Comprehensive Comic: Starting from the Soul Society and Cutting Through All the Worlds

... Growing too fast, mainly because the explanation is not clear. When he first appeared in the Death God World, he had only the strength of Shijie. On the side of Seireitei, please note that it is not the current world. Two years later, when he traveled to the other world, the first BOSS he fought would cause Sora to be released. He only applied a patch to kill monsters and upgrade, but the second BOSS would It's an instant hit. It's not that the protagonist can't be awesome, but he doesn't know why. You can understand the plot behind it even if you appear invincible. If you want to write a long story, it will become a mutation - I won't comment on the plot. I can't remember the details of the Death. I didn't watch the uncle's episode, so I try to understand it as written by the author.

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Everything else is good except that the main character is a eunuch. I can't stand it. It's almost 360 chapters, and someone is trying to force me to be a eunuch. It reminds me of the fear of being dominated by the eunuch main character for more than 3,000 chapters. There are many passages where female characters receive benefits, but every time I just look at them, like a real eunuch. I have been in the world of Death for more than 100 years, and I have clones that have gone to so many worlds, and I have different confidantes, but I just dare to look at you. It is really worse than an eunuch. Eunuchs still have hands, but you have nothing but your eyes.

Is this author wrong about all the original settings of the world? The God of Death has the wrong personality, his uncle got the timeline wrong, and he didn't know that the Dragon Ball Combat Power Tester has communication? I have been waiting for Vegeta for two years. Why is it one year in the original work? Because Vegeta heard it, but you can't hear it now? Return Raditz for one year and another year. You have been carrying the combat power tester for the past two years. Do you know that the king always pays attention to the Saiyans? The king came from the universe when you asked to return the Dragon Ball wish. What you will wait for in two years is not Vegeta but the king. And Raditz is not a lower-level warrior. He is a serious upper-level warrior, but he just doesn't work hard the day after tomorrow.

You still have the nerve to say you love the God of War purely? It's just a color batch. They say they have a good relationship, and they claim to be pure love😥 It's better to just treat it as a sex scandal and kill the whole world with one person's power

Brain storage place, put your brain here before reading a book

Looking at it now, this book is considered good among all the people in the world. It is a book that saves the lack of books. There are two poisonous points. One is that he is too kind. In the one-punch plot, he was almost killed by a tornado. In the Death plot, he was ambushed by the masked army and had a bad attitude and killed him. Ichimaru Gin made fun of him, but ended up being as lose-tempered as a sandbag. The second one is eunuchs. There are so many women but no one dares to do it. The author doesn't know how to write emotional lines, so he doesn't have to write them. There is no need to say that he has a lustful heart but not a lustful courage.

What a boring book. It's not what the author thinks. Isn't it better to write a TMD clone flow instead of a comprehensive manga flow in a down-to-earth manner? You have to add some fireworks, right? Or you'll feel uncomfortable if you don't say a few words.

The protagonist's head is caught in the door. Choose magic immunity. If you have powerful talents, bloodlines, artifacts and other good things, don't choose this crappy thing. The protagonist doesn't know that magic immunity can be obtained by raising your strength to a certain level. And there are many magic items or potions in the magic world that can do the same.

Obviously I have enough strength to not change the plot for fear of this or that, but I really just follow the original outline as an outline and keep adding more water. In daily social interactions, I even see girls cheating on me, that kind of guy who still pretends to be stupid and looks young. Even though there are so many chapters, the world is still adding water. The whole plot can be summed up in one sentence: What use do you have?

You can create a protagonist who is an unintentional womanizer, or you can create a protagonist who is a stud. But the main character is written with some charm! The protagonist you wrote is so wretched. If you like her, chase her, and be together without being coy. If you don't like it, just make it clear. I was afraid of being reviewed by Qidian, so I wrote in a vague way.

