Starting from the Secret Practice of Yanma Death Lord Emperor

The author must have consulted many relevant books, has a deep understanding of the secrets, and writes fluently. Come on! Be sure to follow up!

It's not as troubled as the book by the Academy Monk, and it doesn't have too many cheats in Weird Life, and it doesn't have the abrupt transitions and bland writing in the book on the Secret Dharma Panel. It's just that the description of the hidden realm is not as cruel and poverty-stricken as the above three books! Is it the Qing Dynasty? The storyline, weird settings, characters, and spells are all very good. I look forward to the author working hard to complete the book.

There are a bit too many nouns. You will be confused when you look at it. There's not enough foreshadowing either. A lot of information is stuffed in. Moreover, the information is all explained in professional terms, which seems a bit numb. But it can be seen from this that the author really checked the information.

It is difficult to read, and in some places it is even confusing to read. Many nouns are thrown out at once without any foreshadowing, especially the methods of cultivation, realm, and monsters. It is well written and contains real things, but it is very obscure and contains too much information.

Did my brother come here to preach? Find a tiny amount of plot within a vast amount of religious knowledge

Currently, I am starting to write novels about the secret realm. There are two that I love to read, one is The Secret Monk and the other is Strange Life.

The writing is good but too cumbersome and obscure.

It's a bit difficult to read the words I don't understand 🙂

Although I didn't understand it very well at first glance, I still found it interesting, so I partly didn't ask for a thorough explanation and partly searched for knowledge. "Therefore, we should work diligently and diligently to defeat the enemies of troubles and the causes of our conceit and suffering, so we should work hard." Come on.

It didn't feel like I was reading a novel, it felt like I was reading an academic paper. I couldn't read it carefully without using my brain. I feel like it needs to be improved in terms of popularization.

I don't know if it's because Jinzhu Mami penetrated the plateau back then, but I really saw that those who practiced the plateau method had a little difficulty stretching 😆

Couldn't the protagonist's name be changed to a secret-style name? It would be too out of the ordinary.

I'm so tired from reading, there are a lot of long and difficult sentences, the plot is good

A long section, a long section, it looks very dense but very messy

Although writing this way may make people feel unclear, it is an online article after all. The combination of text and white text reduces the reading difficulty for readers 😥

So strong? Directly invested in

The writing is indeed interesting, but the characters brag too much. They say they are great, but the actual situation is full of dangers, which makes it feel disconnected. It would be more reasonable if it were described from the perspective of a subordinate.

Very well written, keep it up

It's really a good book, but there are too few more. I think it should be possible to order more in the future.

The writing is very impressive. Where did you find the information about the key author? It really suits the atmosphere.

I feel dizzy after reading chapter 30. It consumes a lot of energy.

It is recommended that the author should not introduce the settings in large sections, but to introduce them slowly, otherwise it will be very difficult to watch.

Go ahead, it's so well written! Congratulations!

It feels like it's written like a Buddhist scripture, and the tone and wording feel like they could be changed.

There are very few books on esoteric Buddhism! It's great that this book appears!

The introduction is pretty good, and the writing is probably not too bad. Let's wait and see.

Author, do you know that what you are writing is a web article? Are you afraid that readers will understand it if you include proper nouns in long paragraphs?

Update: [After reading a few more chapters, I feel that the writing style and atmosphere are really brilliant. It is a text that is both beautiful and solemn as well as bloody and cruel, and the problems with the wrong sentences do not hide the flaws. The original post is as follows: The atmosphere is wonderful but there are a lot of bad sentences... Mainly because the subject is missing and it feels like a light novel has been translated into Chinese. Let me start by saying: I don't understand Tibetan and I don't know the writing habits of Tibetan literature. I don't know if the author deliberately wrote this way to imitate Tibetan language habits or the epic, but sometimes the lack of subjects or the lack of connection between predicates really affects the reading experience. For example: But this dazzling electric light that can bombard people into coke makes Master Sanqin beside him grasp it into a bundle, like holding a spear. Even if it is far away, he can feel the blazing heat. [The subject here changes from "electric light" to "Sangqin" but is omitted] See still The electric light was jumping and changing like a struggle, and out of patience, he flicked it out and stared away, "Soba, why did you activate the Mantra to Destroy the Cause?" ——Chapter 5 The Mantra to Destroy the Cause Only these few people in front of me survived, [Who are they? On the eve of their souls being eaten by the [demon] and replacing their physical identities, they arise to subdue them and return to death, but the foundation is damaged for a short time ——Chapter 6 Demon Suppression Hole Only deep With the "filial piety" of the lord's confidants, or the "Zhongyi" selected like him, he was responsible for recording the manor's income and expenditure, writing correspondence, registering serf taxes and other written work, assisting in the management of daily affairs, and conveying instructions to the subjects. ——Chapter 9: The Caste of the Gods

Introduction to the author, Guan Yu, there are several questions. The first is how many levels of the Asamkhika kalpa did the protagonist pass? Is it a complete three levels? The second is, isn't the ultimate heaven of color the residence of saints who have achieved the fruit of non-return? If the protagonist finally lives in the ultimate heaven of color, then he should not be worthy of being surrounded by Buddhas and Bodhisattvas. I have limited understanding of Tantra, so please forgive me.

After reading it for a while, I felt like I had read the author's previous books.