Immortal Longevity: Starting with a Wife After Coming Down the Mountain

Recently, many novels featuring the "concubine-acquiring leveling-up" trope have appeared. The beginnings are all roughly the same: the protagonist transmigrates to another world, cultivates for decades or even centuries, but due to poor talent, has no hope of breaking through, so he goes to the mortal realm to marry and have children, thus activating...

Why is your novel so uninteresting? You treat marriage as a consumable item. After getting married, this person becomes useless. Marrying one means the previous one becomes useless. Then continue marrying, and continue forgetting. Every single one of them is a pretentious act of slapping someone in the face and marrying a new wife. None of the stories were original.

After seeing this realm, all Qi Refining cultivators with spiritual roots were expelled. The protagonist's family must at least be a Golden Core family, right?

This setting is utterly baffling, expelling someone from the clan??? My god, cultivation clans actually do this... You're truly a handsome guy in a crowd, an anomaly in clan-themed stories...

The phrase "" (qí rén) is repeated several times in Chinese. Only Japanese people with poor Chinese speaking skills use this phrase in such situations. Chinese people generally use "" in conversations involving three people.

You've read several books like this, and these past few days I've found that yours is the worst written.

I don't recommend this novel, "Eternal Life and Marriage"! In the first few chapters, the maids all got pregnant! Then, on their wedding night, they slept together all night again, and the worst part is, the other woman was over three months pregnant! It's poisonous! I'm out!

Expelled from the family? How powerful must your family be?

I'm planning to delete it. The beginning was okay, but the later parts went way overboard with a mindless plot. I was just thinking of deleting it two days ago.

The ability to create clones through Qi cultivation is definitely a classic example of a smut novel.