Taoist Companions Help Me Live Forever

Let's talk about the advantages first. As a protagonist who is a philandering villain with a single-minded purpose, I think the author's shaping and maintenance of his image is online most of the time. Unlike some fairy tale novels where the protagonist is either violent, detached, or heroic, the appearance of a villain like Yu Xian brings a relatively fresh reading experience to me: a protagonist who satisfies his desire for beauty and life, and who strengthens his cultivation along the way with a "faint conscience". At the same time, the author should read the readers' comments and modify the novel based on the reasonable suggestions. There are many female characters in this article, and they even drive cars from time to time, which is quite good. The novel does not gloss over the world of immortality where the jungle is strong and the strong eat the weak. Although spiritual practice tests one's mind, by the fifth volume of the novel, the characters are not so much seeking "immortality" as they are pursuing the absolute power behind the word "immortal". Although it lacks some fairy spirit, it matches the protagonist quite well. ————————————————————————————The following are the shortcomings that I personally think. The portrayal of female characters is relatively vase. In the early days, the golden finger of the Taoist couple was crucial to the protagonist's cultivation, but after the fifth volume, the Taoist couple's cultivation was only of great use in replenishing life span, and the cultivation relied entirely on the protagonist's "financial fraud" to earn cultivation resources. On the road of spiritual practice, only Magnolia helps the protagonist's character and enlightenment, but it can't be said to have combat power and is just a vase; the other female characters are more of tools, more about satisfying desires than feelings. In general, the protagonist lacks a Taoist companion who can really accompany, help and talk to him all the way. Then there is the evolution of Datonghui. As of the fifth volume, we can see that the protagonist establishes the rule and exploitation of the two heavenly cities according to the bureaucratic system under the imperial autocratic power. And these members of the Datong Association are all assimilated by the protagonist's legal domain, which is a bit scary. In addition, the protagonist plans to extend this model to the entire Xuanyang Realm and even the human world in the future, which makes it even more terrifying. As a villain protagonist, it is okay to act ruthlessly to scheme against others for his own purposes; but since the author has attached a vague conscience to the protagonist, then I think a "world of great harmony" formed under the influence of his legal domain is somewhat contrary to this conscience. Indeed, low-level monks and ordinary people can live better in this dream of a unified world. But for humanity as a whole, I think it's probably doomed. Everyone is assimilated and becomes the protagonist's training resources. If one day the protagonist loses his conscience, everyone will be in trouble. If a villain uses assimilation to put the world under his control to serve his spiritual practice, then he becomes a devil. I personally don't like the devil protagonist (everyone likes radish and green vegetables, if you like it, that's fine, it's just that I couldn't help but say something in my book review). —————————————————————————— In general, if it is viewed as a cool novel about a male protagonist and his n female accessories conquering the world, the future can be expected

The first volume of the novel feels average, and the story of Xianxia is off to a good start. The heroine Yu Lan is too ordinary (even in the later stages). Because of the system, the protagonist treats her in every possible way, but why does the protagonist treat her so well in the eyes of outsiders I have forgotten the plot of the second volume, and it is not interesting to read anyway. , I insisted on reading it because of the title of Immortal Harem Starting from the third volume of Student Loan, it has given people constant surprises, creativity and fun Although it is a fairy tale, it also has harem attributes. I hope the author can portray the heroines more interestingly By the way, the author has good driving skills, haha

I feel it is well written and I look forward to the storyline in the spiritual world.

Come on, author!

It is very consistent with my imagination. As a cultivator with no future, it is also a very good choice to go to the mortal world to enjoy life and spend a happy life. The author writes well and does not need to rush and polish it slowly. He polishes the worldly scenery, culture, customs and habits, etc., So that it will be full of flesh and blood when reading. Otherwise, he changes one map after another, has no interaction with the map characters, and the map background is not polished. In this way, it feels like he is playing a stand-alone game and writing a running account, and he will not want to read it. So don't rush, polish it slowly, I'll give you all the tickets, and I'll book it all when it's on the shelves

This book is currently ranked No. 1 Among Taoist couples who take a double break to promote the growth of human beings. I have read about ten books on this subject, and it is difficult to balance the progress. After all, weekends do not include actual combat, nor do they include expertise (alchemy and weapon refining). If you use too many golden fingers, your combat power will easily collapse. Purely based on the number of Taoist couples, the description of women has no special features. They are all a burden anyway. It is not appropriate to look at the realm. It is easy to calculate based on more children and more blessings. After all, children are difficult to write about. The plot of couples is more full than you. I thought that this subject could not write good books. Unexpectedly, the novel took a different approach and actually included several women. The character of the main character is written out. Female 1 is calm and contented, female 2 is extremely talented but cannot get it, female 3 is naive to know the good and bad luck, female 4 monk is taken advantage of, female 5 is nirvana and an innocent phoenix, female supporting character 1 is the princess Cao thief, female supporting character 2 green tea turns to pure love, female supporting character 3 the ghost emperor is lost and recovered, female supporting character 4 protects the sect, and female supporting character 5 takes the form of a spirit tiger. The male supporting characters 1.2.3.4.5.6 All have their own style. After writing a novel, the group portraits are complete, with personality and soul. I have to praise the writing well. (This book is not without its shortcomings. The previous upgrades are very laborious. The main character is a scumbag who didn't run away. There are so many tricks.)

