Honghuang: I Am Hou Yi, an Ordinary Genius

Hou Yi, who was born a great witch, was written as a mortal, which is really awesome.

The biggest problem is that the prehistoric world is very big, and the protagonist's realm is too low. It feels like he has been brought down to the realm of cultivation, and there is no flavor of the prehistoric world.

Was Hou Yi an ordinary person? How could he still practice cultivation before becoming an immortal? In such a huge prehistoric period, you brought Hou Yi down from such a low level at the beginning!

Does this mortal witch clan change the basic settings of the prehistoric era? It's hard to imagine that the descendants of Pangu are mortals. What's the difference between the people next door integrating Pangu's essence and blood to play basketball?

The creatures who were born when the heaven and earth first opened were born sacred. Refining Qi doesn't feel like the dawn of time, it feels like cultivation.

After reading a chapter, I found it poisonous. Is it a low-end match? Look at the table of contents. It's extremely poisonous. I'm sure it's a low-end match! A good prehistoric story is written in the form of cultivation and qi training, and the novices are pecking each other! Good introduction and good ideas! There is something wrong with the writing! If you don't know how to write the opening chapter, you can refer to how to write the protagonist in other advanced prehistoric witch novels! In order to make the introduction smooth and the story smooth, you can write it like this For example, the lich dispute is starting to start, the great gods of the prehistoric era are becoming saints or Huaisheng, the situation is stable but the weird protagonist cannot be plotted Kunpeng wants to become a demon master, and he cannot be allowed to join the witch clan sooner or later. So he will join the demon clan sooner or later, so can't we create the demon clan characters in advance? (What kind of Japanese, Korean, English and so many characters from around the world can be processed with one set) Witch characters, dragon characters, phoenix characters, human characters, etc. Can all be used! The protagonist obtains the God of Food treasure. (The original God of Cookery has not yet been born or the protagonist is dead or the God of Cookery in the original prehistoric era is also low in strength (no way to obtain good ingredients) and everyone does not pay attention to the desire for food.) The protagonist announces the route of the God of Cookery in order to increase the internal discord among the demon clan and speed up the demon clan. Is it not possible to cause clan chaos? With the above ideas, which one is not allowed to play with money when you get treasure money? is it not allowed to play with the size and weight of the Qiankun ruler? You can win over the prehistoric saints and play with the infrastructure flow here! How come you can play it with a high configuration?

Let me take a look and see if it is poisonous?

Um, what the hell is Zhou Shan? Buzhou Mountain means a mountain without boundaries, and Zhou means complete. I have never heard of Zhou Shanyi. Where did the alternation of day and night come from in the prehistoric world? Day and night at least did not exist until after the Lich War and the shattering of heaven and earth. What year, month and day are you? There was an orthodox timekeeping method in ancient times, one dollar and twelve periods, and one period was 10,800 years. Change and rewrite your introduction.

It's unusual. He snatched other people's Taoist fruits and used them for himself.

The realm of great witchcraft begins with Jinxian and reaches the ultimate level of Daluo Jinxian.

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