Heavenly Soldiers of the Heavenly Court in Honghuang

Use Jin Xianxiu as the counter-slaying quasi-sage. . . I don't know how you can stand it.

I have read so many articles since I wrote this book. Let me express my opinions. First, the author wrote too poorly about the conduct and magic power of the Jade Emperor and the Queen Mother. This is simply impossible. You have to know that the Jade Emperor and the Queen Mother were both the first jade stones before the creation of the world. By chance, they were enlightened by Taozu into golden boys and jade girls to serve around Taozu. It can be said that every time Taozu preached, they were by his side. They listened to Taozu's sermons more times than the three thousand guests in the prehistoric times. How could Taoism's magic power be low? The author writes about their Taoist practices that even the two of them combined cannot defeat a divine master and quasi-sage. How is that possible? Throughout all the mythological novels, the Taoist magic power of the Queen Mother and the Jade Emperor is the first quasi-sage under the saint. Therefore, it is recommended that the protagonist author not write the Taoist magic sword of the Jade Emperor and the Queen Mother too low. Even if it has been written now, he should be increased. Otherwise, how can he agree to rule the three realms. In particular, the author writes about the prehistoric background in the list of gods, so we should pay more attention to this point. Look at Fengshenyan, even the saints of the Four Religions would not go out of their way to disobey the will of the Emperor of Heaven and the Queen Mother. After all, not everyone can be the title of Supreme of the Three Realms.

The early stage of refining the void is perfect, hahahahaha, I gave up decisively when I saw this. Is there still the early stage of refining the void, the middle stage of refining the void, the early stage of the middle stage of refining the void, the middle stage of the refining the void, the late stage of the middle stage of refining the void, the middle stage of refining the void is perfect, the middle stage of refining the void is the great perfection, and the late half step.

The opening is well written, but it is getting worse and worse. The military formation is not written out. I write casually, such as five thousand heavenly soldiers forming a formation and a green dragon entrenched. Wouldn't it be better to call the army the Tianxiong Army, the counter-rebel army? When your heaven was just established, you didn't do things with your tail between your legs, being so high-profile. Military positions include commanders of thousands and centurions. How can there be such a thing as captain of thousands?

Bull, the golden immortal kills the quasi-sage, bull! For others, the gap between levels increases as you go up, but you get better and better as you go down. It's awesome to cross two great realms. Then can you, Da Luo, kill the top quasi-sage? When you become a saint, can you kill a saint (or fight a saint without defeat?) When you become a saint, just do Hongjun's way of heaven. Bull, cow, cow 😄

It feels like the novels of Honghuangliu in the comment area have been lumped together as a fixed background. Why is Haotian a Hongjun boy, and a saint must have Hongmeng Ziqi? The template is directly fixed 😅

This time is not called the Jade Emperor, but the Haotian God. In this period of conferring gods, as a chess player, he will not pay attention to such small soldier-level battles. The heavenly soldiers all start with a hundred thousand soldiers. Even if he barely glanced at it inadvertently and saw the bravery of the protagonist, he gave two elixirs and flat peaches casually. After eating them, he would at least become a god.

A few suggestions for the author. Although there are many famous weapons and swords in the prehistoric era, as well as many martial arts, the author considers the current environment. The protagonist is a small heavenly soldier. As a soldier, the most important thing on the battlefield should be discipline, formation, and cooperation. The protagonist written by the author uses a sword when he comes up. It doesn't feel very good. Just think about it. , Lined up on both sides, with monsters on one side and strange shapes on the other, and soldiers on the other side with spears and short sticks. Is it like a street club? As an official violence organization, at least it must have standard weapons. A mess has no credibility, just like a phalanx with weapons in a mess during an army parade. Do you think this kind of army is reliable?

After reading the first few chapters, it was as if several CEOs of Alibaba were looking at the backstage of express delivery and saw a courier boy delivering a community's express delivery all by himself. The executive said to Mr. Ma: "Congratulations to Mr. Ma for adding another strong person to his team." Mr. Ma nodded happily: "Yes, this guy is hard-working and hard-working. He will be able to take on big responsibilities in the future. He will definitely be my right-hand man. He will be the vice president of Alibaba." 🤭

The early stage of the early stage, the middle stage of the early stage, the late stage of the early stage, the peak of the early stage, the perfection of the early stage, the great perfection of the early stage, and the early stage of the middle stage? ? ? Doesn't an author know the poisonous aspects of online writing?