Sun Salutations

Does the author really not know why he threw himself into the street? In the early stage, the protagonist was only at level 1 and was involved in the black sun of ∞, and then the store. . Where does the protagonist get the confidence that he can handle all this and escape unscathed? This way of writing is too old-fashioned and doesn't feel good. . .

Newcomers and new books, all book lovers are welcome to read. The system and theme of this book were thought up by Meng Xi intermittently over the past two years. I thought it was somewhat interesting, but the novice's writing skills were poor, so I revised the draft several times before I finally got it right. But now that it was taken out, Meng Xi tried his best to do his best. If there are any mistakes or bad impressions, please feel free to point them out. The more powerful the better. If you have any tickets, please send them over. The more votes I get, the more excited I am, and the more excited I am, the more inspiration I get (˵¯͒¯͒˵).

I don't understand, a white ape boxing technique in another world is the same as a golden finger, can it be subdued by the dark sun? Then I always thought that the protagonist would be able to practice the mental ape technique, but it turned out that he never had it, but his presence competed with Jin He, who was majoring in it...

A little suggestion, The monster must have a source of weirdness, and it doesn't have to be Cthulhu. As long as it reaches the point where it is invisible and unimaginable to mortals, it actually makes no difference whether it is an evil god or a god. If the world has turned dark, but there is still a glimmer of hope, it means that the evil forces are not overwhelmingly powerful. Then how can the protagonist make a comeback from an absolute disadvantage? This is the biggest attraction. It doesn't matter if he is not a savior, but he has to live. Facing evil that distorts perception and the physical world. There's a lot of this kind of subject matter lately, which is great, but difficult to write about. If you follow the path of evil, it will be difficult to come back in the end. At least the logic in the book must be self-consistent.

I don't know what I'm writing. It's hard to understand after reading it. Are you dreaming? Not understand.

The book is okay, but there are too many typos

I would like to give you a suggestion: the author always likes to repeat the same sentence twice in his writing. Since there are fewer words, he should revise it and rationalize the logic.

It's weird and mysterious, and the progress is a bit slower, but it doesn't affect the atmosphere! Come on!

When I read the beginning, I felt like the Book of the Dead, the one about martial arts training in the Western Regions. I hope the author won't be so tired from writing and will rely more on Xianxia.

Can I ask what Black Sun is? Light exists because of the sun, even if it doesn't emit light, no one can see it. And what is giving light? Black is not a kind of light, but the absence of light is called black.

It's set... What the hell!

The spirit of a dead man has been interfering? Too many people hang up, and it also affects the threads. The settings are too unsatisfactory.

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I haven't updated it for a few days. Is it out of date?

The writing style is not like that of a newbie, it is quite brain-intensive to get started. The sun salutations mentioned in the introduction are currently on the death anniversary. I'm neither angry nor angry, neither up nor down. I hope I can sort out my thoughts.