Mortal: Start from the Portable Space

The female protagonists, Yan Ruyan and Senior Sister Chen are better. Nangong is just a vase. There are not many chapters in the article and there are no special features. It is just a one-night stand. 1. At the beginning, Jiedan and the protagonist are also separated in two places, which is not interesting. 2. The exercises and routes are the same as those of the protagonist, and adding the same daughter-in-law is not called doujinshi, it is called plagiarism! How to attract popularity? Yan Ruyan can grow up together, Senior Sister Chen is devoted. Sometimes it's not that I hate having a harem, but that some emotional lines are really too awkward.

If you want to be successful in writing fan fiction, you have to write your own stuff, and you can also have necessary secondary settings. For example, a mortal starts from undercover, and the human world expands a lot. I like to watch this kind of thing. After all, Han Li's vision is only one person's perspective. The plug-in in the Undercover book happens to be opposite to Han Li, which just introduces a lot of new things... There are also Mortal Immortal's Lu Yunze weapon refining methods, and the sweeping trend of casual cultivator Wang Li (but the spirit world chapter is not fresh), it is necessary for mortal fans to write new things well.

You were asked to write about this fight. You don't even know how to transmit sounds. You can shout out whatever talisman you use.

Brother, steady, I'm here too (eight group members)

How many pills are there in a bottle, and how many spirit stones are there in each pill? Pills are generally very expensive.

If this was a harem novel, I would suggest that the more women the better. The comment section is still discussing whether the vase is really unnecessary. There are many powerful women in the spiritual world, and women like Baohua are countless times stronger than women in the human world. The results of Immortal Immortality also show that the protagonist only needs to be strong, and then he can lead the harem to become stronger. Even if the heroine's talent is strong, it is just as good as the protagonist.

Don't fall in love with each other. To cultivate immortality, you should walk alone. Don't open a harem🥺

The author's stinky brother logged out of his Qidian account, and now he's logged in and is no longer the Writer's Assistant.

If you don't cast Hu Xin Ruyin, there won't be much to watch. You won't accept such a distinctive female character. Chen Qiaoqian just passed by to save her and fell in love with her as the heroine. I really can't like it, and I can't write any emotional scenes.

There are so many typos that I can't stand it anymore. The author even writes typos when replying to comments. Alas.

There is not much I can write now and I can revise it, so hurry up and revise it. From the starting point, there is really no shortage of copying flow. Just a suggestion, if you write for fun, it will be fine. If you write seriously, check more information. If you have fire spirit root, the method is called Three Yuan Xuan Fire Kung Fu. The essence, energy and spirit are three Yuan.

The pig's trotters were plotted against each other in Bloody Forbidden, but he still had a smile on his face? How is this written? Shouldn't his face be gloomy or livid? ? ?

I don't understand why the male protagonist went to the Blood Trial

Wanle, author, what are you writing about? Melee combat during Qi training period? I have no interest in watching it at all!

It's a bit outrageous. I find that everything about you is the same as Han Laomo. There is no creativity at all. It's like watching a mortal again.

🔥Out of curiosity about Old Demon Han, I watched him when he was a child The ancestor concluded: This should be regarded as a fanfic. The protagonist traveled through the novel "The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality". In this world and background, as a visitor from another world, he fully understood the outline of the novel's story and knew the plot direction, so he cared for Han Li in his childhood. Seeing that he was vigorous and vigorous, the protagonist felt reassured, and all he had to do was follow closely. 1️⃣Recommended: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ 2️⃣Work information: Number of words: 9W (serial) Tag: Time Travel Goldfinger Mortal World 2️⃣Tweet: Point 1: The storyline revolves around the protagonist, but the protagonist is trying his best to avoid historical errors and reduce the impact on Old Demon Han. Point 2: The same people, different stories, a large number of characters appear in the novel, but the protagonist knows their personality characteristics because they have read the novel. There are men and women. If the relationship is good, the relationship can be closer. If the relationship is not good, just attack the weakness and kill them. Point 3: The golden finger has an interesting setting. It is more powerful than the early palm sky bottle. It is directly a space where you can plant things and accelerate growth. Trouble 1: I don't know if the author has read the Mortal Immortal Realm. If so, you should know that Han Li at this time is just the clone of the boss, and was sent back. At the same time, Nangong Wan came back. Both of them are boss-level existences in the fairy world. The protagonist is not afraid of cause and effect when hanging around Han Li. If he is sensed, he will be killed directly through cause and effect? There are many people who play chess with Han Li, and they are all beings who have a deep understanding of the laws of time. In the Immortal World chapter, Han Li went back to the past to kill his childhood enemy. Trouble 2: This Sky Palm Vase was actually brought back by the future Han Tianzun himself. At this point in time, aren't you afraid of meeting this Han Tianzun? At this time, Han Tianzun was the one who suppressed the immortal world. The author has canceled his account, damn it. No matter what, I'll post it once I've written it. I also rewarded you with 500 yuan. Ai painting, Han Li holding the bottle.

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