Refining the Way to Immortality

Save money and make hay. It's not that I can't eat it, it's just that it's a bit choking. The pretentious writing style of a long time ago, but the setting of time travel and rebirth combined with the previous plot is a bit disgusting 🤢. After all, you think about it, you were seventeen or twenty years old before time travel, and after time travel, you experienced at least twenty or thirty years of life before you were reborn (if you add some factors of cultivating immortals, it will be more than twenty or thirty years). After nearly a year and a half of experience, you are not at all good-hearted, and you are still talking like a child. It has to be wordy, the routines generally have no highlights, and it is too awkward to show off to others, the writing is ➕1, the writing is average, and the resistance to poisoning is not high. I read a few chapters and couldn't finish it. I hope you fellow Taoists will do what you can, so as not to eat poison pills and die on the way. 🙄

Book Title: Refining the Way and Ascending Immortality [Tips]: This is a rebirth and time-travel novel. The protagonist Zhou Qing traveled to a different world in his first life because of his lack of experience and failed to become a strong man despite possessing a great treasure. He was accidentally reborn into the early stages of cultivation. The protagonist who possesses the treasure and experience in his previous life will definitely dominate the world with his treasure and foresight. [Seedling Rating]: As of the time of publication, the novel has written 137,600 words. On a scale of 10, I think this book can reach a score of 7. The main reason for deducting points is that the plot is not exciting enough. I personally feel that the names of the exercises are relatively unsophisticated, such as "The Picture of the Dragon Transformation of the Yuan Emperor", and the side of Biyou Palace expresses its power. I feel that I don't get the awesomeness of it at all. [Introduction to the work]: With the treasure, past life experience and the ambition to practice hard, I feel that the protagonist can get full marks for this start. The descriptions other than showing off are pretty good, but I haven't learned the essence of being a show-off yet, so the fight scenes and other scenes feel a bit uninteresting. For example: vigorous vitality and powerful force, which makes people happy and fascinated, and makes people want to continue. I feel slightly strange. The plot is getting good reviews, it is relatively clear and stable, and it does not make people feel dizzy while reading it. The character of the protagonist tends to be a hit-and-run character, a slightly domineering type. Book lovers who like it can read it. After the trial reading, I feel that it is a non-toxic novel with a stable and slightly refreshing plot rhythm. Book friends who like a smooth start can read it. [Introduction]: Not stained by the mortal world, go to the mysterious road, refine the Tao and become an immortal while lying in the moonlight. The reborn Zhou Qing holds a rare treasure, enters Xuanmen, ascends to a high position, practices Taoism and seeks truth, competes with the world, and embarks on a path to immortality. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}{"TopicId":"865669143700766720","TopicName":"Qi'an's Sao Wenlou"}

Finally opened a new book. Waited for a long time. . .

After reading eight or nine chapters, I found the writing to be okay, but the plot to be weak and frustrating. The protagonist is inexplicably suppressed by the teenage supporting character from the beginning, and all the adults in the family are dead? Are adults too short-sighted? When recruiting people for the Dharma Conference, don't we only recruit one person from the Zhou family? Isn't it necessary to suppress others from the same clan? Jealous of the virtuous and capable, Yingying's stubborn character conflicts with the achievements of the supporting characters mentioned in the article, and is incompatible with the entire world! Written in this way, the plot is only suitable for writing about historical settings of small families!

It's inexplicable to watch! With such good qualifications, why are you still competing within the family? I went to a Dharma conference and wrote dozens of chapters without explaining clearly what the restrictions were, so I just fought there. It looked like a two-for-one who was pretending to be a scheming bitch.

After reading the free chapters and table of contents, is the protagonist a vibrator? He vibrates others everywhere.

The author of this book has a criminal record. He used to have a trumpet account and wrote Dao Zheng Feng fan fiction. Then many chapters were directly copied and pasted. The most important thing is that the final book was immediately removed from the shelves. This book has seen 70%, and there are a lot of meaningless hydrology. So, please be careful!

The Golden Finger Creation Pond, the proper Yin-Yang Avenue and the Five Elements Avenue. Even if you don't choose the True Sect, you can't choose the Fool Sword Sect. Instead of picking up sesame seeds to quench your thirst for watermelon?

Is it fun? If you like crazy water, the upper limit is waived!

