I Was in Douluo and Was Struck by Lightning at the Beginning

The fiftieth book in full order. As a Douluo fanfic, it is quite a good one. At least there aren't too many holes in the logic of the characters. Although the emotional scenes are quite awkward, overall it's okay and watchable.

1. Qi Rong Tongtian Chrysanthemum: It can move Qi to the limbs and blood to the eight meridians. It can make the body indestructible and can strengthen the "skin" and benefit the "lungs". 2. Narcissus Jade Muscle and Bone: It can moisturize the muscles and bones, and open the seven meridians and eight meridians. The "liver" governs the tendons, and the "kidney" governs the bones. The liver governs the fascia of the whole body, and is related to limb movement. The kidneys store essence, and the essence can produce marrow. If the marrow is sufficient, the bones will be strong. Therefore, the functions of the liver and kidneys will directly affect the condition of the muscles and bones. 3. Eight-petal fairy orchid: It has the effect of strengthening the root and nourishing the essence, the I-Ching washes the marrow and removes impurities. The kidneys store essence, and the essence generates the marrow. The marrow can also nourish bones and benefit its "kidney". 4. Qiluo Tulip: Taking it can absorb the essence of heaven and earth, and make the sun and moon shine. The effect of the medicine is spread throughout the limbs [Baigui]. Qiluo tulip and eight-petal fairy orchid are a pair of mandarin duck fairy grass, which complement each other. [Bai Skeleton] refers to all the bones of the human body, large and small. "One hundred bones, nine orifices, and six treasures are all in one place. Who of me will marry you?" 5. Acacia Heartbroken Red: It is a divine treasure among fairy herbs. The flower is extraordinary, so choose the owner. Eating this herb has the effect of becoming immortal like the heaven and earth. Can live and die, flesh and bones. The nutrition of muscles comes from the water and grain essence absorbed and transferred by the spleen. The spleen governs muscles, which is determined by the spleen's ability to transport water and grain essence. Benefits the "Spleen" 6. Looking Through Autumn Water Dew: The medicinal effect is mild, and it is an auxiliary fairy-like herb. It does not help to improve the soul power. Eating it can train the eyes of fire and gold, and it is a rare thing. 7. Cockscomb Phoenix Sunflower: It greatly nourishes Chaos Yang and has the functions of replenishing qi and blood, tonifying the kidneys and replenishing essence. It can invigorate the spleen and qi, warm the kidneys and strengthen yang. Benefits its "spleen" and "kidneys" 8. Crystal Blood Dragon Ginseng: It is the queen of ginseng and is definitely among the immortals. It is born in the eighth grade and has evolved for thousands of years. In terms of efficacy, it is enough to be compared with Acacia Broken Heart Red. It can greatly replenish vitality, rejuvenate the pulse and strengthen the prolapse, nourish the "spleen" and benefit the "lung", produce body fluid and nourish blood, soothe the mind and improve the intelligence. [To sum up, by combining other herbs under the fairy grass to nourish the heart, you can practice the Nine Turns of Great Return Pill! Enough to turn the male protagonist, who has an innate soul power of level 0.5, Into a god

Personal opinion They are among the best unsystematic fanfics I have ever read. Many fanfics blindly pursue powerful martial arts and extreme soul rings, but in the end Douluo only has such a big world view. Your strength has undoubtedly reduced the process from weak to invincible. But the fandom limits your character portrayal, and it is inevitable that you will fall short in the end.

Power of Heaven Lightning Strike in the Universe

The author's writing is pretty good, but the updates are too slow.

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Now that I think about it, it's quite funny, "There are no useless martial spirits, only useless soul masters." In the original book, every time Tang San's Bluesilver Grass was despised, Dashu or Tang San would often say this sentence, so why didn't Dasheng break through level 30? Moreover, Da Shi subconsciously felt that Tang San's Blue Silver Grass was a useless martial spirit, and the reason for adding it now was just for the rise of the Clear Sky Hammer. Without Dugu Bo, Tang San would have lost confidence in Blue Silver Grass long ago.

According to the ancestral teachings of the Tang family, a man must marry a soul beast for a hundred thousand years, and a woman who has a cheat will not marry unless she is a god. It is a must for men in the Blue Silver Legend to tease girls, and a must for women in the Haotian Legend to guard against wolves The first place, please listen to me in detail; My brother is the God of Poseidon. My surname is Tang, and the brother with two souls is the strongest. Haotian thunders, the heaven and earth change, and the blue and silver treacherous changes make the enemy hesitate. Purple demon eyes peer into the Tao, and the golden divine halberd emits golden light. The elite of the academy alone are called saints, and the talented people from mainland China are kings. Everyone: Don't let the hybridization between humans and animals run rampant, fishing for fame and reputation will destroy your conscience. The beauty of ice and fire is full of greed and greed. The poison is released in the city of killing, and the dark wind and mist are drifting. Being a god involves himself in mortal matters, but he only has a godly body and soul.

