Start with the Fisherman and Equip Everything

You are living too tiringly and cruelly!

Although the previous crisis with Manager Sun was slightly flawed according to the commentary, it was considered to have survived the main plot in the early stage. However, as soon as the conflict with Manager Sun ended, the crisis immediately began to weaken. Originally, it was originally written that the original person was forcibly sold into a gang, and he hated the gang, thinking that there would be a plot to overthrow the gang later on. However, after practicing martial arts with Manager Wang, he became more and more integrated into the gang, and it will be written later. It's too weak, the main line is not clear, the crisis is too small, it feels a bit fluid and there is not so much expectation, the behavior is still smooth and not bad, and I don't know whether you want to write about Gou's taste, or the way of showing off the saint in front of others. The sight of Gou's slow development in the front is quite strong, but later in the martial arts practice, he keeps showing his extraordinaryness. It's completely the other way around. When the crisis is strong, Gou is pretending, and when the crisis is weak, it's weird.

I was introduced to poison every day!

. . . Your achievement of increasing fish harvest by three has persuaded me to quit. The cool thing is that you can generate fish infinitely due to bugs. Similar to another novel where you are equipped with a fishing net and you will catch a fish once every three times, ordinary equipment and props are just a concept, which is too exaggerated.

I want to learn this beginning. I wonder if book friends feel there is a sense of expectation at the beginning.

The writing is very fluent, and it can be regarded as a kind of food for eight-legged essays. Come on.

There are too few at the moment, come on, boy!

The writing is very smooth, but the protagonist is a traditional protagonist, and I don't know if readers will like it or not. (The protagonist seems to have an IQ, but he has no emotional intelligence in doing things. He knows a few detours but not much. Like the traditional protagonist, he is arrogant and unruly in his bones. For example, in the dispute with the villain's manager, the protagonist can try to give some gifts first or show weakness. When the strength is weak, the more he wants to kill an enemy, the less he can deepen the bad impression, which is not conducive to development and revenge.)

How should I put it, the background setting is okay, but the realm setting is a bit...

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!