Building a Savior Organization from Scratch

Synopsis: When the abyss begins to erode the universe, and various extraordinary monsters appear on Earth, Chen Sheng, the protagonist who obtains the Salvation System, embarks on his path of saving the world. Of course, saving the world cannot be done alone. A colossal lie, an organization called Eternal Day—what kind of epic and moving story will they present to us?

After reading it all at once using the "Read-Aloud" method, it was determined to be a pile of rubbish.

I think the author's thinking has long since become stagnant; the rest of the plot is basically predictable. How about this, send me your draft, and I'll help you revise it. 😏😏

After reading the author's latest chapter, should we move on to the next boss? Let's do it this way.

These kinds of books are all good, but unfortunately they're prone to being abandoned prematurely. 😭

Is it possible that the abyss is a manifestation of the protagonist's dark side? And that all the calamities are brought about by the protagonist's dark side? 😏This protagonist is the biggest troublemaker!

The game felt overly overpowered, lacking any sense of impending doom. The main characters seemed to be ordinary people who relied on the system for leveling up, without demonstrating any ability to lead humanity's spirit or beliefs. It can be viewed as a decent farming/enjoyable novel, but it lacks a sense of national salvation.

I've read quite a few similar stories, but I wonder if there's any model for establishing large-scale legion warfare. It's really petty for an organization to just have a few superhero-like superpowered individuals over and over again. For example, the Astartes from Warhammer, and the Imperial Guard—superhuman forces with highly organized military skills capable of large-scale legion warfare—are undeniably cool, especially considering their power armor.

The idea is good, and the thought process is clear, but the writing skills are insufficient to support it.

I once read a novel that left the deepest impression on me among all the abyss-themed novels, and it also evoked the strongest sense of despair. In other aspects, the Abyss is similar to that of ordinary novels, except that the number of Abyss demons is far greater than that of ordinary novels. One of the supporting characters' worlds are destroyed by the abyss, and he vows to kill all the demons.