Cultivation of Immortality Starts from the Blacksmith Shop

To practice swordsmanship, it takes two chapters, this is water! Do you know what quality is? Just use 500 words to describe it. It should be concise and concise. It should have meat, not a sponge soaked in water.

There are invincible stories and there are everyday stories. Yours is not a story about abuse, it can only be considered a story about frustration.

You say I find fault and I have nothing to say. Just because there are two contents, I was poisoned. It looked weird. I ran back to Chapter 38 to see where the weirdness was. Goodbye everyone.

A story about abuse of the main character. He can kill everything violently, but anyone can bully the main character.

It feels so frustrating to write, ugh. The Novice Village is currently the strongest. If you have the ability, you can either go in directly, or you can directly find the strongest organization as a backer and don't have to deal with trivial matters, or you can move to another place? If you have to write any bullshit, you have to stomp on it and assassinate it. What you are writing is the protagonist! How come it's written that he and Xiao Zha San are fooling around together, so black? The writing is so poorly written, to be honest.

It's really poisonous, the widow heroine makes her cry every time; from an ordinary person to a fourth-level warrior, you are still poisoned. You are extraordinary. You are no longer an ordinary person. What can poison humans can poison elephants?

The plot and context are very good, and the writing is also very good, but the rhythm is not well grasped. One moment there is a climax, another moment there is a villain, and you become a warrior. You're still a blacksmith master, so they like to kill the goose to get the eggs, and they want to squeeze you for a few taels of silver? If you want to cause conflict and trouble, be reasonable. According to your logic, even if you have top strength, God will directly strike you to death with lightning, because the whole world is about killing the goose to obtain the eggs. The superiors only care about the current wealth in your pocket, not the wealth that your skills and strength can create for him in the future.

The wealthy couple practices the four elements of practice, and the protagonist really seems to have no concept of money. If someone kills someone without searching him, it will be struck by lightning.

You are the top talent that every force needs, not a weakling who fights and kills.

The protagonist forcibly loses his intelligence. Which force wouldn't like the treatment of a blacksmith master who is not treated as a distinguished guest wherever he goes? Lots and lots of money. The biggest invention of human domination of the world is the concept of money and hiring people to directly kill the enemy.

After reading Chapter 30, I can't stand it anymore. 1. Since the Lu family can dominate one side, their relationship with the government is that you are among me, and I am among you. This kind of consideration for the government will not happen. At least there must be many people from the Lu family serving in the government. 2. The currency system is chaotic. The sword that is hard to find for warriors in the first and second stages can only be exchanged for a few days of meat meals, which is very unreasonable. 3. When I go out every night, I never thought about killing a few juniors of the Lu family for fun and causing chaos in the Lu family, so that I won't have time to trouble you. 4. You are a time traveler. Even if you are equipped with a pack of several hundred kilograms of black powder and throw it directly at the Lu family with your arm strength equivalent to a trebuchet, regardless of the lethality, the sound will keep the Lu family busy for many days. 5. The protagonist has always been passive in dealing with the crisis. He is said to have sharp weapons and murderous intentions. He keeps shouting that he will kill so and so in the future. It is very tiring to watch. 6. What kind of existence is that sword sect? Seeing that others are preparing to join the sect, the protagonist has no idea. If others can go, why can't he go? Isn't this a source of support? Isn't this a future? Or is it that the author will arrange some coincidences later, which would be boring. 7. Your dog-leg knife has been melted in Chapter 21, but it can be carried in your arms in Chapter 24. Is it refreshed every day?

I feel like waste, living like a dog

Being in a weak state and still able to strike, I was convinced.

I don't understand how hard it is to make money by making knives. I killed the whole Jin family and got some medicinal materials. Is the Jin family's gold and silver made of titanium alloy? There are unique marks on it. It's not difficult to make gold and silver for blacksmithing.

Basic logic is a stretch. It is recommended that when writing an outline, you first think about whether it is reasonable before writing.

The difference in strength was ten times, but the fight was still going back and forth. Outrageous

The difficulty of this book is not that the protagonist is weak, but that he doesn't have much correct knowledge about things like casting, forging, and blacksmithing, which is really admirable. Just watch some short videos and it won't be like this.

It's better to start with an ordinary blacksmith.

Poison, this book will fly if it doesn't flutter!

If you are poisoned, why don't you read a medical book? Then wouldn't it be possible to cure it by adding skills?

It feels a bit childish, I can't stand it anymore

Need to catch up If you need to read the book for more than five minutes before exiting, it is very important, thank you.

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