Soul Land: The Unmatched Radiance

To be honest, I don't know who the protagonist is these days. In my opinion, the biggest poisonous point in the novel is the flow of clones, and this clone has recently become much larger than the protagonist. Slipping away.

A story about Zhou Yi can fill nearly ten chapters, so I'll give you some water.

Before I made the clone, the writing was quite good, with a good degree of relaxation. Although it still has the old problem of focusing on picking up and putting down lightly, it is much better than the author's previous works. As for Huo Yuhao, I actually think it would be good to directly train him into a "roaring dog". Although Huo Yuhao in the middle and later stages of the original work is really unbearable, the early Huo Yuhao can be considered a good child. It can only be said that he was really ruined by education (except for Lao Yi, there is no moral teacher, let alone Tang San who is doing evil behind his back). The problem is that when it comes to creating clones, can't you just make the whole alien body concentric? Unless the clone has an independent personality, the body is still that of an evil soul master. Is it necessary? It is said that Minghui will not be given a harem. The problem is that the main reason for not adding a harem is to prevent wasting too much space on the harem and affecting the overall rhythm. You have given so much space to the clones, and the rhythm is almost distorted to grandma's house. It also emphasizes the distinction of independent personalities. This is a bit disgusting. It was originally a good work, considered the author's pinnacle work, but it suddenly fell apart.

Actually, I think it's thanks to the fact that the speed of time in the God Realm is different from that of Douluo. Otherwise, wouldn't Ning Rongrong and the others have gone crazy? After all, there is no realm. Only cultivation cannot control immortality. There is only an immortal body, but no immortal mind.

The first book knocked down Douluo: Good The second book was struck by lightning at the beginning: Excellent, food and grass! The beginning of the third book was stolen by Tang San: Good (it was excellent in the early stage, and it would have been a decent ending after becoming a god in the later stage, but in the end, there was nothing to write, and it felt like cutting leeks. Overall good) The fourth book was a waste of the author's accumulated popularity! Comprehensive evaluation: You don't need to write it! Get a new book!

I have subscribed to all the books of Chili Pepper, but I really can't subscribe to the fourth one. Whitewashing Xuanzi, trampling on Yan Shaozhe, and going to the sun and moon to play with the girl's feelings with his clones and working as a nanny for Huo Gou. You should continue writing Dou Yi. You are really not suitable to write the series after Dou II.

Why are you watching Dou Er? Collect the harem and rebel against Tang San. It turns out that this book has fewer wives than his previous books. Is that true? I felt quite frustrated watching it, especially the part about the Valley of Questions. I couldn't stand it and skipped it. After watching the ending, I was done with it, so the ending part was more enjoyable. I killed and resurrected and continued to kill.

Don't encourage others to do good unless they have suffered. If you suffer from me, you may not be good to me.

I can only say that I admire the author for daring to write a clone flow 🙂

The last few chapters can't even be called garbage. What a clone flow. It's disgusting.