Taiyi Xianyou

The vocabulary is acceptable and so is the writing style. But, Shushan style novels are really hard for modern people to read. First, the text is mixed, and the amount of information that does not promote the plot is dense. Second, the essence of Shushan's worldview is to look at the background, which is the same as looking at the heel (originality) in the ancient times. Hard work is useful, but it is a blinding method. It still looks at luck and background. For most ordinary people, it is difficult to substitute. The third is the classical fairy tale, which is more about luck (the villains who meet the protagonist are all unlucky, and robbing treasures depends on luck), not about values ​​(it is not about the values ​​​​of secular people, but it does not need to be worldly values, but the values ​​​​of cultivators); cultivators and their stable emotions and error-free reason do everything, and they do not provide emotional value. Without the collision of values ​​and the emotions that can be easily substituted, no matter how imaginative the novel is, it will still look like drinking boiled water. Of course, this is a lay person's personal perception. