Starting by Becoming Lord of Monsters

I'm subscribing for 100 points just to complain about the third chapter of the Golden Chapter. It's not like you're being poisoned at the start; seriously, you could have just used an alternate account and charged in directly. I'm genuinely baffled. It's like there's a terrorist attack, the police cordon off the area, and you come in saying you know about it with machine gun fire.

Does this picture deserve a refinement?!

There's a reason this book received such poor reviews. It's full of rambling, the power levels are constantly wrong and confusing, and there are one flaw after another. How could you write such a good subject like this?

The protagonist's stance feels completely untenable! He's neither human nor ghost, a traitor among monsters.

Later in the story, the protagonist's allegiance to the real world collapses; you either side with humans or demons. However, the protagonist initially helps humans kill demons, then later helps the demons kill people. Don't argue about good versus evil. This is a racial war, and innocent people are bound to be involved. Eventually, the killings become driven by hatred, not good versus evil.

From the moment I started writing Journey to the West, I could clearly feel the declining popularity. I thought the first few worlds were alright, even the filler parts were acceptable. But starting with Journey to the West, it was a complete departure from the story.

I'd venture to guess that this book has already been sold to a studio, which is why they're dragging it out like this. Well, I guess I'll just have to wait until you finish it and then I'll let you know and celebrate! 😅

I don't know why, but I always feel like I've gone off-topic. I was full of expectations when I first saw this topic, but they all fell short in the end.

The subject matter is good and eye-catching. Unfortunately, it has too many flaws. 1. Contacting the police to fight monsters together but then claiming you were forced to show off. We like to show off in public, but we don't like deliberately showing off and then saying you were forced. That's a bit sleazy.

The world-building of the main universe is terrible, and the introduction of the gods is too sudden. It feels like the protagonist's power increased too quickly, forcing him to have a rival, but the ending is poorly written. There's no sense of crisis at all; the biggest crisis is just the backlash from the evil of this world, which is forcibly exposed, likely driving away the few readers they have left. They've ruined a great opportunity.