I really don't understand the author. I like both Chunyang Avenue and Rebirth in the Mythical World. Although there are occasional mistakes and a few pitfalls, the overall writing style is delicate enough and the plot is quite attractive. I feel that it ranks among the classical fairy tale books I have read in recent years. What? I started to get crazy when I read this book (I read the Hydra book from the beginning, but it didn't appeal to me, so I didn't read it. I heard that it was a slut later). The first 100 chapters were pretty good, and then I started to get frustrated. At chapter 200, I comforted myself. The writing is still there, and I can still read it. After reading chapter 300, I became more and more angry, Che Luoluo. I can say this over and over a dozen times. A sect contributes merits. It's the same sentence over and over again. The key is that it still doesn't reflect how precious and rare it is. The writing style is gone, and only water is left. A green pond of creation is such an awesome treasure that it will take you to be reborn twice. I'll give it to you. Turning it into a power bank can only replenish mana, and it is said repeatedly that it is awesome and has endless magical effects. However, if you say that a drop of good fortune can be converted into a lot of mana, it makes sense. You can transform it into almost the same amount... How high is the quality of the mana you cultivate? Is it directly equivalent to good fortune? There are so many people practicing the same skills as you, and the quality of their magic power is about the same, so how big is your pool? I really persisted until chapter 343 and couldn't stand it anymore. The good impression I had accumulated on you from the first two books was completely lost. Goodbye.

Did you do it on purpose? Filter readers? Do you feel that what you write is right and the best, and readers don't care? That's awesome. Really, whoever is reading your novel is really being stupid. Come on, try to write the best novel in the world. You must be the best in the world.

The author focuses on the gorgeous words and embellishments, but the actual plot is not foreshadowed. There is no foreshadowing of the protagonist's strength. The plot of worshiping the sect, competing for the true biography, etc. Is not one step at a time. It is just mentioned in one stroke. Soon the strength is greatly improved. I really laughed at Qingyutai. The supporting characters are not exciting. The protagonist has no momentum at all. He is very crotch-stretching. Reading a book is like eating food and eating air.

In addition to story plot, characterization, and writing skills, writing a book also requires the concept of time and space. There is no sense of time, and the more you read, the more confused you become. There is no sense of space, and it is even more foggy. You don't know where the past and present are? Don't know where this is? It's better to abandon this kind of book that is purely filled with gorgeous words! Alas, I thought it was a good book comparable to Dao Zheng Zheng, but I didn't have the urge to read it more and more, so I gave it up...

Abandoned, bye bye. The author is quite good, but he only deceives old readers. It's really my problem that I can read it book by book. I won't read your book again. Authors like you who work against readers can survive. The starting point is indeed kind enough.

I feel so happy watching it. Every time I advance, I am shocked and amazed, as if I don't know that the protagonist is a genius. Every time I advance, I feel so awesome, so shocked, so invincible. Nonsense, literature is at its peak 😰

Pile of words. At first glance, it looks like a cluster of flowers, but upon closer reading, it becomes nothing more than an article.

There is too much focus on some superficial skills, but the important battle descriptions are relatively weak. Judging from the way the protagonist boasts about it during his training, not to mention fighting ten or even fighting across levels, at least he must be invincible at the same level. In the end, he always has back and forth with everyone in the fight. There are not many battles in this book so far, and there is still a lack of famous scenes that are truly devastating. It feels like CJB

As soon as I read this book, I knew it was a useless novel just to earn royalties. The difference between before and after it was put on the shelves cannot be calculated.

This book is better than the previous Journey to the West. This is not how you make money, bye bye.

The author's protagonist always works hard for a long time and sometimes even narrowly escapes death to level up, and his opponents always easily keep up with the same leveling up.

Why do you feel that this style is a bit hard to swallow? For an ordinary family that attaches great importance to Qi training, when you go to the library, the Taoist rhymes on the books will shine,? ! I quit and read the book. The genre was classical fairy tales. Why did it smell like fantasy? Moreover, the ancestor of the family didn't write anything about his cultivation at the beginning. The book started by crazily targeting pig's feet, saying that pig's feet were the strength of a faction that was gradually declining. I thought that no matter how declining the faction was, we couldn't confiscate the pills for pig's feet at the beginning. Are the relatives of pig's feet just for decoration? What does Pig's Foot's mother think? Pig's Foot's seven aunts and eight aunts, what do you think of the strength of the in-laws? This is an ancient and not a modern one-child policy. And the plot of taking the elixir and Zhou Qingyun felt really abrupt. Taking the elixir was really a life-and-death thing. Would people do such a mindless thing? Moreover, when I went to collect the elixir, I was told that the little handyman had secretly taken the elixir to line his own pocket. Can this thing be deducted? If you buckle, it will be directly exposed. And that Zhou Qingyun, forget it, I don't want to say it, it's too bad of you to think of the children of other people's families, and both of them have the surname Zhou.

A sect competition can be written so boringly even if it is so exciting. The author's level has really declined. He is too sophisticated and can't write a plot, right?

Hydra also killed eunuchs in this way. What's the excuse for being sensitive? This book is playing this trick again? A victorious eunuch, right?

Just blow up the corpse. Give me an ending.

It's been discontinued again, it's the second one

Ascend directly?

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