The Immortal Gourd

1. Firstly, the entry threshold for classical cultivation novels is quite high, requiring a certain foundation in Taoist culture. This prerequisite alone deters 90% of novice authors. 2. Classical cultivation novels often have several chapters without a main character, but this is to lay the groundwork for the story, unlike the main plot of "mortal cultivation" novels where the main storyline…

I think the completeness of the story is a very important criterion. Frankly, this book's performance is just so-so right now. The Xianxia genre is inherently difficult to succeed in, so it's better to treat this story as a stepping stone to gain recognition. Don't make it too long; after all, a long story with low ratings will be very frustrating for the author.

What is the main character doing? It doesn't look like a fish in the water, but rather like water next to a fish. He does things haphazardly and without any sense of priority. More importantly, he lacks any sense of order and acts on a whim. This is the first time I've seen this kind of writing.

The novel "Immortal Gourd" is well-written, and the characters and backgrounds are logically consistent. So far, because the plot text is too short, it's impossible to tell what material the sapling is made of. However, the feeling of "traveling the world with a sword" makes it worth reading.

The book itself is alright, but your rambling explanations, with all the self-talk and inner monologues, really made it difficult to read due to my lack of patience.

He doesn't have the innate air of a time traveler; he has a kind of indigenous vibe. 😂😂😂😂

Isn't this Akagi's game account from before his transmigration? Akagi is really good-looking. It's a pity the girl from Niryuan only got a minor role. The palace was built entirely by IT workers.

Born of a white bird? Born of a hundred birds! A toad trumpet?

Eunuch toad!!! And it even knows how to shed its skin!!!

The protagonist is written too frivolously... Like a petty thug.