Building a Savior Organization from Scratch

Introduction: When the abyss began to erode the universe, and when various extraordinary monsters appeared on the earth, the protagonist Chen Sheng, who obtained the salvation system, began his road to salvation. Of course, salvation cannot be achieved by just one person. A big lie, an organization called Yongzhi, what a heart-wrenching story they will show us Book title: "Building a Salvation Organization from Scratch" Author: Evil Wang Zhenyan Saigao Type: behind the scenes, management, salvation, ideological enlightenment Book recommendation: Point 1: With the main line of resisting the invasion of the abyss, building an extraordinary organization, attracting talents from all over the world, and following the organizational management and development route. Highlight 2: Create extraordinary relics and fabricate epic salvation stories. The fabricated stories that have appeared so far include: "Then Become a Spark - We Live to Die". When you hear this name, don't you feel like the blood of a middle school soul is burning. I have to say that the author's writing is still very touching Disadvantages: If it is not cheeky, the writing is still quite shameful. After all, it is a ideologically enlightened novel. I just have some suggestions, can you turn the background of those ruins into real things? An empty shell alone has no soul. From the reader's point of view, you can't just use murals to explain it. It looks too empty. For example, we are born to die. There can be a lot of things here. Briefly describe the origin of Yongzhi, an evocative story. You can use murals. I have tried it a few times, but the feeling is not very good Overall, it is very good. It belongs to the salvation organization and is a good source of fabricating extraordinary things. It is worth reading {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

I read it all in one go with Changdu, and I judged it to be a piece of history.

I think the author's thinking has become rigid a long time ago, and I can basically guess what the plot will be next. Let's do this, you send me the saved manuscript and I will help you revise it😏😏

After reading the author's latest chapter, let's do this to get a boss .

These kinds of books are all good to read, but unfortunately they are easy to read 😭

Is there a possibility that the abyss is the dark side of the protagonist? All disasters are caused by the dark side of the protagonist. 😏This protagonist is the biggest disaster!

I feel like I'm hanging on too hard, and there's no sense of the threat of impending doom. The protagonists feel like they are basically ordinary people relying on system upgrades, and they have not shown the ability to lead the human spirit or belief. It can be read as a fairly good farming article. But it lacks a sense of salvation.

Speaking of which, I have read a lot of similar articles. I wonder if there is a model for establishing large-scale legion operations. It is too petty for an organization to have some superhero-like superpowers over and over again. For example, like the Astartes of Warhammer, the Custodes are superhuman troops that have a high degree of military organization and carry out large-scale legion operations. Not to mention the power armors of the Custodes and cans, they are really handsome

The idea is very good and the thinking is very clear, but the writing is not enough to support it.

I have read a novel before, and among all the abyss settings, it impressed me most deeply, and it was also the one with the strongest sense of despair. Other aspects of the abyss in it are similar to ordinary novels. The difference is that there are very many abyss demons, too many to be understood. There is a supporting character whose world was destroyed by the abyss, and he vowed to kill all the demons. A demon taunted him: No need to kill, just think of an actual number in your mind immediately, and then that number of demons will die immediately. You can always think of the destruction of the universe, and the ratio of the number of demons you want to die to the total number of demons is infinitely close to 0.