A Military Variety Show, Yet You Take People Onto a Real Battlefield

The subject matter is good and the author's writing style is also good. Even after reading the first few chapters, I was speechless. There is a feeling of conflict for the sake of conflict, whether it is the so-called "practicing medicine without a license" or the National Health Commission coming later. The twist is beautiful, but it doesn't make sense at all. The veterinary team prescribed vitamin C Yinqiao tablets that were expired three years ago, and my cat still had to take them. It is indeed possible to report to the Health Commission, but in fact, the Health Commission often cannot control military hospitals, let alone get in.

I believe in the record, but I don't believe in being dragged into a variety show or a military summer camp on the battlefield.

I asked why there were so many comments. If I scrolled down, they would all be swipes. Besides, this is a noob. I can't stand it with my brain.

If the military comes to a variety show, think about it, except for Lei, it's just a show

When I saw Chapter 28, the Golden Triangle drug dealers were clearly offering rewards for domestic gold medals and A-list celebrities, that really made me laugh to death, you think the country is vegetarian. Anyone who dares to publish this will be destroyed by the country!

First of all, celebrities will not participate in this kind of program. Their bodies are very precious.

I know that your simulated space may be the core of this work. But I still want to make a suggestion. It is best not to have conversations with historical figures or other interactions in subsequent simulations. Just like the first time, the protagonist group is directly used to replace the historical figures for simulation. The current plot cannot be said to be bad. For most people, they may still think it is well written. I guess you must be very proud of this idea too. But I don't know if you understand the minefield of this kind of writing for military works. That is, historical nihilism. Maybe you wrote fanfics before and didn't involve specific historical figures, so I'm not sure. In this type of work, involving archetypes of historical figures, no matter how brilliant and upright you write, it is inevitable that the readers will be deconstructed by the dialogue and plot. And this structure is fundamentally a distortion and a second creation. So at present, there are basically unified standards for this type of works. Characters, stories, and prototypes can be mentioned, but direct dialogue and participation in the plot are not allowed. In short, your first simulation is actually very good. There is no dialogue, only the plot and battles of the protagonist group. This kind of writing is interesting to write, and it is not easy to trigger minefields. Above, some personal suggestions.

Starting from Chapter 150, the upper-level people began to compete for the dominance of the system, which deviated from the topic. They wrote all nonsense. If the author runs out of ideas, it will be a mess and it will be a mess. Let's start a new book.

I have never understood the popularity of real-time live streaming and the problem of viewing traffic. Why can a hot meme be spread instantly? Live broadcast? For example, if you sing a song live, it sounds good, but it can't attract many times the number of people you live broadcast in an instant? Can't you say that your previous live broadcast was mediocre, with only a hundred people watching it, and then suddenly you suddenly attracted traffic because you sang a song or did something very nice or interesting during the live broadcast? Don't you need time to ferment? Don't you need fans to spread the heat to each other? Even if it's a hot search, it doesn't mean that what you did at five o'clock became popular, and it will be on the hot search at five o'clock? You can see the number of real-time viewers, but it doesn't mean that after the protagonist has done this, your live broadcast room will explode immediately? No matter what, people need to spread the word so that more people can see this? Then it's impossible for people all over the world to wait outside the live broadcast room for the protagonist to finish doing this and then immediately enter the live broadcast room to watch? I feel that as long as it is about celebrities, eight out of ten books will have this kind of thing. It is difficult for me to understand that this kind of thing can become popular without anyone promoting it spontaneously and without spending any money to promote it

Later, when I wrote it as a global game, it felt like it was falling apart, so the author cut off the bottom part himself.