Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Ancestor Forming Pills

At present, the author's sense of this movie is quite good. Whether it is the protagonist or the current boss, the writing is still emotional What is more uncomfortable at the moment is that the fighting scenes are not well written. I hope it can be improved in the future

This is not a cool article, it is a brainless article with no logic at all. Just because your ancestor became a golden elixir, you then executed all the monks of the Luo family who switched sides? ? ? And as mentioned earlier, the sect wanted to reduce its own burden, so it acquiesced in allowing its disciples to switch. .

This trick is very good. It's pretty good to be able to compete with others in terms of cultivation speed and pick up mistakes. If you want to read the story, please don't click on it. Nowadays, many novels open the golden finger too much and overwhelm the protagonist. I can only say it's disgusting.

Xiaobai's novel She is also the patriarch's daughter Just do whatever it takes to reduce resources🐔 The Bai family doesn't want to lose face This is a bit of a trick to lower your IQ This makes me, who reads novels seriously, a bit embarrassed

I'm also going to open a studio book called Immortal Cultivation from the Ancestor's Transformation into a God 🙂

The gap is too big. When I read the introduction, I thought I was trying to bully others. However, I was bullied every day because of my background. This is a typical example of trying to sell someone else's meat.

There are too few updates to bother me! And that arena is filled with water! What the hell is it that people use a generation to fight with you? If the family wins, they win. If the casual cultivators win, then all grudges with the family will be eliminated? Have you finished eating up the losses for the casual cultivators? Can a family who is a bad qigong practitioner change the sect's mission? If the casual cultivator wins, just kill a few of his contemporaries and be done with it? Is it okay if one generation of the family dies? If a generation of the cowardly qigong family dies, it will be no different than genocide, right? It's not like the golden elixir Yuanying has a long lifespan! And will the Qi Lian family become enemies with others? The lowest level in the world of cultivation and the most arrogant family. Shouldn't such a family be careful to survive and attack as a whole family if there is a feud? Just practice Qi! There is nothing lower than practicing Qi! Practicing qi is like an ordinary person, building foundation is like a millionaire, and golden elixir is like a billionaire, so can you be sure that ordinary person will not be favored by foundation building? Will you suddenly get lucky and have an adventure?             ，，

No brains, really no brains, I don't even have to look at the tomatoes.

Even writing with AI is a disadvantage

I don't understand. Killing guests casually is not going to cause any trouble?

I haven't seen how well it was written in detail, but he wrote it right from the beginning, which is to level up the level of cultivating immortals one level at a time, with absolute dominance. I got the golden elixir, and everyone under the golden elixir had to kneel down for me. What does it mean that chickens and dogs ascend to heaven? Qi Refining is like an ant to Jindan, but no matter how small he is, he is still an ant in my yard. Your background or your cultivation strength, etc., Have not been exposed to the golden elixir. If you encounter the ants in my yard, you have to whisper to me. If you speak loud enough to kill the ants in my yard, I will blow your head to death.

The author is at least at the level of eunuch manager

The poisoning started as soon as it was put on the shelves!

The beginning is pretty good, there are cheats but the sense of presence is not strong, and the theme of a second-rate sect advancing to a first-rate sect on its own and then letting the protagonist enjoy welfare is also very novel. The shortcomings are that the emotional drama between men and women is messy, the protagonist's inner dialogue is not well written, and the part about killing people in the wild and taking advantage of others is very rubbish. The author probably wanted to write that paragraph as "the protagonist stands in the light and is willing to fall into the darkness in order to climb up, but still retains a light in his heart." These writings are rubbish.

Well, if this is the author's first book, I suggest you write it slowly. If you are a veteran, just go ahead.

It's only been a few chapters and it's already been interrupted for 3 days. It's probably because of the need for eunuchs.

I'm running away. I just took three days off at the beginning. There are not many updates yet. I'll say goodbye.

It was okay before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, it became a gangster cultivator.

It was originally good, but suddenly the quality was removed from the shelves, and the updates were discontinued for no reason. Anyway, you also put it on the shelves. You ruined the popularity by doing this, and you took advantage of it. I feel like eating it💩

I fucking thought the subscription was already fed to the dog.

Does the author read book reviews? Do you know that your writing is not good? I am Shennong and I have strong resistance to poison. I just want to see how bad you can write 🤭

I said it was always a day off, but it turned out to be three days.

Updates are getting slower and slower. I haven't updated them for several days in a row... And the plot... Forget it, it's gone.