Starting by Becoming Lord of Monsters

I ordered 100 points just to complain about the three golden chapters. It's not a poison at the beginning. It's really yours. You can even open a vest and go straight up. I'm really confused. You are like a terrorist attack and the police blockade. Then you come over and say that there are machine gun fires. Then the police see you as an ordinary student. I don't have the ability to kill people, so I think you are not suspected. Then you said that the terrorist attack was too deep and you couldn't control it. Then you looked at the unrecognizable corpse without changing its expression, which shocked the police. They thought you are so nb, you must be a big boss who can solve terrorist attacks... 😅

Does this picture deserve a refinement? !

It's not without reason that this book is criticized for its poor performance. I won't talk about a lot of nonsense. The combat power is always written incorrectly and confused, and the poisonous points are one after another. Why can you write such a good subject like this?

The protagonist's position feels completely untenable! Neither human nor ghost, traitor among monsters

In the later period, when the real world position collapses, you will either side with the human race or the demon race. But the protagonist first helps humans kill monsters and then helps monsters kill people. Don't tell the difference between good and bad. This is a race war, and there must be innocent people involved. Killing to the back can only be due to hatred rather than good or evil. If you really want to follow the Holy Mother style, just occupy a hilltop and show neutrality, so that anyone who still comes to challenge can be killed with confidence.

From the time I started writing Journey to the West, I could clearly feel the loss of popularity. I thought the first few worlds were okay. Even if there were water parts, I could accept it. But when Journey to the West started, it suddenly became a drama, because this is a second-generation Japanese manga novel, and there are many Chinese comics. The reason is that I can't write it, but I really didn't expect that Xianyu would write Journey to the West all of a sudden, and I felt a little bit like letting myself go. The world of Journey to the West keeps digging holes, and I have the illusion that I will send You Dou to the list of gods, but the disaster of becoming a god has passed, and then Later, I had the illusion of writing Sun Wukong to death in this world, and then found six-eared macaques to replace him, helping Monk Tang to obtain scriptures from the West, and A Chinese Ghost Story's chaotic journey to the west, etc., Which gradually went against the original intention of writing this book. The recommended episode is not to dislike him. I dislike him because he is not popular enough, but instead of doing that, it is better to finish the novel early and save time for the next novel. This is much better than writing a few chapters or one thing for a fighting scene, writing several chapters with fewer words than before, and still writing without stopping. It will at least have a reputation.

I would boldly speculate that this book has been sold to the studio, so now I am dragging it on. Then I can only tell you when you finish it and pop the champagne😅

I don't know why, but I always feel like it's written crookedly. When I first saw this subject, I was full of expectations, but everything came to nothing later.

The subject matter is good and eye-catching. However, there are too many poisonous points 1. He contacted the criminal police to fight monsters together, but he said that he was forced to show off. We like to show our holiness in front of others, but we don't like to deliberately show off and then say we were forced. It's a bit tea-like 2, maybe the original intention was to have a natural and silly female supporting role, but the female supporting role turned out to be disgusting to death, weak and annoying, and she likes to hit the protagonist with a ball with a ball she just met. At first, he looked down on the protagonist and disliked him, but he still lingered afterward. The plot was cliche. He often wears a police uniform and goes to school to find the protagonist to disrupt order. He has no respect for the protagonist at all and only cares about himself. Readers responded many times that it can be worn casually. But because of her obsession with uniforms, the female supporting role only needs uniforms.

The world view of the main world is too badly set, and the introduction of gods is too sudden. It feels like the power of Pig's Knuckle increases too quickly, and the force of finding an opponent for Pig's Knuckle is not written well. There is no sense of crisis in the whole process. The biggest crisis is just the backlash of the evil in this world, and for this reason, it is forcibly exposed, which will probably poison the few readers away and destroy a good hand.