I recommend you to read this book for the following reasons: 1. The current popular soft rice genre, and the following are all soft rice and hard food. 2. The dialogue between the characters is not awkward. He seems to be a mature author. His writing style is natural and not a noob. 3. This is a cool novel, but not entirely a cool novel. The protagonist has a process of thinking change. I think this is growth, but the label of a scumbag has not changed. 4. The characters have distinct personalities. I have read more than 300 chapters so far, and the female characters in the book are not stereotyped. 5. The rhythm is controlled reasonably, with slow upgrades due to entrepreneurship in the middle, and successful entrepreneurship taking off directly. So much comes to mind at the moment, but it's worth your subscription.

In the later stages of the Human World Chapter, it has already departed from the title of the book and is nothing more than a matryoshka doll of a map. It doesn't have the taste of being a good person + a girl in the early stage, and I don't know what I'm looking at later on.

The author made a big mistake in writing Chen Yi out of character. Personally, I think Chen Yi is the most interesting character among these female protagonists.

Seeing Chen Yi appear again and become the favored man of heaven, he even beats the male protagonist. You said that it is not easy for the male protagonist to practice as a casual cultivator. He is invincible and has never suffered a single loss. You say that someone else has a family background, but he also has a golden finger. In the later stages, the role of golden fingers becomes more and more useless. You are a small electric motor, and your upgrade experience is too high. It will take many years to reach the first level. It is also quite different from the normal practice time. Unfortunately, this golden finger can only improve the level but not the skills, so the male protagonist has to learn and grab the skills by himself. Since he has time to learn and grab the skills, he has no time to practice normally. Then there is actually no difference between him and those who rely on medicine to improve.

Author, you can check to see if 314's grades are getting worse after breaking up with Chen Yi. I can only say that some people may like tragedy, but most people still like comedy, and most of those who like tragedy will not reject comedy. It is easy to write off tragedy if you always write about it, especially when the audience for your title and introduction at the beginning is not tragedy.

I have followed several authors. In this type of book, basically everything written in the beginning is good, but in the end, I am exhausted. I hope the author will work harder.

The plot with Chen Yi is not fun at all, but rather awkward, making the protagonist look like a diner

It's so poisonous. There's something wrong with the protagonist's personality. There are many parts that I find disgusting. It has a direct impact on people's outlook on life. Please be careful! ! ! ! !

After reading Chapter 170, I referred to the comment section and jumped to the middle and late stages and the end. I found that it was indeed a literary disease + the ultimate bad ending. Fortunately, I didn't order it all in one go 😁 and stopped the loss in time and withdrew.

I am one of the readers who reads Baishu on QQ. There is no doubt that this is a good book and has the potential to be a great book. The PS of the latest chapter is very uncomfortable after reading it. This book should not be buried in a pile of rubbish, nor should it be randomly reviewed by a bunch of losers, so I have plans to join the league, but I can't rush in vain. Author, please tell me how many times you update a day. If it doesn't end badly, I will consider a silver alliance.

This is the only Shuangxiu-style book that hasn't collapsed yet. It's rare that the first heroine is a useless person who comforts the soul.

Why did you write that Chen Yi is so awesome? I gave up.

The recent plot doesn't feel very good. It was originally a harem school of cultivating immortals and cultivating Taoism. At least there should be some plot about cultivating immortality. The description of farewell to Shangyang in the previous paragraph felt quite right. As a result, we reached the Golden Core stage and a new map. There is no description. The plot is actually about the protagonist engaging in pyramid schemes. . . Just hold a grand gathering. The protagonist establishes his own power and has his own platform. There will also be a lottery bank later. What to do? What about the protagonist? In other immortality novels, the breakthrough of golden elixir is the climax of the plot. It deserves a lengthy description of the plot. As a result, nothing was written. It is a dry description that the protagonist has broken through the third level again. What about the plot? . Then it's time to Yuanying. The total number of golden elixirs is less than a hundred chapters, I haven't seen it yet. (The chapter title has already been written "Zhen Jun Yu Xian") There are more than a hundred chapters on Qi training. The plot is very thin. The foundation building chapter has gone downhill a bit. There isn't much plot but it's written with great nuance. The emotional description is okay. There is no plot in the Golden Elixir period. Every day I open it and write about other small characters. What a fight. Treasure hunting has nothing to do with the same old tricks. The elixir I practiced was also a heretic golden elixir that I had practiced during the foundation building period. The author doesn't even want to think about irrelevant props. Nothing has changed except for the realm. Or the third-level demon elixir to practice the heretic golden elixir. The hang has been opened so much. As soon as the new chapter opens, the protagonist is making money. Write about insignificant people. From now on, you will become a Nascent Soul. The highest level incarnation of the map. Do you plan to finish it in 400 chapters after only 300 chapters? Really Jin Dan has no plot at all.

