Don't Even Think About Capturing Me

The theme setting is really unflattering. The otome world set by the author is a female-dominated world. According to this logic, the monsters should also be dominated by women. However, the goblin also uses women as a reproduction tool, which is a bit disgusting. Goblins are inherently disgusting. It's better to write it as a pure heroine, because it's about the game world. In that case, you can also show off your appearance. I feel that this book would have been much better if she had been written as a normal heroine. Thinking about it, there is nothing more to say. This book has already written more than 100 chapters, and it is impossible to overturn the previous plot and start over.

Ee, it is indeed a self-titled article. Not much to see. After reading the introduction, I thought it was a cool novel for a female second-in-command, so I was really looking forward to it. But after reading a few chapters, it was just like that. It's not a refreshing novel, but it's also a bit aggrieved. The protagonist has to be pretty but not good-looking, and he has to be strong but not capable. I can't think of how the author wrote in the introduction, 'The most difficult man for female players to defeat'? , Such words. Why do players attack the male protagonist? I can understand a little bit if you want to write a male protagonist with incredible looks, etc. But you set the male protagonist to be simply mediocre in appearance, and even the female protagonist is accosted by a cowherd in just a few chapters. And if it weren't for the main character's mother's inner hints and hypnosis to the two sisters that she fell in love with the male protagonist, I'm afraid there would be no one except for the lower class people who would fall in love with the male protagonist I even think the author was thinking: It won't take that long anyway, and at worst it will stop him from writing a new book. My evaluation is unreasonable and not enjoyable. The author only writes what he sees. Half star⭐

As the only person in the kingdom who can create secrets, the entire institute combined is not as important as the protagonist. Even the latest scientific research results are based on the protagonist. Why should he enter the academy? The protagonist should not be provided with good food and drink, whatever resources he needs, and one-on-one tutoring from various famous teachers. This is just like the only person in the country who can build a nuclear bomb, but he has to go to college and get a Ph. D. Before he can enter a graduate school. Isn't this nonsense?

In a strange setting, the male protagonist in a female-dominated world is hit by a passerby with a ball. People will think that the male protagonist is eating the woman's tofu. In fact, the label of being a heroine can be removed, right? Just open a harem in an otome game instead

The details are so poor that I died from poison.

Well, the introduction was quite attractive to me, but the constant fighting at the beginning put me off. If you want to write a good fighting scene, don't write other irrelevant things. Fighting for three or four consecutive chapters made me leave disappointed after reading the title and introduction. Those who want to watch a fight will not come in after reading your title and introduction. Those who want to watch a female otome relationship strategy drama will leave after reading the first few chapters. This is a case of dissatisfaction on both ends. I hope my suggestions are helpful to you

The machinist profession that the protagonist worked so hard to get is given to the player with any given task. It's so cruel. Is this treating the player as a tool? Licking the player, right? The author doesn't know how to feel cool at all, and he will never let it go if he can dominate the protagonist. He gave up on it for all kinds of weird reasons.

What is this, childish writing style, childish brain circuit, childish plot, kill a wolf and write three chapters. . You can read it without thinking, it feels like you are reading a kindergarten child's essay.

Seeing the protagonist turn into a mechanic and die from poison is as dissonant as Iron Man using a laser to slay mobs in the world of swords and magic.

Today I read more than 40 chapters from the first chapter. I read many times during the course of the book that the author fell in love and said that his book was not good. Let me explain based on my own understanding. The first is a side topic. I think the theme of different worlds + male and female substitutions is okay, and there will be players coming in the future. But from the first chapter to more than 40 chapters now, there is no sign. The mother has not been found, and there is very little interaction with the sisters. The only impression I have after reading this book is that fighting is always fighting. Fighting, I have a story to tell. I clicked on this book to see the beautiful girls from another world come to pursue and conquer the male protagonist. The male protagonist dismissed it, and the female protagonists turned to Shura Field. But what I see now is fighting. I can only say that the audience is different, and it is difficult to retain people. If I didn't want to see the interaction between the male protagonist and his sisters, I would be satisfied. The second is that the plot is too slow and not attractive enough, at least that's what I think. The current main plot is to find the mother, but there is one thing to say, it is not attractive enough, and it is not as good as the big sister's appearance. Moreover, it is said to be looking for the mother, and there has been no movement in more than 40 chapters. Jing, the only clue is just a clue. The male protagonist took on a system mission, but he has not completed it yet, and his strength has not improved. The big monsters were all killed by his sister. At least from what I see now, there are more than forty chapters. The cool thing is that there are really few, and they are all fighting. Where is my love, love, love? The summary is: digress! My treasure. I came here to see the male protagonist of Bishoujo Raiders, not to see tadpoles looking for their mothers and sisters killing monsters instantly. I suggest the author learn from "The world of Otome games is very unfriendly to passerby characters"