My Lady, Please Calm Down

I suggest the author sort out his thoughts. The starting point of this book is very simple. Chen Chu, a graduate student at Huazhong Agricultural University, traveled through a troubled time similar to the Southern Song Dynasty with a large number of modern crop seeds and certain modern appliances. This setting is obviously a farming routine. In troubled times, food is the most important thing. The protagonist leads a group of people to grow high-yielding crops and develop a commercial economy (big hotels, lipstick, women's beauty), and they will definitely become rich in the future. The problem is, these are troubled times, and it is impossible for you to live in peace and prosperity. Anyone who shows any signs of recognition will be targeted, and conflicts are inevitable. The small rich have a small conflict, and the big rich have a big conflict. When it comes time to fight with swords, it is inevitable to develop industry, steel and iron, machine guns, crossbows, cannons and machine guns. Tanks and aircraft are not uncommon in time travel novels. You have such an elite army, it is impossible to take sides. In the future, he will conquer all directions and unify the world. The whole book will be completed. Starting from thousands of farming-style authors, they basically follow this routine. This is not a question of whether the author thinks about it or not, but the logic can only develop in this way. You only have money but no soldiers, and Shen Wansan is a lesson learned from your mistakes. What is the problem for the author of this book? The reason is that the Shura field in the harem was set up too early, which led to a contradiction with the main development idea. The Shura scene in the harem is a scene that readers love to see. "I want to see rivers of blood" has always been the top ten comments on Qidian. The delicate and vivid harem Shura field can effectively attract readers. From the description of the Shura field in the harem, we can see the author's writing power to a certain extent. Many novels have a lot of foreshadowing of the Shura field, and they become cowardly when they really tear each other apart. From this point of view, the Shura Field in this book is very well written, with fresh and delicate writing style. However, the timing and extent were not right. Let's talk about timing first. The protagonist is going to be the founding leader of the country (I can't tell yet whether it will be an empire or a republic in the future. I think it may be similar to a British-style parliamentary empire). Since ancient times, the success of the founding emperor has depended not only on his own conditions, but also on the support of his harem. Empress Yin Lihua of the Eastern Han Dynasty, Empress Changsun of the Tang Dynasty, and Empress Ma of the Ming Dynasty are all outstanding representatives. Running a family is like running a country. How can the husband have the heart to work hard outside when the house is restless? The book has now written more than a hundred chapters, and the head of the harem can only be Zhao Maoer (there is a hint at the beginning, Widow Zhao mentioned that a fortune teller said that Zhao Maoer has the image of a queen). Then the author arranges the conflict between Cai Hua and Zhao Mao'er twice in a row in Chapter 94 and Chapter 98, which is a bit in conflict with the main plot. The Cai family is one of the three major local forces. The protagonist has already made good friends with the Ximen family, and if he contacts the Cai family, he will basically be able to control the county and develop slowly in the future. This is the land of Longxing. How can I build a strong relationship with the Cai family? Just rely on economic cooperation? This was never the case in ancient times. If they really want to form an alliance, marriage is the only option. When your daughter marries you and gives birth to your child, and you have blood ties, you are considered a family. Lu Taigong of the Western Han Dynasty gave his daughter Lu Pheasant to Liu Bang and gave birth to the prince (Emperor Hui of the Han Dynasty); Qi Taigong gave his daughter Madam Qi to Liu Bang and gave birth to Zhao Wang Ruyi; Liu Xiu of the Eastern Han Dynasty, his wife Yin Lihua voluntarily gave up the position of the head wife in order to gain the support of the Guo family; Li Shimin was able to seize the throne from the Xuanwu Sect because of the contribution of his wife, the head of the family, Sun; Zhu Yuanzhang was able to raise an army because his wife Ma was the adopted daughter of the commander Guo Ziyi. This was the case in ancient times. Only when your daughter gets married and becomes a family will she be willing to fully support you. Therefore, if the protagonist wants to start a rebellion, the support of the Cai family is indispensable in the early stage. Cai Hua is a woman with a poor reputation among the people, and it is not easy to get married. It is reasonable for the Cai family to give her to Chen Chu. The problem is, since Cai Hua will marry Chen Chu sooner or later, but the author deliberately depicts the conflict between the two, how will the protagonist develop smoothly in the future when the family is in trouble? What were the founding emperors in history like? Look at Queen Yin Lihua of Emperor Guangwu Liu Xiu of the Eastern Han Dynasty, Queen Taizong Li Shimin's eldest grandson, and Queen Ma of Zhu Yuanzhang of the Ming Dynasty. None of them ruled over