I'm Checking in and Clocking Out in Tokyo

I really don't recommend reading it. It's long and ink-stained. I want to have a harem but also want to play pure love. I like Xiaolan but don't know how to deal with it (it took more than 300 chapters to confess my love). After dating, there is no sweet love. I am sanctioned by various marriage contracts. The background setting of the Lin family has no existence. In my opinion, I read more than 400 chapters, all of which were copied from the book and pretended to be a slap in the face. As for love, don't think about it. They also deliberately smeared Kudo Shinichi (who is worse than a passerby in the fandom). They were all part of the narrative or to highlight how awesome and handsome the male protagonist is, and how good the female protagonist is. The full text of the main interaction may be less than one-tenth, and the key point is that there are many watery words. I was convinced that I could continue reading. The character creation is too poor, and the setting of the male protagonist is still very contradictory. He is afraid of being robbed when chasing a female protagonist (the male protagonist is set in perfect shape). This setting is scary. I am not confident and speechless in the book, and there are too many similar contents, which are not consistent with the label of the book. Don't read it unless you are free. It is worse than a bad book. There are too many problems that I won't mention later...

Unicorn!

It would be boring if the cps of Shinichi and Xiaolan were broken up. It can be said that this pair is the true love among true loves. Xiaolan has been able to wait so long for Shinichi. During this period, Sonoko also instigated her to find another man (although this was just a joke between friends or just out of concern for her friends), but Xiaolan still chose to continue waiting But such a true love broke up at the drop of a hat? Xiaolan's dedication to Shinichi is nothing in Xiaoshuai's opinion, and can it be dismissed with just a few excuses?

Finally I want it! Plum! Ya! Forest!

I don't know why, but I still prefer Conan and Maorilan as a pair and not split them up. So if the author really wants that, Xiao Ai is better 😏

I came here because of your introduction. I will be very disappointed if the protagonist gives up on the confused detective living upstairs in the end.

Jing Keai

I feel very unhappy when I see that the protagonist has been bound by a marriage contract and is being used by Nakiri Senzaemon. The system also issues tasks for the protagonist to participate in. It feels like the system is working with outsiders to trick the protagonist. Although the protagonist has benefits, it feels that the protagonist has no temper and is being led around by others, which is very frustrating to watch.

Why do I feel that the more Xiaoshuai writes novels, the more disgusting he becomes? Just compare this book with Saving Coffee. In this book, Li Yalin was dismissive of atoms at first and then became really popular, and then Erina Yukinoshita was the same. I was dismissive of it at first, but then it turned out to be really good. This novel is pure and upright, and it disgusted me. If I hadn't been a long-time fan since Invincible Redemption, I really couldn't stand this novel.

It's 1.38 Million words long, and my girlfriend has two beauties and she's still a virgin. Are pig's feet a eunuch?😒

It was fine at the beginning, whether it was Xiaolan, Qingyin, or idol, but suddenly the fiancée started; Okay, the fiancée setting is acceptable, the reason for the fiancée is to get close to the Lin family, The protagonist has repeatedly stated that he will not return to the Lin family and clearly refuses; He has a halberd with the Nakiri family and sternly refuses to marry his fiancée. Nakiri said that he just wants to give his wife away and not for the Lin family, and then the protagonist suddenly has no choice? ? ? Then Yukinoshita came to the door and said it was a sisters' and mother-daughter party. The protagonist agreed immediately after thinking about it? ? ? The first half of the co-authored book is about showing off both emotional intelligence and IQ. Once you gain muscle, it will all go to the washing machine. Oh, yes, the Lin family also has a setting: "Mr. Lin's thirteenth wife, there are countless unworthy aunts, which leads to civil strife in the family and only one single child is left." Then they arrange for the protagonist to have a bunch of fiancées. In the same way, the protagonist has a high-end company every day, a first-class zaibatsu, a second-class zaibatsu, and a Suzuki consortium, which is also considered a first-class family, so it is easy to refuse, "You are planning to marry me, how dare you rebel against the Lin family?" The Lin family is still seriously damaged, and there is only one single seedling left. Mr. Lin didn't show up, so he didn't show up. It dug a lot of holes. If you want to say that Shuangwen is illogical, then don't mix it with poison. I didn't dare to continue watching it after the snow fell. I could have watched it ten years ago, but I am really unhappy in 2021.

The third one made me quit because I was embarrassed. It is normal for the protagonist to postpone the rent for Mao Lilan. After all, the plot needs it. But the protagonist's performance really made me feel like some introverted child who has never seen the world. The kind who is less than ten years old. But how old is the male protagonist? He is over sixteen. , Damn it, the male protagonist usually doesn't go out, and has never been in contact with girls? He is scratching his head and face, and he is shy. You are belittling men too much. Is this how a man should be, so that women can be curious and feel safe? It seems that the author is a master of emotions, so knowledgeable! The above are my thoughts after reading Chapter 3. You can refute it, but please don't curse. Be polite and comment in a civilized manner. Thank you.

What can I say, it's just a bit of licking, and she's a woman and she agrees to any request.

Are the people who post saying they won't tear it down blind? The author has already said they will tear it down, but everyone is still saying they won't tear it down. If they don't want to read it, just don't read it.

A two-level reversal, now the author of m26 personally recommends Ke Ai, and the red and white roses on the poster represent passionate and pure love. After Haiyuan returned Yiduo to Conan (promised to confess his love), will anyone still say that Xinlan can't remove it? The author will help you dismantle it personally.

Xinlan's childhood sweethearts have been in love since childhood, so this can be broken down. Even if you have to demolish it, don't do it from the sky.

I just like watching the split between Conan and Xiaolan. If the time of the anime is not skewed, not one year has passed in the anime for decades. Otherwise, Xiaolan is really not worth it. Is there anything similar that splits these two CPs?

Mao Lilan, I agree to dismantle it. If I don't dismantle it, I just think Ke Xue's coroner's book handled it well. But after it was split, I felt that a single female protagonist would be more suitable. But after it was split, it felt very inconsistent to let Xiaolan enter the harem. Personally, I prefer the male protagonist Dan Xiaolan, which makes Shinichi so angry. Or the kind of coroner Ke Xue, where Xinyi is unemployed and Xiaolan is busy with work, and Xinyi is asked to raise children while Xiaolan pays off her debts.

Yi and Yueyue are just like 🐶, they have been plotted and have no temper at all. It is Yuanyue who seeks the protagonist, not the protagonist who seeks Yuanyue

The rest of this book is pretty good. As for the main characters breaking up the pairing of Shinichi and Xiaolan, I personally don't think it's a big deal. The author's pacing is very good and it doesn't seem too abrupt. Moreover, Shinichi is indeed not a good match. After he was drugged by the black organization and turned into a primary school student, he still can't restrain himself all day long. This shows what kind of virtue he had before he turned into a primary school student. This is the average intelligence of Conan's plot. Otherwise, everyone can see that something is wrong. There are also some places where the author's writing is not very good. For example, fighting, after all, this is the world of Ke Xue. It doesn't matter if the fighting power is stronger. The protagonist's fighting power is a little more exaggerated than Mao Lilan, and is about the same as Kyogoku, but there is no need to introduce the concept of "Qi Jin". After being baptized by the so-called "Qigong masters" in the past few years, if you introduce the so-called "Qi Jin" concept, people will not think you are cool, but will only feel embarrassed. Secondly, the process is short. It often involves the protagonist subduing the opponent with one move, without the thrill of fighting at all. If the author really doesn't know how to write about fighting, he can just go to Bilibili and find an uploader who explains movie kung fu movements, watch their videos, and just do whatever he wants. The last thing is the form of expression. Author, if you want to show the protagonist's fighting power, it is better to write that the protagonist holds his breath and concentrates and then uses a deliberate punch to smash the load-bearing wall and cause a two- or three-story small foreign-style building to collapse. It is better than slapping several locomotives approaching the protagonist with one palm. Yours is really too embarrassing. The second is to write about sports. I don't know much about tennis, so I won't comment too much, but when it comes to football, I am really about to dig my toes out of the 3rd room and 1st hall. First of all, the football golden finger the author gives to the protagonist is a title called "professional player", but this is too broad. It's a bit troublesome, being marked by more than two people. If you don't perform exceptionally well and can overdo it, there is basically no good way except passing the ball. The protagonist's over ten is too exaggerated. It's okay once, but it's a bit embarrassing every time. Moreover, football is a team sport. In order to make the protagonist show off, the author's way of shaping the protagonist's teammates and even Kudo Shinichi to be transparent people really makes people who watch football dislike it. Finally, there is the description of rewards. I don't care much about those assets, but the part where skills are rewarded. The author did not handle it very well. The protagonist has obtained many skills with the title of "god level" and "master level" in just ten days after traveling through time. It is too frequent, and it is too versatile, which makes people have no sense of substitution. If the author lengthens the cycle of obtaining skill rewards, and adds a training space when the protagonist receives skill rewards, the light effect will be much better. Finally, there is the world view setting. I understand that the author is preparing for the protagonist to have a harem, but how do you create a feudal dynasty? You don't think it's interesting that aristocrats can openly marry more than a dozen wives, while common people may not even be able to find a wife. Although the reality is like this, those big shots may have many lovers in private, but look at who dares to blatantly say that he has more than a dozen wives. Overall, this book seems relatively immature. As a refreshing novel, except for a small number of embarrassing and scalp-numbing plots, most of it is quite good.

In fact, the most important thing about this book is that the male protagonist takes a group of people to the service club to publicly disrupt the school's gaming club in the name of helping Yukinoshita Yukino's service club complete its commission. Ask Yukinoshita Yukino's service club to help the game club. Upgrade to create a game with game settings. The normal operation is for the male protagonist Linn to use his power. Let Yukinoshita Yukino. Helping game enthusiasts to upgrade to a game production club and produce games at the same time, Lin En did the opposite. Not only did he not help Yukinoshita Yukino. Instead, the game club originally formed by An Yilun was dismantled into pieces. At the same time, it did not help Yukinoshita Yukino to allow the service department to operate normally. Because there is something wrong with the author in this novel, My Youth Story, but this Japanese anime completely ruined it. It seems to be original, but it is actually destructive. Sabotage My Youth Story has issues with this Japanese anime. It also completely destroyed the Japanese anime How to Raise a Passerby Heroine. In this anime, Sanan Yilun worked hard to establish a gaming fan club. And this novel is about getting a good haircut for my novel. But it tore this anime into pieces. I really want to ask the author of this book what he wants to do. The biggest taboo in writing anime fan fiction is to protect aid to the greatest extent. You can create original works, but you cannot destroy them. One of the biggest problems in domestic fan animation novels has not been solved, and many people have not seen it. That was before these people wrote fan fiction. I dare to write this without the authorization of the original creator of the anime. It's because the other party doesn't know and can't control it for the time being. I would like to advise the author to think twice before writing. We have learned too many lessons in this regard. I once watched an anti-war drama and received a court summons because the background music did not have copyright authorization. The background music used in the anti-war drama was Naruto's song, which made the Japanese animation company aware of it and filed a lawsuit against it. A domestic animation called Space Adventure is no longer available. Why is it no longer available? The reason is that the Japanese animation company was sued for suspected plagiarism without authorization. Filming anime based on Macross. The last animation company that filmed Space Adventures is gone. The core element of the failure of this novel is that it only focuses on writing its own content without considering that the original work should be a combination of the two. Also, there is indeed something wrong with The Story of My Youth. The author of the original novel, Du Hang, is not a low-income person. Once I discovered the author of this book. His works were dismantled into pieces, waiting for a lawsuit from the court. Because this book may not have been authorized by Du Xing. There used to be an anime fan fiction website in Japan. Just messing around. No respect for the original author of the anime. Eventually the website collapsed. It was brought down by the excuse that the original author of the anime did not authorize it.

Your salary is indeed a bit outrageous, higher than that of active artists... The salary of Japanese artists is much lower than that of domestic artists. The most popular ones only have one million to several million yen, and the average active workers only have hundreds of thousands... You are so outrageous before you have even debuted... It feels like it is catching up with the country now. In the 1990s, Japan had just gone through the Great Depression. Hundreds of thousands were not necessarily high, but hundreds of thousands were as high as the sky.

In fact, I quite like it in the early stage when I only chased Xiaolan In the middle stage, Yuanzi was a little annoying

I shouldn't have voted for a finished book, but I really liked the book Neighbor Wife, so I'll vote for this book.

I don't understand 😱, why can the protagonist refuse the marriage contract? The protagonist's personality has never considered his parents and relatives. This is just for fun.

After Chapter 170, I obviously felt sick. It was the first time I felt sick after reading a novel in so many years.

Just accept all the two-dimensional women in the island country.

Is this book poisonous? Let's ask Shen Nong 😰😰😰

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It doesn't look good. I blush like a bubble teapot every time.