao Mo's new book. I was immediately persuaded to quit. He was killed while practicing Qi at a young age and he can still practice normally. To become an immortal, you should have clear thoughts. , There is no explanation of the protagonist's inner demons, and he can't break through the foundation building hurdle at all. By the way, there may be bottlenecks during the Qi training period, and it is difficult to improve the cultivation. Why write a novel without caring about the beginning and the end? I made enemies with the Jindan family at the beginning. You have to make more big mistakes. The other family is waiting for you to make progress. The other family is declining. I really talk about the matter. I was persuaded to quit at the beginning.

Come on, Lao Mo, don't play strategy games, because your mind has become like it, trying to find ways to destroy your opponents, which will lead to your novels casually containing the word genocide. Because of this, the elements of your novels will be one less clan, annihilate a hundred times. Frankly speaking, your novels will be very empty, because they are empty, and you have cultivated the characters for several chapters. Just like that, they are exploding like a handgun, and they are consumed.