🤫 Don't be fooled by the label. I saw that in the end they were all female supporting characters. Moreover, the author has been diving for 2 months and there is not even a single extra chapter. There is a lack of integrity.

After seeing the latest chapter, this book is almost over. In my opinion, there were some minor flaws in the book when it first started in Yue Kingdom, but from the time when it came out of Yue Kingdom to Yuanying, it should be the peak of the book. There was no peeing point in the whole process. However, after Yuanying, it took a sharp turn. The author seemed to be in a hurry and missed many points. Of course, it can be read, but after the incarnation, it is really a third-rate plot, and now Dongxu seems to me to have a low word count. Maybe this book should end in Yuanying. It would be a great pleasure to go to the appointment with the gods and then fight a few bosses to end it directly. I feel that the author must be very uncomfortable writing it now, especially since the harem group is only related to the title of the book. However, I think the author's writing of female characters is actually quite good, but the upgrade collapsed in the mid-term and was difficult to grasp. It's a pity, I have always been looking forward to Chen Yi's great fun. In short, I can give an 80 points to the first half of this book, which is the plot before the incarnation (95 points before Yuanying), but after that, especially after the incarnation, I can only give 40 points. Maybe I won't order it again in the future, but I will still read the author's next book, hoping that the next book will be better.

If you want to write about scumbags, don't write so many pretentious and sensational plots. It's okay, but it's immediately disgusting.

How to say it? This book was okay in the early stages, but later on, Chen Yi was written directly from the heroine to the supporting actress, and there was no explanation at the end. It was speechless. Moreover, after Ascension, the writing was very messy and the ending was hasty.

It's a pity that for this kind of subject, I can only read more than 200 chapters. When I arrived at the county town, there was nothing to see. It was said that Taoist companions helped me live forever, but after the golden elixir, Taoist companions were useless. Also, the pressure is too strong, this is a cool article! Why does the author set up so many obstacles for the protagonist? Are you co-authoring it just for the sake of water? The problem is that I don't care about the water, but at least your water is interesting and can make people watch it! After the protagonist Jin Dan went to the new map county, he said that his own cultivation was ineffective, so he and his Taoist companions made a cauldron for the Taoist companions to practice... He could only practice by relying on the heavenly rewards after helping his subordinates to successfully overcome the tribulation... I can draw many cards in one practice. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye

Condensing Qi and building foundations rely on the basic functions of the Golden Finger. Jindan relies on Datonghui (angel investors, based on the reality of the world's great peers cutting leeks), Yuanying relies on the Great Love Project (I am crossed out for everyone, everyone is for me, and the production materials belong to me). The infinite origin is supplemented by life-burning skills to accelerate the transformation into gods.

The so-called Taoist monks are nothing more than vampires in the later stages.

This book is mainly written about several aspects. The protagonist is very stubborn. He never fights in different realms. He bullies the small with capital. He cultivates immortality with capital. He is an immortal - mouth trade, cheats and cultivates immortality. He cultivates immortality through a Ponzi scheme. He cultivates immortality with his waist and cultivates immortality in a breeding farm. There are relatively few fights and killings. The protagonist is a villain. He is a pure demon among demons. He is comparable to the Great Love Immortal of Gu Zhenren.

I really like this book. I read it day and night for several days in a row, including reading it at Five o'clock this morning. I read Chapter 333 in less than a week. Chen Yi, I always believed that it would have a happy ending. The author had promised this before, so I read with confidence. But I only found out about Chen Yi's ending after reading everyone's comments. I felt angry but couldn't let it out, so I couldn't scold the author. Chen Yi's image is split between front and back. When I saw the 315 breakup (I thought it was a fake breakup at the time), I should have thought that the author has changed. I would like to reward and "advise" the author like those big guys, but unfortunately I am still a student and don't have much money, and the book has been finished long ago. At this time, my mood fluctuated violently, so I decided to reward him with 10,000 coins (perhaps he would feel it was a loss after a few days when his mood calmed down). In the past, I had rewarded 100 coins a few times for reading books. This book stopped at chapter 333 and I will never read it again.

It's really messy in the back. Not only is it messy, it's also very warehoused. As the heroine, Chen Yi didn't give any explanation at all in the follow-up. It ended in a hasty manner. It's a pity that the previously written part was pretty good.

Okay, when I read a book, I usually know what a book is about when I see "The Disciple". In this book, when I see "The Disciple", I also know what it is about. That's pretty good.