Equal to Heaven

I hope the author will pay attention to reader feedback when writing the book. If one or two readers say that there are problems with certain parts, it may be due to the reader's personal preferences. However, if a large number of readers dislike certain plots, then there must be a problem with the plot itself! Just like the tavern poetry duel plot in the previous book, the change was abrupt and illogical!

Interesting. Don't repeat the mistake of the previous book, where the protagonist ends up constantly seeking connections and favors. Reality is rife with relationships and favors; let the book focus more on self-reliance, even if it's tough and tiring.

I'm a long-time reader. "Salvation of All Heavens" was abandoned, and "Illustrations of Ghosts and Gods" had a terrible ending. I hope this one can pick up where it left off and achieve a perfect conclusion.

To be honest, the first few chapters were way too overpowering. 😰 People whose status and position are neither high nor low are easy targets for anyone to step on. So what? Is this a way to create conflict? I'm just venting a little, since there are only a few pictures available, so you can't really tell much from them.

The first ten chapters establish him as a composed and intelligent character who skillfully outwits the emperor and powerful figures in the capital. Outside the capital, however, he's a flustered and inexperienced newbie, seemingly vulnerable to any attack. This transformation is completely unrelated to his earlier characterization.

In a panic and haste, they only thought about exciting plots without considering that they couldn't control their writing skills at all. In the end, they could only imitate others and become a laughing stock.

Seeing this, if it weren't for the protagonist's cheat code, how would he survive... He exaggerated his adoptive father's abilities so much, and yet, he hasn't seen any of it.

It started off amazing, but then it went downhill.

No, the protagonist faked his death and escaped, so how could he dare to walk around openly without even trying to hide himself? After all, the protagonist can also put on makeup and disguise himself. Moreover, the main character is very handsome, as if afraid that others wouldn't recognize him.

No matter how good the later parts are, it's useless if the beginning just doesn't hold your breath.