Reborn in the Mythical World

1. The writing style is sloppy. It should be a combination of text and white, preferably in key points, such as turning points, monologues, psychological activities and other places where readers focus on reading. 2. The context is blurred, and the story is told like a primary school student writing a diary. The clues, plot, and characters cannot be well integrated. 3. The structure is bloated, and some chapters are just stacking nonsense. Not only does it not advance the plot, but it makes the article look dizzy and confusing.

I feel like the author went a little awry. The title and introduction of the book gave me the feeling that "this is a novel in the style of a Chinese fairy tale", but the main text is not. When I read this introduction, I hope that I can feel the innocence, uprightness, righteousness, reciprocity between life and death, the promise of a thousand pieces of gold, and the unwavering loyalty of the characters in Liaozhai in the book. I hope that I can see the unique gods, ghosts, and foxes in Liaozhai in the book. It is not an upgraded adventure novel that is disguised as a fairy tale but is essentially the same as Dou Po Douluo.

By the way, why do some authors like battle scenes so much? Do you like them?

In the early stage, a group of female characters surround the protagonist, which makes book fans feel that this is a harem stallion novel. In fact, these are just passers-by. . . . Especially in this book, before his ascension, he was involved with many women in the mortal world, like a romantic, but after his ascension, he became a stranger. Moreover, the introduction of the book is completely different from the content of the book. Mythology has not been published and Journey to the West has not been published. It is thought that Nie Xiaoqian is the heroine, but in fact she is just a passerby who has appeared a few times. I feel like two people wrote Before Ascension and After Ascension. In short, I feel that the outline has changed a lot.

To comment, although the writing style is very good, the author basically writes blindly. He just writes wherever he thinks without considering the context. He is so excited that he can't understand it at all. The new book Nine-Headed Insect jumped to an unknown place after reading five chapters. You can't write blindly like this.

Chunyang Dao copied Dao Zhengfeng from Chunyang Dao Zhengfeng. With Dao Zhengfeng as a template, what I wrote couldn't go far. I think it's okay. As a result, I opened a new book and let myself go all at once. This book might as well have been promoted. I read dozens of chapters and just pushed through to the end. The protagonist is called Yi Shun. And the protagonist is not idle for a minute. This person has just finished causing trouble for the protagonist, and the next one comes immediately, sometimes in series. The protagonist is not idle for a moment, giving people the feeling of being hanging all the time, and there is no danger at all. Just like using a clipper to get a haircut, push it all the way, one wave after another. Moreover, Yin Shen has no weaknesses at all according to what you wrote. Even Qi practitioners and martial arts masters have been bulldozed by you. You started killing the gods when you were a child. Moreover, the gods found you guilty and had something to do with you becoming a scholar. If you become a scholar, you will immediately be exempted from the crime of murder? Moreover, it is said that gods cannot enter people's houses and will immediately kill them if they enter your home. Why do you go to the court to establish gods, and why do you ask gods to invigilate exams? The gods in your place have become worse than chickens. The rights you have in your place are just scholars, and people can become gods after their death. What about the forces in the Yang world? The whole world is about to be bulldozed by you. You push such a trivial article all the time, and you are not pretending to be a slap in the face, but you are still looking at it with a bit of hatred, and you just keep pushing it without saying anything. No need to show hatred.

Each chapter begins with a large section of scenery, and the author's characteristics are highly identifiable.

The author is Wen Qing, and a lot of useless modifiers seem annoying. A chaotic system is not promising. It doesn't make sense that the protagonist's life experience, so many awesome things, was killed by an old witch. Confucianism and Taoism are popular, and the world that has been playing with literature for tens of thousands of years will be surprised by a small poem. It's just the author's own pleasure.

There are four different works, with various settings cobbled together here and there. It seems that he wants to learn from the divine machine "Yang Shen", but unfortunately he is not as decisive as Hong Yi in killing, and he cannot learn the violent spirit of the divine machine. I wanted to write for a scientific examination, so I wrote a Wenzhaogong. When I want to write about a monk, it seems like a constant slap in the face, but it doesn't make people think clearly. He has an air of airs, but without his steel frame, he is always frustrated and unable to vent his frustrations.