I remembered why I deleted this book in the first place. It was because there were too many words and the writing was not concise enough. I am the kind of greedy author who can't help but write a lot as soon as it is mentioned. This author has proved one thing. Although he spent a lot of pen and ink, the character creation and plot are In fact, it has no real role in foreshadowing the plot. He just simply wrote a lot. He can write a whole chapter about an invitation, an action, or a skill from various angles without repeating the same thing. In a sense, he is also a genius, but he has not found the right direction for his writing.

It's really verbose, telling one thing over and over again several times.

I came from QQ Reading, and the content is okay. The protagonist's character is a bit soft, which is not very likable. After finishing it, I thought that the protagonist and the author must have a sexual dysfunction.

The seemingly invincible strength is actually not that good. Not to mention being on par with the boss, the result is not as good as the plot characters. I am not saying that the writing is not good. I feel that there is not much difference between having a protagonist and not having a protagonist. There is no breakthrough plot.

If you don't like the heroine, what's the point of breaking the CP? The plot and protagonist are set up like this, and after taking advantage of coincidences and then saying "You are not my type and I don't like you," is there something wrong with the author?

It was rated as boring. From the protagonist to the plot, there was nothing new. There was nothing interesting in the first ten chapters. The start was uneventful for more than ten chapters. When I came to Uncle Isekai's side, Isekai took the initiative and chose a version with a limited magic exemption. What's the matter? Do you still plan to rely on magic immunity to be immune to spiritual pressure? After saying hello to my uncle, I somehow ended up having sex with a passerby from the Adventurer's Guild for a few chapters, which highlighted a weak point.

After seeing Hei Zhen coming out, I decided to abandon it. In addition, I decided to abandon some of the previous flaws. The male protagonist is incompetent. He talks about it all day long and dare not say that the writing is rubbish. Others can write this thing. I don't even dare to do it. I even wrote about the magic. A few words are missing, and I just didn't know the setting. The official setting of Joan of Arc is that she has no alte, because she is a saint, and there is no dark side at all. Hei Zhen was also created by the marshal himself, which means that no one can recruit Hei Zhen except Guda.

There was a big thunderstorm in the first different world, so the currency exchange rate should be changed quickly. Copper coins, not paper money, all rely on credit value. It also has use value. At the beginning, a person's meal ordered from any tavern would cost 1 million copper coins. How many bronze sets can these copper coins be melted into? If you say that the world is full of copper resources, the exchange rate is nothing. After all, readers do not know the local situation. But if it is so abundant, copper coins do not meet the conditions for currency circulation 😅. The rest of the writing is pretty good, but it's really uncomfortable to read here😣. I hope it can be changed.

I hate the clone flow the most, I don't even know who the male protagonist is

The protagonist has been thinking about Gou, but everyone in Gou knows that he can fight. Torturing Xiaobai in front of the rest of the 10th Division... Everyone knew that he was doing special training for others, but no one could tell where he went.

Is the main world a god of death? Or do you always travel back to the world of death occasionally?

Xianyuju finally started a Death God fanfic, come on! ! As a friend, I am here to send you my blessings as soon as possible, and it seems that we both like the fourth team and Unohana. It is fate...

First of all, I thought this was a time-travel flow, but this is a clone flow. Secondly, this author loves to use accidents to advance the plot. Finally, this author's descriptions of the characters and plots of each anime have certain deviations from the original works. To sum up, if you can accept it, just watch it.

Isn't it because Mao always uses the moves of the God of Death no matter what world he is in? Isn't it because the moves in other worlds are not strong?

The writing style is a bit hard to describe, I'm not saying it's a novice, it's just that, very unique.

The sea! ! ! You are all water! ! ! I suggest you keep your money and watch other things.

There are so many words about "water" that are useless, don't read them

I am actually the first one. Come on, author, I have chased you from one punch to the present.

Like the title, do you have any suggestions for the anime world? Forget it about Chinese comics. The main reason is that I am afraid that there will be no copyright or something...