the Sixth Palace. How could there be any favorite concubines who refused to obey the Queen's discipline? According to ancient etiquette, the queen can punish the concubine with a stick. Liu Bang is special because when he met Madam Qi, his parents and wife Lu Fei were captured by Xiang Yu, so Madam Qi had no opponent at the time. And when Lu Pheasant was released by Xiang Yu, she had to accept that there was another woman beside her husband. Even if the two women don't get along well with each other at this time, Xiang Yu's defeat has been determined (it was already time to release Liu Taigong and Lu Pheasant to the Chu-He-Han Realm Covenant, and Xiang Yu has been going downhill since then), and it will not affect Liu Bang's unification of the world. But author, look at what time it is now. Chen Chu now has a village defense team in his hands. The only one with some martial arts skills is the big sword who just joined. With this strength, he can also open a Shura field. He is afraid that his family fortune will decline slowly, right? If he wants peace in the back house, Cai Hua has to change his temper, but how is this possible? Moreover, you are used to using Shura Field to attract readers. Once there is no Shura Field, readers who are used to it will find it boring. Let's talk about the level of Shura Field. I can understand that Cai Hua deliberately suppressed Mao'er's momentum in order not to lose to Mao'er in the future. But suppression must be measured in a certain way, and the author clearly has no sense of measure. Mao'er is such a shameless person that even Chen Chu wouldn't let Mao'er cook for her because she was afraid that others would say she was lazy. A person who values ​​honor and integrity was so humiliated by Cai Hua twice that he made her cry in public. Do you think Mao'er doesn't hold a grudge? If you make fun of others over and over again, will you be able to pass by just apologizing and calling me sister when you come in? And with Cai Hua's character, she won't cause trouble once she enters the house? Even if the cat can tolerate it, how can the grown-up tiger head and the cat's future children also tolerate it? Author, how do you think Mrs. Qi died? You can do whatever you want when Liu Bang is alive, but how does it feel to be a human pig after Liu Bang dies? Do you think it's because Empress Lu is jealous? But there isn't only one Mrs. Qi in the harem? The future Emperor Wen of Han's mother, the Bo family, lived a good life. Her son was named the acting king, and she was named the acting king and queen mother by Empress Lu. She was the queen of more than ten thousand people. She was also Liu Bang's concubine. What do you think of Empress Lu's treatment of the Bo family? Do you dare to say that Queen Lu cannot tolerate others? In history, Empress Lu was a talented and strategic figure who was respected by all the officials. The siege of Baishan Mountain was not solved by Empress Lu adopting Chen Ping's suggestions. So, if a person wants to die, he must seek his own death. The current dynasty is similar to the Southern Song Dynasty. Cai Hua is also well-read in poetry and books, but has no understanding of the fate of Madam Qi in the Han Dynasty? If Chen Chu becomes emperor in the future, Mao'er will definitely be the queen. When Chen Chu dies, you can just wait to become a human pig. Zhao Mao'er was able to burn down his own home at the age of fifteen. He followed Chen Chu without any regrets. If he doesn't make you a pig after Chen Chu dies, he will be sorry for the fire he made back then. And Chen Chu's behavior in these chapters is also very weird. Mao'er is your wife, Cai Hua is not married yet, she is just your business partner, there is a difference between closeness and distance. Now Mao'er was made to cry by Cai Hua. Chen Chu actually didn't react at all. He just watched his wife being bullied. In the end, he smiled bitterly at Cai Hua and said, "Why bother provoking her?" Do you think this sounds like what a husband would say? The key thing is that it's in public, everyone is looking at you. You can't even protect your own wife, how dare others follow you with confidence? You said that the Cai family is very important and cannot be offended easily? Then if you meet a more important noble person in the future, can you offer the cat and tiger head for the noble person to enjoy? Is this still a human being? I guess the author may be a woman, thinking that if the protagonist has money, technology and strategy, many people will follow her. In fact, this is purely wishful thinking. In any uprising, faith and the courage of leaders come first. Tell me, during the Nanchang Uprising, did we have money, high technology, or strategy? Chen Chu's performance was disappointing. He had no courage at all and was not like a founding king. A person who can't even manage his family wants to run a country? So I think this book will be very contradictory later on. If Cai Hua changes her temper, she will no longer be Cai Hua. But if everything goes crazy all day long after moving in, the Chen family won't look like it's a big deal. Unless one of Mao'er and Caihua dies, then the book will be meaningless. Therefore, most authors don't dare to use Shura Field. It's not that they can't use it, but that it easily conflicts with the main plot. From this point of view, the Shura field of this book starts too early and is too deep. I am very curious about how the author will end it in the future.

