Naruto: The Leveling Big Shot

The score of this book was unexpectedly poor. I don't know if it's because my poison resistance is too high or because people nowadays are too pretentious 😥

The White Fang incident has begun to cleanse three generations again! I don't believe that White Fang's death had nothing to do with the third generation! Maybe he was the one who took the lead! How could the shadow of a village not know about the rumors? Stop blaming Danzo all the time! The third generation is Hokage! Also a dirty politician! White Fang is not from the Hokage line! His reputation was too high and he had to be suppressed and killed. Maybe he even used Kakashi to threaten White Fang! Otherwise, a strong man like White Fang would commit suicide because of some rumors? Look at what the third generation has done! The only sapling in the teacher's family, the rope tree, went to the battlefield right after graduation! And without ANBU protection, he would be blown up to death with all his internal organs removed! Do you dare to say that there is nothing fishy here? Let's talk about the fourth generation choice. Can Minato compare to Orochimaru in terms of qualifications and merit? Don't talk about Orochimaru's experiments, the second generation will only be bloodier and darker than Orochimaru! ! ! I think the actual situation is that Orochimaru's qualifications, achievements, reputation and connections made the third generation feel threatened! Minato has different connections and insufficient qualifications, and his achievements and reputation are exaggerated (three generations of building momentum)! Three generations after Minato came to power, people came to listen to politics behind a curtain! As soon as Minato died, he couldn't wait to take over! He didn't even mention finding Jiraiya and Tsunade to succeed him! Needless to say what happened to Naruto! If the pig's feet hadn't turned black long ago! It's said to be protection, but haha! Growing up eating expired food, being called a monster and bullied every day, are you trying to protect me? Aren't you afraid that other villages will steal it? And there's always the Black Uchiha, if you could hold a bowl of water in check, would they want to rebel? Why are the Uchiha geniuses teasing me if one of them dies? (I remember a saying that Kishimoto originally wanted to make the third generation the final BOSS, but he wanted to change the character in the later stage. He couldn't change the character in the early stage and had to forcefully change the character)

As the title states, this is Xianyu's first book. It is certain that your writing skills are not good. If you really can't stand it, please leave silently. The author has a glass heart. If you insist on criticizing the book, please don't blame it if the post is deleted...

The title of the book is "I Don't Want to Be a Hero", and the writing style should have improved a bit...

What is there to see in the Holy Grail? Are the so-called heroes, kings, and battles in foreign history comparable to those in our history?

Reading the first few chapters, it's so embarrassing, the timeline is so confusing, Kakashi graduated at the age of 5, and the protagonist graduated a few months after him, so he's 6 years old! Aren't Kurenai and Asuma, who graduated with me, about 6 years old? They are such damn geniuses that they can take the graduation exam in just one second of learning? ? ! At that time, you had to study for at least 3 years!

It's not unreasonable for you to attack. Do you want Danzo to be the main target and final boss? If the pig's trotters fight escalates, will you keep the dog in the village? Your writing is fine, but the plot arrangement is too frustrating. There are so many things to fight in the later stage, but you still let Danzo survive for so long? How many words do you want to drag? Are you insisting that your strength is not enough yet and why don't you go out and upgrade? You are strong enough to kill the elders and Danzo together. The reaction of the third generation is at most to abdicate and make way for others. Readers need a sense of substitution. You let readers take the blame?

As soon as the author sees your book, he will know that you are a novice writer. You have made a mistake, that is, the protagonist is overly narcissistic. If you don't have a golden finger, you will be useless, and if you have a golden finger, you will be crazy about showing off. Old authors don't know how to write. They can write that the protagonist will strive for self-improvement even without a golden finger, and he will not blame God. People, try their best to become stronger, and the parents of the protagonist generally sacrifice to heaven. Even if they don't sacrifice to heaven, they will not make the protagonist cowardly and cowardly to their parents. Anyone who dares to write like that is not a newbie and will be thrown into the street. I know your skill in the part about Fu Shui. It's okay if you don't write that part. Once you write it, it will be a failure and a stain.

Can the protagonist be more stable? He goes crazy at every turn and is regarded as a lunatic. It's very sad to see it like this.

，，，！ ! ! ! Why don't you just let Obito use the 9 Magatama Reincarnation Eye to counterattack? It's outrageous, it's really outrageous! It's really outrageous that this kind of author would put aside a novel about Naruto.