A Chaotic Martial World: You Can Only Put Points into Stamina

Just the poison in Chapter 11 almost didn't kill him. . . When his son comes home late, his father pays a gang to look for his son? It's still a gang that won't be dealt with. Father is waiting at home? Don't want to look for it? What nonsense did you write? All kinds of unreasonable gods unfold. . . Come back and slap him. . . Can the author take a look at it and polish it himself? . . What are you writing about?

When I was reading Chapter 8, an old man said that the author liked the word "but is", and then I counted a few out of boredom. Chapter 8: 22; Chapter 9: 17; Chapter 10: 16; Chapter 49: 25. In one of the sentences, there are two words "queshi", and there are two consecutive sentences with "queshi" in them. And in many cases, deleting "but is" has no effect on the article. The author can pay attention to the fact that "but" is frequent.

I read a book and was disgusted by a little black soul gang for more than ten chapters. Goodbye.

There are too many explanations and no sense of substitution. For example, if you go through the Luoyun Dynasty, you must add a feudal country after it? For example, when Dark Souls collects monthly money, it must be explained that it is a local gang collecting protection money? Who doesn't know this when reading novels? Explain so much? The explanation of Wushu Academy is compared with high school, and the explanation of Wushu Fu is compared with university? Please, can you not explain? Readers know more than you do. So many explanations are very similar to those directors who make literary films because they have to shoot everything because they are afraid that the audience will not understand?

A good hand is ruined, so the author should find a factory to tighten the screws.

This book is very interesting. Why are there so few people reading it? It made me feel very panicked.

I could actually endure the first dozen chapters. But when I saw steam trains and cars, I couldn't bear it. Is the author just amusing himself? Your author's ideas are not on the same page as those of your readers.

How handsome is a person with 9 points of charm? A person with 40 points of stamina is not as handsome as a person with 10 points of charisma. Is it possible that 10 points of charm are full points? The protagonist is always emphasized to be handsome.

I keep seeing this word, it's so poisonous

I was shocked on the first page of the first chapter! There was a kerosene lamp? Where's the kerosene? If you don't understand, just read more! Kerosene is extracted from petroleum. Don't watch TV and think that kerosene existed in ancient times when you lit a kerosene lamp in the 1950s and 1960s! There really is no distinction between grains and grains!