The last few chapters have been disgusting to read. They always show Bibi Dong's bottomless favoritism. The protagonist has to fight back passively without hurting the other party. It feels too suffocating. Yu Xiaogang's self-righteousness keeps jumping around, so why can't he be killed earlier? Bibi Dong is not that strong. She is still in the trial to become a god. She is useful to Wuhun Palace and Xiaoxue's mother. Otherwise, Qiandaoliu would have killed her long ago. In the original work, she relied on her own means to recruit a group of talents to control Wuhun Palace. Now Gui Ju belongs to the protagonist Fang. If she favors Yu Xiaogang without any brain, who among the Wuhun Palace members will listen to her?

Isn't this better than the anime's Ju Douluo? !

New A Yin: Yin'e·Huang

If Tang San didn't have the chance. In addition, the first martial spirit was destroyed by Yu Xiaogang. Then his talent is really not as good as Tang Hao, and he has no creativity at all. In addition, Yu Xiaogang suggested that Tang San build the Clear Sky Hammer after level 60, so the second martial spirit was also disabled by Yu Xiaogang. The last level is the most, over 90 levels. If you want to become a god, forget about it. Take a shower and go to bed early

After reading so many fan stories, what is there to take away from Zhu Zhuqing? Just because she's pretty? Haha, she hasn't done anything to harm Wuhun Palace, but Tang San hasn't done anything either, so why should he only kill Tang San and not her. Can you forgive her, but not Tang San? Same double standards. From the perspective of Wuhun Palace, all the Shrek Seven Wastes deserve to die! No need to wash. In front of Jialing Pass, how many people from Wuhun Palace did she kill? Now it didn't happen because of the time travellers, the reborn ones! Can it be forgiven? So due to the influence of rebirth and time travel, Tang San didn't do anything, so can Tang San also be forgiven? ?

In my guess, the whole story should happen like this. The Tang Hao brothers must have a very pure love for Lan Yincao, otherwise it would not be enough to make Lan Yincao fall in love. After counting the sacrifices in Douluo Continent, it can be seen that although there are various conspiracies and calculations behind each sacrifice, the love between the parties involved must be very pure and sincere. This is the main tone, just like the conspiracy and calculation behind it. The Haotian Sect found out about this and expressed clear opposition. But their objections were not strong enough, and the couple ran away. When Tang Hao reached level 90, he wanted a high-level powerful soul ring, so he secretly contacted his father and brother, asking them to help. After all, the stronger he is, the more the elders within the sect have nothing to say and find it difficult to object. Moreover, Lanyincao is pregnant. If she wants her to raise her baby with peace of mind, she will have to split the soul by herself, which is too dangerous. I don't know if the news was lost or if his father planned it himself. Consider going to the big forest to hunt spirit beasts. It is basically impossible to think of 100,000 years. So the idea came to Lan Yin Cao. Notify the Wuhun Palace to hunt for 100,000-year-old soul beasts, and force 100,000-year-old soul beasts to sacrifice in desperate situations and critical situations. If Lan Yincao is sacrificed, then the Haotian Sect will not only erase the dark history of the sect's heir falling in love with the soul beast, but also get a powerful titled Douluo with a 100,000-year-old soul ring and soul bone. If Blue Silver Grass refuses to sacrifice, the elders can create a rift in their love. Qian Xunji is a titled Douluo. He does not need soul rings and soul bones, so he must prioritize catching more than killing. After all, a hundred thousand year soul ring is extremely rare. The Haotian Sect can dispatch the elder sect leaders to intercept them halfway and capture the Blue Silver Grass. After Tang Hao made the sacrifice with Bluesilver Grass, he understood the truth of the whole matter. He not only hated himself for trusting the sect, he also hated Wuhun Palace for taking the initiative to force him, but also hated the sect's privacy methods. Under the resentment, he might even hate the child in Lan Yin Cao's belly. If it weren't for the pregnancy, the couple would be able to hunt souls, wouldn't they have informed the sect? If she wasn't pregnant, Lan Yin Cao wouldn't have difficulty moving. Is it possible for the two of them to work together to break out of the siege? But he grew up in the sect since he was a child. All his relatives and friends are within the sect, and he loves the sect extremely. This kind of conflict and opposition between love and hate, and the sadness of death when his beloved died, made him choose to exile himself. This perfectly explains why Tang Hao hid in a small mountain village and even treated Tang San extremely badly when he was a child. Because he hates them all! If the person he loved the most was simply killed, his first emotion would be hatred and revenge, not decadence and grief.

Yang Yunhai·After merging the blood of Blue Silver Emperor

The protagonist has been struck by lightning since he was a child, but his hair is not damaged, so it is best to use vines to develop his hair.

The plot is okay, the author is more detailed in the original work, but the emotional scene is too rough, especially after meeting Zhu Zhuqing, it's like being knocked down, the writing level is not the same before and after. If the heroine needs the protagonist to destroy the character in order to replace it, the heroine can actually be eliminated.

