A Honghuang Office Worker Just Wants to Retire Early

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The original setting is a bit interesting. But the plot fell apart a bit as soon as it unfolded... The first was the issue of identity. The first batch of innate creatures were all caused by you. In the ancient world view, no matter how you want to deal with such a big cause and effect, you must give an explanation. Whether readers will accept your explanation or not is still a question, but as a result, it has not been mentioned until now. The second one is the female apprentice that everyone talks about... It just feels like she's intruding. Others say it's pretty good, so I won't talk about it. Anyway, farewell for now. Let's see how it develops later.

What is it about? What is the use of the protagonist?

Most of them were persuaded to quit by the female apprentice. Now the author is writing a chapter every day. I wonder if he will become a eunuch.

The front is fine, but the back part really makes me want to complain. This female apprentice is really a poison 😅😅😅 I feel that this female apprentice is the author's code word for the number of words: If you want the number of words, you can do other plots. In the Honghuang novel, accepting a female apprentice is a poison. I can't bear it anymore and ran away.

I only read Chapter 26 and was persuaded to quit by the female apprentice. Well, that's it.

It's a bit boring. It feels like an invincible novel at the beginning, but when I read it, I found that it was a shrunken old man. Summary: I don't understand the relationship between Shuangwenshuang and Shuangwenshuang.

What the hell is Chen Chenchen again? It's disgusting.

I was attracted by the title of the book. It was interesting at first. The more you read, the more ordinary it becomes. The more you read, the more you will find that the protagonist is just messing around. Millions of years and a few dollars will pass by. The protagonist is still a little kid with a hesitant and hesitant character. He has difficulty in choosing. There is no growth. After so many years of Taoism, cultivation is to cultivate the mind. Millions of dollars will take time, and a pig will become as wise as the sea. It is not this kind of character.

Only personal opinion First, although this Dongwanggong is a tool man, he also has the identity of a time traveler, which is really a bit awkward and makes people choke. Those things that time travelers can do, wouldn't it be the same if you changed a similar system and sent it to the native Prince Dong? Anyway, you are the administrator, and he is a wage earner, and it has been more than fifty chapters since Chapter 8 and he is still alive, which is really uncomfortable. Secondly, the appearance of this female apprentice feels too sudden. No clues are given to foreshadow the story. The entanglement of cause and effect directly overwhelms it and then is discarded. Then the later apprentice still knows the future of the protagonist. It is better to meet the protagonist and discover the cause of the entanglement of cause and effect from her, giving her a reason for existence. Third, this Fengzu is too cheap. It's okay if she likes to dance. But when the protagonist suddenly appears, her first reaction is to bargain like a little girl, asking for a small apology gift first. This is just like Qin Shihuang fishing alone in the palace, and suddenly someone pops up and wants to discuss business with you. As a result, Qin Shihuang said you dared to spy on me and insisted on giving you a toy as compensation. Isn't this abstract? As the head of an ancestor, I can't see the power and strength in her being reflected. Especially during this war between the three clans, an unknown person breaks through and touches you. There is no sense of crisis or majesty at all. Having the name Feng Zu is more like a mascot. Fourth, this protagonist is too awesome. Except for Dao Dao, you are inferior to one person. A Dongwanggong danced for a long time and only received a slap. He did everything secretly. You can't be such a coward no matter how behind the scenes. And as a creature in the initial, first stage, you are still the one with the authority. The big bosses in the original historical trajectory are all yours, and they all owe you a share of cause and effect. You are afraid of being hammered if you take something from them. Anyway, you have magical powers, spiritual treasures and the cover of authority, they will not know who you are in the end. Of course, as I said in the title, it is just my personal opinion. If the author has an idea and dares to write it, he must be better than me. It is normal for the author to have his own thoughts. It is certain that I did not understand some parts, but there are indeed some things that I am not happy with. I hope the author can handle it better later. This introduction and the title of the book are the most attractive to me, but the reality and expectations are still different. I thought there was no doubt that the authority boss was behind the scenes, planning everything, like all living beings crawling, and finally changed from being under one person to being under one person, leading the world to upgrade, and planning for all the worlds. After all, there are Greece, Egypt, Cthulhu and a lot of mythical worlds to write about. In the end, they just wanted to retire and fish and drink tea, alas...