In fact, the vast majority of male authors of online articles are in their 20s and have little life experience. Most of them have just left school. Their understanding of women is limited to the content of physiology classes. Everything from the makeup to the speech and behavior to the psychological activities of the heroine are all made up in such a way that they can't even be copied correctly, so it's better to write less.

I hope the author will not be influenced by those who call for a single female protagonist. In ancient times, it was still unscientific to have a single female protagonist.

Support multiple female protagonists😍

The three main heroines of this book, Zhao, Cai, and Yu, are very clear, so in the end these three have relatively complete endings, which is good, but other than that? Due to Chai Yuanyi's character, it was reasonable not to accept her in the end, but what about Hutou? She was invisible for a while in the middle period. In the end, the girl grew up and there were several chapters about her relationship, but why did she devote herself to education in the end? Brother, if you want to write about women's independent progress, aren't the examples of Ding Jiao and those female students enough? Forget it if you don't grasp the supporting role of the eldest son. What does it mean if you don't explain the tiger head at the end? Is it okay to even mention it once? Do you like this feeling of incomplete beauty? I thought you were listening to the readers after you wrote the extra chapter about Yunong, but in the end you ended up writing the male and female protagonists to death (even though they died of natural causes). You are writing a male harem story, so you know your position, bro. You can avoid the death of a girl or a girl if you can. I really like this book, and I wrote so much because of it.

This emotional drama was really poorly written. The mistress dared to show off her power to the principal wife, and was slapped twice in the face in public! Where does this self-confidence come from, and you plan not to enter the door for the rest of your life? The protagonist is also a SB and does not protect his wife. What does he want to do in the ancient environment where reputation is important? It is suggested that the author should either write Cai Sanniang to death directly, which is better than being retaliated to death by his wife after entering the house! Either let him be obedient to his real wife, not the lighthearted way of apologizing directly, but the kind of swollen face in public, otherwise this problem will not be solved! Don't say that a real wife should be generous, and don't persuade others to be kind without suffering others' suffering! 🤓

I only recommend one female protagonist, and one more would dissuade many readers.

If the hero's brother also has a harem, can't we just mention it in one stroke? Even if a supporting character has a harem, he has to write an emotional scene.

Cai Hua's portrayal was so good. The extra chapter really shouldn't have written about her death. Cai Hua, a person who loved her clothes and was beautiful and unparalleled in splendor, got older in the extra chapter. She had wrinkles on her face. When she returned to the palace, she saw the hero sitting at the door waiting for her. She still smiled and ran over to joke with the hero as she did when she was young in the first dozen chapters. Then on the next page, the hero died of old age. On the next page, Cai Hua spent six years alone and dreamed that the hero died of hunger strike. There is really no need to write it down here. The extras are supposed to be about giving out sweets, not writing about this.

I only recommend having more female protagonists. If you omit even one female protagonist, you will have to dissuade many readers. Brothers, do you think I am doing well in studying single-female novels?