The plot is really flawed. I can tolerate the clichés at the beginning. I can tolerate lowering the character's IQ in order to forcibly establish conflicts, but I can't tolerate turning the protagonist into a lunatic for the sake of the plot. An elder of a sect accidentally discovers that the protagonist's maid is a very good buddhist monk, and wants to accept her as a disciple (this arrangement is already extremely cliché). For normal people, this is considered a good thing. Even if you don't want her to leave, you want to make arrangements by yourself, show off your cultivation and talk about it, or you can be tough and do it. After all, you are also a person with a background. As a result, the protagonist chopped people up like a psycho. Inexplicably, he became enemies with a big sect. Later, he introduced that this elder was the son of some big boss, and he seemed to want to destroy everyone in his family. You are still cultivating Taoism. People who cultivate demons are more sophisticated than you.

I read one chapter and wasted a bar of electricity.

I am on the first floor, I am on the first floor, congratulations to Yunyan... The hard work of the past three years has finally paid off! 🤭🌹

If it doesn't work, I have to complain about it. Promotion requires foreign objects. It's really outrageous.

Not much else to say, the setting of this court is really stupid. There is no deterrence at all. Everyone dares to bully the students who have a good reputation. All the opponents have a backing and dare to attack the protagonist casually. There is no imperial court behind the protagonist who plays the imperial examination. The purpose of getting the honors is to become a master. There is a court, and the settings of the court are very strong. Students who have passed the exams are still bullshit. They don't dare to kill just any Mao Shen Yao Dao. What is the strength of the court? If the country is destroyed directly in this way, there is no centralization of power in the society of the sect family. This is not to argue with the facts. As long as you have a junior high school education and a brain that can think, you will feel that there is something wrong with this court, and it is not a puppet regime.

After reading a few chapters, I got off track. Not all stories about Liaozhai are about cultivators, so what's the difference between writing about them and writing about Xianxia?

The excessive pursuit of gorgeous rhetoric has ended up making the book completely different. One-third of a chapter is about scenery, one-third is mentally retarded dialogue, and one-third is watery content with no useful information. After reading it, people are confused and confused.

Yuanshi Cave is a really big cave. That's why it's named 😅. Goodbye.

It's over 50 chapters, and I really can't stand it anymore.

I don't quite understand the protagonist. He has just awakened his past life memories, and all kinds of problems come one after another. The bully went to the protagonist to trouble him because his son was frightened. According to my understanding, the bully didn't know that the protagonist was awesome, so he should send someone to arrest him! I came back and slowly figured it out. Later, the protagonist offended the goddess. After the protagonist recovered, he went to find the goddess. She took the bully's things and wanted to kill the protagonist again. It seems that the goddess is not a good person. Then the protagonist who offended the goddess is still alive or even better. Can we rely on the protagonist to at least have a trump card, or even an adventure! In the world of gods and ghosts, stupid people are almost dead. As for the goddess, it can be seen from the bully coming to invite the goddess that he is very afraid of the goddess, and the goddess failed to kill the protagonist. I feel that the first time I go to deal with the bully is to ask for "loss fees"! Then he ordered the bully to find someone, poison him first, set fire, and find a group of people to surround him. He is mortal, how can he hide? All this is based on the fact that there is no halo of the protagonist, and those who have the aura of the protagonist are forced to attract hatred. People sit at home, and misfortune comes from the sky. Where there is a plan, the worst is that the plan is successful, and the best is that the plan is unexpected, and the harvest is much greater than the original plan!

By the way, are there any novels that you would recommend that are not bullshit or useless? The protagonist should be strong-willed and not an idiot!

After reading a little bit, I found that... It doesn't taste that way. I suggest you learn Lanruo Xianyuan It's very boring to just play routines. For example, both parents are dead and the maid depends on each other. Evil guests come to the door. It's boring to upgrade, kill monsters and change maps like a running account. You have to inject your soul.

After fucking An Hongyu and Lu Qingqing, just ignore it and fly away, which is ruthless and unrighteous.

This book is written with a fairy flavor. It describes the environment of real immortals and heavenly immortals from a side perspective, which is very refreshing to read.

I'm exhausted and won't start a new book?

As soon as he saw the scholar fox demon, he immediately abandoned the book

Change your name. This is too low.