Heavenly Soldiers of the Heavenly Court in Honghuang

Use Jin Xianxiu as the counter-slaying quasi-sage. . . I don't know how you can stand it.

Having read so many chapters of this book, I'd like to offer my thoughts. First, the author portrays the Jade Emperor and Queen Mother's cultivation and magical power as far too weak, which is simply impossible. You must understand that the Jade Emperor and Queen Mother were originally the first jade stones before the creation of heaven and earth.

Early stage of Void Refinement, perfect? ​​Hahahaha, I gave up as soon as I saw this. Are there also early stage of Void Refinement, great perfection, mid-stage, early stage of mid-stage, mid-stage, late stage, mid-stage, great perfection, and half-step late stage?

The beginning was well-written, but it gradually declined in quality. The military formations weren't properly described; they were just casually sketched, like five thousand heavenly soldiers in formation with a coiled azure dragon. Why not call the army the Heavenly Might Army? A rebellion-suppressing army? Why isn't the newly established Heavenly Court keeping a low profile?

Wow, a Golden Immortal slaying a Quasi-Saint! The gap between most people's levels widens as they progress, but yours gets even more impressive as you go. Two major realms apart, that's incredible! So, does that mean you, a Great Luo Immortal, can slay a top-tier Quasi-Saint? And once you become a Quasi-Saint, can you slay a Saint (or fight a Saint without defeat)? Once you become a Saint, just go and challenge Hongjun and the Heavenly Dao! Amazing! 😄

It feels like the comments section has been completely lumped together with elements from the "Primordial Era" genre, using them as a fixed background. Things like Haotian being Hongjun's disciple and sages needing Primordial Purple Qi are just fixed templates. 😅

At this time, he wasn't called the Jade Emperor, but the Supreme God of Heaven. In this era of the Investiture of the Gods, as a player in the game, one wouldn't pay attention to battles at the level of mere foot soldiers. Heavenly soldiers numbered at least 100,000. Even if he managed to catch a glimpse of the protagonist's prowess, a couple of elixir peaches would be enough to instantly elevate him to at least the celestial realm.

A suggestion for the author: While swords and various martial arts techniques are prevalent in the prehistoric world, the author should consider the current environment. The protagonist is merely a lowly celestial soldier. For a soldier on the battlefield, discipline, formation, and teamwork are paramount.

After reading the first few chapters, it felt like several Alibaba executives were looking at the courier system's backend and saw a deliveryman single-handedly completing deliveries for an entire neighborhood. An executive said to Jack Ma, "Congratulations, Mr. Ma, on acquiring another capable general!" Jack Ma nodded happily, "Excellent! This young man is hardworking and dedicated; he's destined for great things and will definitely be my right-hand man. He'll be Alibaba's vice president." 🤭

Early stage, early to mid stage, early to late stage, early peak, early perfection, early great perfection, mid-stage/early stage???? Doesn't an author know the flaws of online novels?