I'm in the Detention Center, and the Suspect Is Me

The first few were well written, but the one that imitated "City Lights" made me silent. First of all, the Internet at that time should not have developed to that extent. Another point is that the police will not gossip with you. When you see someone, arrest... There are not so many cumbersome things.

With this frequency of crimes, I feel like Shengzhang has to step down.

It has been poisoned. The first poisonous point: the author wrote a real-world mystery novel instead of Conan or a fictional parallel time and space. However, it lacked the most basic research on the criminal investigation department and public security organizational structure at that time, and it was completely empty imagination. An example is: public homicides have a great impact, there is no task force and no provincial support, but there is only one forensic doctor in the entire city? What's more, you can seek support from brother units; there is no sense of substitution Poison point 2: The reasoning method is as full as Conan's, which seems to be unclear, but in fact it is completely unworkable, and the power outage is outrageous; Poison point 3: the supporting characters are really Just like in Conan, I don't have the brain of a normal person 🧠 After three days of investigation, I couldn't even figure out why the power was cut off. Unexpectedly, I was shocked to death. In the iron-footed era of 2002, I didn't even check out all the suspicious persons, and the staff paid special attention to it.

Passion killing was a term proposed by the defense lawyer in the Yao Jiaxin case in 2010. Now, the author has not set it to 2002. At this time, jingcha is presumption of guilt, and it should be classified as murder at the beginning. The protagonist's use of the term passion killing should be questioned.

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I gave a reward of 100 and came to speak directly. I have read ten chapters. What should I say? I think the setting is good, but the ideas and writing are hard to describe. In the face of evidence, reasoning is vulnerable. Don't say that there were no criminal investigation techniques in 2002. In 1987, the Chinese police used DNA technology to solve crimes for the first time. With the police's criminal investigation methods and the support of superiors, the case will not be so complicated unless it is an old case or other factors. I am also part of the mystery circle, and I boast that I have read some mystery books. Many of the mysteries are either limited to the Blizzard Villa model, or are from the police perspective. Otherwise, if the reasoning detectives and the police compare the progress, the police will always win, because you, a single reasoning person, have no chance of winning when faced with the entire team + technical support. Judging from the content of this book, the author should not be an official, otherwise there would not be so many bugs. The author can look at the National Forensic Medicine. Although it has been criticized for its poor accounting, the introduction of criminal investigation methods is still very good. I hope the next one will be better. Otherwise, just let it be a blizzard. Don't think that detectives are better than police officers. That's unscientific😃😃

When I read Chapter 30, overall it was pretty good, but the aura of the protagonist was too strong and there was no participation from other people, which gave me the illusion that the police were just freeloaders. Second, each case progresses too fast and is very sloppy. There is obviously room to flesh out the plot and add some roles for other supporting characters. I feel that if I continue writing like this, except for the skills given by the system, everything else will be seriously homogenized, and then it will be gone. There will be nothing to write about. Third, the time between cases is too short. One case follows another without any rest time. The protagonist is also a human being and needs a rest. The audience also needs a rest. It is recommended to add more details of life. Another reason is that people die in every case. Your case goes too fast. In real life, our security is pretty good! It gave me the illusion of being in a drama. The city in the novel made me feel dangerous, and I would try my best to move.

Just conceive some bizarre and interesting cases, so that the length of the novel can actually be very long. It has to be a big scene. Each case has a greater impact than the other. Small cases are just criminal police issues, so there is no problem in writing more. The author insists on writing cases that affect one province or even multiple provinces. This is not just a matter for the police. It is thankless, troublesome to write, and easy to touch on sensitive content.

In just one week, three murders occurred with such cruel methods and such bad social impact, and the death toll continued to rise... The leaders of the jurisdiction said that even if they were solved in time, they would not be able to escape their responsibilities, and they would not be able to keep their positions.

Did anyone mention it? The author has too much interesting stuff and too many incidents, which can lead to fatigue and dryness, which is also very boring.