Earth Fiend Immortal Lord

Aboriginal? 1. The protagonist sees the word Tongyou for the first time, and tries to figure out its meaning, but how can the son of Orion be literate? 2. A caravan comes to the village, and the protagonist talks to it, and he behaves quite sophisticated, so where does his experience come from?

The author's writing is good. I also have some humble opinions. Maybe it would be better. When you set up the plot for the following part, you don't need to write what will happen in the future. The foreshadowing should be invisible, and then the later part of the text will be compared to make it more powerful. For example, the protagonist's practice makes the star shine brightly.

The author is writing about Xianxia, ​​so he doesn't have to worry about the clichés of mindless novels. Xianxia should be written with a little more connotation for reference. Otherwise, he might as well write about urban flow, which is simple and crude without having to look up so much information.

Is the setting of the protagonist a bit extreme? I think it's okay to go out of the village to kill bandits. It's 10,000 times better than the Virgin. Even when you meet someone who is clearly not hostile to you, your thoughts are weird. For example, the xx sword sect is just here to test your qualifications. The protagonist is so angry because his sister has no qualifications that he wants to poke two holes in his neck with his sword, but they don't offend you.

The book is very good. It seems that there is no shortage of information prepared at first glance, and it has the flavor of a fairy tale. However, there are various battles, killing snakes, killing centipedes, and the Dragon King attending a banquet, but they just feel quite ordinary, and the skills have never been clearly defined, only the skills of protecting the Tao. He mentioned the realm, maybe because he was still a warrior in the secular world and had never met anyone in the immortal world. The next step is to go to Kyoto, Shouichi, it's time for Qingyang to appear. Great book, good luck to the author.

I finished reading... The book is not bad, but Pig's Feet is a bit expensive. I just go to find the thigh when I encounter something. Then the plot is: 1 need something, 2 so-and-so has it, 3 help him solve the problem before he can change it, 4 go online to find the thigh, 5 solve the problem, 6 encounter new problems, 7 continue to look for the thigh 😅 There is also the role of the role of Tianchong. I feel that Pig's Feet just knows that this person exists, and then it's over. What should be done is still the same, without any progress There is also Yun Qi in the latest chapter... Described... I went online to ask Du Du how to solve it, and immediately logged off after asking... What stood out was the speed😓 I never thought about solving it myself, it was just like a interception that even the big guys couldn't help me with. A Dou And: He left the good Golden Thigh Dao Sect Earth Sha Technique behind, and went out to look for opportunities, and even went to explore ruins to learn spells. It was obvious that he had not mastered everything he knew yet😅 To sum it up: I can do it too😎

The protagonist's strength improves too slowly. He always lacks mana. He only has cannons but no shells. As a legacy, the seventy-two techniques of Disha should be taught first, the guidance technique, lay the foundation first, and improve the basic strength and battery life first. It is unreasonable to teach other things first. In actual combat, it will only be used a few times.

Fellow Taoists, I looked through the comments today and found that some of them were very noisy. I deleted and banned them. Of course, only a few of them. The work is heavy-handed and difficult to adjust. I will delete it except for those who curse cereals. Some people asked very strange questions but I didn't delete them, such as questioning how much meat a child eats, how many miles the mountain road is, how far a bow and arrow can shoot, how to practice Taoism. Friends, this is a setting. There is nothing right or wrong. It is a setting. It is a setting in a fantasy fairy world. . After all, reading is just for leisure. Don't get into arguments or quarrels with others. Of course, first of all, I would like to thank most of my fellow Taoists for their support, your encouragement and opinions. There are a small number of Taoist friends who vent their emotions. Don't quarrel with other Taoist friends. You are welcome to vent to the author. If you feel comfortable venting, I hope you can save it and come back next time. Of course, mindless swearing will affect the reading experience, so I will delete it. Finally, thank you all for your support.

It can be seen that it is generally written based on the book "Seventy-two Transformations of Earthly Evil". Although the original work is very exciting, it has two problems. First, the sacrificial wine blurs the concept of realm, which causes the strength of the original protagonist Li Changan to fluctuate. Sometimes he fights corpse Buddhas, sometimes he fights evil dragons, and the strength reference changes. There is no intuitive feeling, and the advantage is that there is no feeling of upgrading from fighting monsters. The second is that the original book travels back and forth between the real world and the ancient world. Each story is a unit drama. So far, there is an internal connection between each unit drama, but it is not deep, giving people a slight sense of separation. The above two shortcomings have been turned into advantages by Jijiu's delicate writing style and exciting stories. So how to choose and balance will test the thinking skills of latecomers.

I finished reading it in one go and will update soon. It's just that the bastard's spirit is a bit powerful. It's normal for Lao Wang to take refuge, but Hu is a bit abnormal. The plot is so high-level.