Detective Conan: A World of Twisted Fate and Detective Science

Keep it up! I personally think it's pretty good. I hope they don't start swooning over characters like Akemi Miyano or Ai Haibara later on.

Although I haven't watched much Detective Conan, I don't think Shinichi would immediately identify the culprit, right? Shinichi's decision to identify the culprit without even observing the scene weakens his own abilities. Then, the main character points out things Shinichi missed, creating a plot twist. While praising one character while criticizing another is a common trope, this felt a bit forced.

While there was some criticism of Shinichi Kudo at the beginning, it seemed to be for plot conflict and didn't have a significant impact. Furthermore, Conan's deductive abilities weren't forcibly diminished in later episodes. Of course, if you're an extreme fan of the original work, my advice is to just leave. As for the plot, there's currently a larger proportion of original content.

That's too far-fetched. Even the main characters in Detective Conan didn't realize that Shinichi Kudo was on the roller coaster when he was on it, and they even recognized Inspector Higurashi but didn't recognize Gin and Vodka. The explanation given later was that their hair colors were different, which is too far-fetched.

I don't quite understand why the new book needs to have a fan value limit. Does the author think it's getting too popular?

I spent all night following Qi Ping, so I specially gave him a reward to say something. First of all, the book is indeed quite good so far, with a relatively novel perspective and a plot that doesn't contain many mindless elements. Author, your work hasn't been published yet, so there are basically no ways to gain fan points at this stage.

Here's a suggestion: please make the chapter titles clearer. Odd-numbered chapter titles aren't good writing. When I encounter chapters with ten or more chapters sharing the same title, I skip those chapters. After a few times, I realize I don't understand the plot and I just give up on the book.

The protagonist wakes up in a locked room at the beginning and has superpowers that allow him to know the cause of death of the deceased. Okay, so far, there shouldn't be any major problems. But the police and the washing machine came and let him go after hearing his explanation? They didn't even catch the real culprit! In the past, Conan at least caught the real culprit, right?

I read a fanfic that combined Conan with the supernatural before, but it fell apart at the end because of the ghosts. I hope the author can finish it.

There are instances where the main storyline and settings of Detective Conan are drastically altered. The story won't immediately jump into the Detective Conan episodes; instead, it will unfold through an original event that introduces some new settings before formally connecting with the Detective Conan storyline.