A harem is a must! Just don't have too many! Eight or nine is enough 🤭🤭

I originally planned to see something different about killing Bibi Dong, but this is the result? Slip away, wait for the next book🙂🙂

I think Qianji Xunqing is too naive, and Qian Daoliu's statement is like saying to the victim, "Although the murderer has secretly kept you secret, but aside from the facts of the crime, he was very good to you in the past, so you have to forgive him." This kind of lack of empathy will only have the opposite effect, and it is very uncomfortable to watch Let's talk about the facts or Bibi Dong's mistakes in the early stage: 1. Wuhun Palace invested a lot of resources in training Bibi Dong 2. Bibi Dong leaked a lot of information to Yu Xiaogang 3. Bibi Dong wanted to leave Wuhun Palace 4. The secret room First of all, I think it shouldn't be Bibi Dong's behavior should be taken to task. In essence, she is a naive and stupid girl. She did not recognize her "positioning" with Wuhun Palace. She enjoyed the resources of Wuhun Palace but did not think about her own responsibilities. She also did not understand the hidden hostile relationship between Wuhun Palace and Lan Dian (there was no quarrel on the surface), so there was no She kept a distance from Yu Xiaogang, and because she was spoiled, she felt that she could threaten her by quitting the Spirit Hall, so... She didn't realize the consequences of her actions. She thought that her "leaving" was not a betrayal. These were her "original sins", and there was no need to wash them away and there was no need to go to the extent of treason. To sum up, Qian Jixun must bear at least half of the responsibility. He was the one who taught Bibi Dong to be so naive! If the teaching is not strict, the teacher will be lazy. Next, are Bibi Dong's mistakes irredeemable? She is a child in the rebellious period. Punishment, discipline, guidance, and education can completely get her back on track. As Qian Daoliu said, there are thousands of ways. Qianji chose the stupidest and most dangerous one The secret room cannot bring Bibi Dong back to her heart, it is more like a way to vent. There is also a controversy here. For a felon, she has made a mistake anyway. Can she "do whatever he wants" to her? I don't think it's okay, because we are "human beings", so we shouldn't scold Tang San and at the same time drag our own style to the same level as Tang San! So it is normal for Bibi Dong to hate Qian Jixun. The more she respected the teacher, the more she would hate her. Under such circumstances, it is really difficult for her to recall Qian Jixun's good deeds. Who would be so mean? Not a Stockholm patient, falling in love with the abuser I forgot which fanfic I had read before, it seemed that Qian Renxue committed suicide, which made Bibi Dong realize that her revenge should be over, and made her realize that she still had people to care about, and there were also people who were worried about her. This was a way to untie her heart. It's not bad. I think this book uses Yu Xiaogang and the preaching method to be quite harsh, not to mention the fact that Qian Jixun is willing to be killed🤣 Bibi Dong has a lot of dark spots. After all, the setting is a villain, and I have nothing to help her clear her name, but I feel that it is really not possible to clear her name for the Secret Chamber Douluo.

Qian Renxue·Guangming

This book is still comfortable to read, but the volume is a bit small. People say that the book "The Glory of the Sun and the Moon" is well written. I went to read it and found it extremely boring. I felt sleepy after reading it. It was slow and long-winded.

To be honest, accepting Zhu Zhuqing is worse than accepting Shuibing

I feel that Silver Moth is not necessary. There is no problem if I delete it directly. The logic is also smoother. I can only say that it serves the author's xp.

Is there any good-looking Douluo Yi fanfic? Like a dire beast

How can I put it, as the author said, it is not a good article. The Soul Master Competition is really bad, there are many transitional chapters, and there are pressure levels in the later stage. There are more than 280 chapters, and I am worried that Duguyan will not be able to become a sea god. He has the soul bone of the Water Dragon King and Tianmeng sacrifices level 70. Of course, he should be kind to his own woman, but when you look back, the protagonist has so many tricks to get 68 level, so many chapters have been transitioned before being upgraded to a level, and in the early, middle and late stages, it is basically the old ghost Dugu of Yueguan who is fighting well. The protagonist relies on soul beasts to sacrifice and does not do much. The viewership is far from as good as the early stage. He writes in great detail about the soul master competition, but as a result, the soul skills start to be blurry again.

The author of your book has a book on Tomato with the same content except for the title,

The various changes of Blue Silver Grass alone are well written in the fandom field (maybe I haven't read it enough, just for this book alone). The following are some controversial/poisonous points 1. Zhu Zhuqing's plot really didn't feel that poisonous (maybe I read it relatively late) The author has changed it (probably because the author has changed it) There are only a few words, and they are either good or nodding 2. Dugu Yan, if you want to open a harem, you can just briefly talk about some things between her and Yu Tianheng. There is no need to go into details. This is considered to be a surprise. The writing is such a failure. Most readers have mysophobia, and I have done everything I should do here. Except for that step, isn't this not purely disgusting to readers? And this is a novel, there is no need to always talk about reality (some readers) 3. This starting point is also gc, and it is speechless to be reported for someone of this age. 4. I feel that there are too few emotional scenes, and the follow-up is just a running account.

Except for the emotional line, everything else is okay. It's considered a good one among Douluo fans. At least it doesn't look awkward. I would like to give you a suggestion. If your writing skills are not good enough, don't write too many female protagonists. I just saw Yin'e and it was too embarrassing.

Is your Huo Wu the heroine? It looks similar but not quite like it. It's neither up nor down. It's really uncomfortable.