Honghuang: I Am Ziwei, Fabricating Myths

To be honest, I find it hard to accept that a Great Luo True Immortal is acting like a thug, robbing people everywhere. Isn't this just pure cultivation of the Tao, not cultivation of the mind? You can't use too many spiritual treasures anyway, so why take so many and plunder them everywhere? Is this what an immortal does? Are you just a simple-minded person who wants everything in a village?

Not good at all. Your portrayal of Hongjun is incredibly annoying. Relying on your high cultivation level, you snatch treasures from everyone, a vividly portrayed rogue. While it has a touch of the charlatan and immortal-seeking archetype, it's just a tiny bit; it doesn't capture the essence, leaving a disjointed impression. The writing is really poor.

The charlatans and the saints are in a state of panic, and the system of immortals surviving in the heavens—this is the true scale of the Great Luo Immortals of the Heavens.

It's obviously a gangster-turned-immortal-cultivation story; it has no immortal flavor whatsoever. It's just putting a fantasy myth on a gangland turf war—it's pointless.

I don't know what the author was thinking. Is "Ziwei" not as good as "Zixi"? I'm indifferent.

The author's novel appears grand and majestic, but is actually incredibly petty and hesitant, making it quite distorted to read carefully.

So many Great Luo Saints have died, what a waste! Their true spirits should have been protected, allowing them to reincarnate and be used again. Hongjun caused so much chaos, refusing to make a choice, yet preventing the protagonist and others from becoming stronger—isn't that being an enemy? He should have been killed at some point, otherwise the protagonist would become a Ninja Turtle!

Is this how a born saint behaves—a complete scoundrel? Stupid and low-class.

Originally named Ziwei, she changed her name to Zixi, which also means "purple sun." Isn't she just a pure-blooded sycophant of the sun, going from being the head of the three noble stars to being the sun's subordinate?

After reading "The Radiant Saint" and "The Charlatan," this book just doesn't feel very interesting.