All Heavens: Starting from the Sanctuary Check-In

The owner of this ID must be 40 years old by visual inspection, and he still insists on writing in two dimensions, with tears in his eyes.

Brother, practice your writing, try to break through yourself, and leave your comfort zone. Even if you don't practice writing, after experiencing so many people and things in reality, even a normal person will not be very different from his writing more than ten years ago. After seeing you write books for so many years, I am really angry for you. The mud cannot hold up the wall. 😭😭😭 You have the perseverance to write a book for such a long time. If you spend some time to improve yourself, you will not be like this half-dead.

I remember reading the book written by this guy when I was in junior high school. Now that I have graduated several years ago, I find that the protagonist written by this author is still so... Wise... And has not made any progress for so many years. In a sense, it is awesome.

The author believes in himself and just writes normally. There are so many bad endings, well, it doesn't matter if he has one more book. He has a good grasp of the beginning and middle, and the ending is not that important (to me)

Why don't you try to write a new episode? I feel like few young people nowadays have watched these old shows~

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It's true that you should read the table of contents before reading a book. Saint Seiya is well-written and there are only a few pictures. Conan's Cat Eye Ranma is very interesting but there are only a few pictures. Yu Yu Hakusho's chronicle is endless, smelly and long.

There are currently two things wrong with the protagonist! The first is a common problem among travelers - arrogance. The second is transgression! What is the identity of the protagonist? Just a guest! You can make suggestions on some things, but the implementation level needs to be done by the master. You can't overstep the master! Are things like rewards and punishments and winning people's hearts something you should do? Benevolence comes from above and loyalty comes from below, which is the normal order of an organization. Otherwise, how can I be respected? What next? How to establish authority? You do all the rewards and punishments, and the Lord acts as the backdrop. Is this any different from a puppet mascot? What do you want? Are you Saga second? Put yourself in my shoes, you are a goddess, do you dare to trust the protagonist? How could I know that you are not the Deepwater Wolf, an undercover agent sent by Pluto, a spy who goes against the rules and usurps power and wants to disintegrate the organization from within?

Alas, Xiaoshuai is no longer an author. He is now an experiencer who represents the glorious era of the second dimension. The symbolic significance of this book is greater than its practical significance.

Keep it first, open it high and go low, the world of Saint Seiya is exciting at the beginning, the planning and fighting are interesting, I flipped through the catalog, and after it was put on the shelves, I played house in the main world and stole things with my girls. I didn't want to watch this part at all.

I have been in Qidian. Com for 6,000+ days. Brother, you are the same age as Qidian. Com. That's so cruel.

The Saint Seiya setting is too bragging! If you really want to write it according to the setting of Saint Seiya, there will be no need to play in the next N number of worlds! It is recommended that you just open up a small universe and leave, as a foreshadowing of the three secret treasures hidden in the Gods in the future. In addition, the genre of drama is emotional, the legend, the big sword girl has multiple realms of misery, which is very suitable for the protagonist who is not very strong in the early stage, and can also use hot weapons to show off! For example, the dual-gunner style, ebony and white ivory, unlimited ammunition for low-level melee combat. Later, the strength improved, Sky War Chronicles, Demon Altar Fighter

Let's not talk about the problem of weakened combat power. IQ is a flaw. How could you think that just because the sixth sense of the three sisters of Maoyan is strong, you think they can become strong through the training methods of the Saint Seiya world? Let's not talk about whether the sixth sense of the two worlds is the same. The combat power alone is very different. It's really just a king on the dog's head and a green onion in the pig's nose.

A golden saint goes to the main world to play house, and there are so many pictures. The protagonist knows the plot, so he can just push it with his strength. Let's start the next world. The main world can be written slowly and back and forth, otherwise it will be too boring.

I could still watch it at first, but suddenly a bullshit engagement came up, and I was immediately disgusted. It's not like ancient times, so don't you think it's sick to do this?

Xiaoshuai is also an old author... He has written so many books, why is his writing style still the same as the first book and there is no improvement... His level has always been stable...

The author is probably a primary school student, right? The description of the world of Saint Seiya is just like playing house. Even hot-blooded anime is not so clever, right?

Xiaoshuai's books have very good themes, but I don't want to read them after reading them. How to say it? The two-dimensional house is too heavy. I loved watching it when I was a kid, but now I can't watch it. However, Xiaoshuai's style has remained unchanged for so many years. Compared with the fact that there is no such person in the Lambs now, and Luo Qing's later years are unknown, Xiaoshuai's performance is stable and okay.

Let me go, Li Yalin, I feel like the author was many years ago

The author who was more than ten years ago still has not changed his original intention, and his writing style remains unchanged 😅🤤😅 Improve your writing style! ! ! ! ! ! I like the subject matter, but I can't stand it anymore

As soon as I saw the main character's name was Lynn, I knew it was a book by the author. I hope it doesn't end as hastily as the previous book.

The result is that the level of writing books has remained the same for ten years, with no progress at all. The male protagonists are all weak characters, and the women have no IQ.

Isn't it? I have been writing for more than ten years, and even if I am not a great person, I have to be at least lv5. How come I am only lv4?

Changing the instant demon into a female made me sick.

Not thinking about going to the New World? There are not many places left.

Sure enough, after decades of reading novels, Xiaoshuai's books never disappoint me, and this one still appeals to me.

What about the new book? Why haven't you started writing it yet?

When I first read it, I felt that it was the same as the plot. It was just that the prophet woke up a little bit first, and then the nanny, the nanny, and the nanny again. I read it from your first book, so I will continue to read it. I just hope that the author will not be a bad eunuch.

Saint Seiya is okay. After it was released, the writing by the three Maoyan sisters was too cliched. Then Yu Yu Hakusho, one could tell at a glance that it was an old author. There were too many clichéd writing methods.

Orthodox Long Ao astronomy, boring