Cultivating Immortality, Starting in the Vast Sea

You liar! I thought it was the "Canghai Kunlun Zhouliu Liuxu Gong" (a martial arts technique).

Author, you're forcing a conflict between cultivators and martial artists. It's like the Wei family feud—it was originally a grudge between two families. Why are you bringing in martial artists and cultivators? Can a quarrel between a British person and a French person be escalated to a national conflict?

It's too slow. I haven't even started cultivating immortality yet. Writing about independent cultivators is too difficult. I might as well write about a family-based story.

Now, to read a cultivation novel, you have to read "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality" first. Starting with a useless spiritual root was stupid enough before, but now starting with "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality" is just brain-dead.

Actually, writing about Dragon Ball would be more reasonable; aren't all those functions things dragons possess? And what about raising fish?

This can't even be considered a cultivation novel...

Speechless. They used to talk about how powerful the mortal Zhou family was, but once they've grown strong, they'll either wipe out your entire clan or at least kill off all the higher-ups.

I'm speechless. A while ago everyone was starting with useless spiritual roots, and now they're all starting with ordinary people? Do I have to read dozens of chapters of the mortal character transition in a cultivation novel? Are they out of their minds? They're already this useless, and they still want to seduce pure, innocent characters?

The early stages were slow-paced, and the cultivation levels weren't at the Qi Refining or Foundation Establishment stages, highlighting the difference between martial artists and cultivators. These points made it somewhat unbearable for me to watch.

The author should continue writing the story of the Sacrifice King; that one was really well written.