Naruto: The Leveling Big Shot

This book's performance was unexpectedly poor. I don't know if my tolerance for criticism is too high, or if people these days are just too overly sensitive. 😥

The White Fang incident is starting to whitewash the Third Hokage again! I don't believe the Third Hokage wasn't involved in White Fang's death! He might have orchestrated it! How could the Kage of a village not know about the rumors? Stop blaming Danzo! The Third Hokage was the Hokage! He was also a dirty politician! White Fang wasn't part of the Hokage faction!

As the title suggests, this is my first book, so my writing skills are definitely lacking. If you really can't stand it, please leave quietly. The author is very sensitive; if you insist on criticizing the book and your post gets deleted, please don't be upset...

The book is titled "I Don't Want to Be a Hero," and the writing style should have improved a bit...

What's so interesting about the Holy Grail? Are the so-called heroes, kings, and battles in foreign history comparable to those in our own?

The first few chapters were so awkward; the timeline was such a mess! Kakashi graduated at age 5, and the protagonist graduated a few months later, so let's say he was 6! So, were Hong and Asuma, who graduated with them, also around 6 years old? Were they both such damn geniuses that they could graduate and pass the exam in just one second?! Back then, you had to study for at least three years!

Your decision to attack isn't without reason. Are you trying to make Danzo the main target and the final boss? The protagonist needs to fight and level up, and you're just going to keep him stuck in the village? Your writing is fine, but the plot is so frustrating. There are so many more fights to come later, why keep Danzo alive for so long? How many more words are you trying to drag out?

The author knew you were a novice writer as soon as they saw your book. You made a mistake: the protagonist is overly narcissistic. He's useless without any special abilities, but he's obsessed with showing off when he does. Experienced authors wouldn't write like that.

Can the main character be a little more composed? He goes crazy all the time, and people treat him like a lunatic. It's really frustrating to watch.

This author has absolutely no common sense about Naruto. Asuma, who had only been in school for a few months, defeated Obito, who used Fire Release, with Body Flicker Technique! Hahahaha, that's outrageous!!! Why didn't you just have Obito counterattack with his Rinnegan? It's absurd, truly absurd! It's ridiculous that an author like this is writing a Naruto novel.