I'm in the Detention Center, and the Suspect Is Me

The first few were well-written, but the one that imitated "City of Light" left me speechless. First of all, the internet wasn't as developed back then, and secondly, the police don't waste time on complicated procedures; they see someone, arrest them... There aren't that many tedious steps involved.

At this rate of crime, I feel like even the governor would have to step down.

The author has already succumbed to the poison, and the first major flaw is that while the novel is a realistic detective story, not Conan or a fictional parallel universe, it lacks even the most basic research into the criminal investigation departments and public security organizational structure of the time. It's entirely based on pure imagination.

"Criminal in the heat of passion" was a term used by the defense lawyer in the Yao Jiaxin case in 2010. Now, author, you've set the story in 2002, where the police presume guilt. The story should have been set as murder by premeditation from the start, and the protagonist's use of the term "crime of passion" should be questioned.

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I tipped 100 and came to say something. I've read ten chapters. How should I put it? I think the premise is good, but the plot and writing style are... Well, let's just say they're not great. Faced with evidence, reasoning crumbles. Don't assume that forensic techniques didn't exist in 2002. Chinese police first used DNA technology to solve a case in 1987.

Having read up to Chapter 30, overall it's quite good, but the protagonist's halo is too strong. Without the participation of other characters, it gives me the impression that the police are just sitting around doing nothing. Secondly, each case progresses too quickly and feels rushed. There's clearly room to flesh out the plot and add more screen time for supporting characters.

Just come up with some bizarre and interesting cases, and the novel could actually be quite long. But if you insist on making it grand, with each case having a bigger impact than the last, it's fine to write as much about minor cases as they are about criminal investigation.

In just one week, three murders with such cruel methods and such a terrible social impact occurred, with the death toll rising steadily... The local leader stated that even if all the cases were solved in time, he would still be held responsible and would lose his position.

Has anyone mentioned this? The author provides too much substantial content and too many events; it can become tiring, and dry, uninteresting writing becomes quite dull.