Journey to the West Starts from Xian Qin

I read four chapters, all inner drama, it slipped away

You can't be less creative and write more plots

For the first time, I saw that the protagonist of the novel is a mortal who has never practiced cultivation. He despises the way of this saint and the method of that saint. I have never practiced cultivation and just want to find my own path from the beginning. It's like a college student preparing to start a business who dislikes the successful experience of Asia's richest man and will block his way to becoming the world's richest man.

The writing is really good. If you can write well, don't write if you can't.

A word of cause and effect kills me! ! ! ! Come on, anyone who reads this book will owe the author cause and effect!

Damn it, the left and right brains are fighting each other all the time

It feels like I'm fighting too much with the air.

Pure AI writing is mindless. To be honest, it's really stupid. It doesn't look at or repair at all.

Change the soup without changing the medicine, even if it is poisonous, there is no need to spend time waiting to read this book, just read the old book

What rubbish? I repeated one sentence over and over again. After reading two chapters, I felt that the protagonist had a lot of inner dramas, and all kinds of things were wrong. Then I took the exercises in the novel and you talked about the specific cultivation techniques in the novel... And then suddenly... I couldn't understand it.

Crazy and crazy, and then crazy again

I can only say that there are four different things. I keep saying to myself that if I am afraid of karma, I should not stop being immortal. If I want to be immortal, I must have a Taoist tradition. People as powerful as the Sanqing Dynasty have to be apprentices to the children of invincible luck. The protagonist can create his own skills. He does not worship the dock. He does not ask for shelter. He has no hair. He is afraid of calculations. If you are afraid of death, don't cultivate immortality. To cultivate immortality is to defy heaven. To cultivate immortality, you need to have karma. He is not a great god of merit. He is a reincarnated and blessed immortal.

I haven't finished the first chapter yet. I keep talking nonsense and all kinds of psychological activities.

There were so many typos that I couldn't stand it anymore, and the author didn't even bother to correct it. There was indeed a lot of inner drama, and it was too procrastinating.

It's so funny that a mere Turtle Spirit Madonna has the ability to take the protagonist through time.

Let's divide it into paragraphs, one big paragraph and one big paragraph. While describing the scene, we write about the inner drama. Can't we put the inner drama in single quotation marks and put it on a new line? Besides, there are too many inner dramas. One chapter is all about talking to oneself.

There are all kinds of conspiracies and calculations in the back, and then the self-talk goes around and around but the plot is not written.

Why did this garbage come out again?

An episode has more than 3,000 words, and the main character picks up a spiritual treasure. It's just a small amount of words, so don't overdo it.

The realm is too low, there are always various causes and effects

It's well written and the story is told well, but the words used are less "crazy"

Glanced at the table of contents. I thought it was written about pre-Qin Dynasty.

There was a dialogue at the beginning of the first chapter. I thought I could read it. After turning over the third golden chapter, Wo Ri, it was an explanatory text again, poison, poison, poison. .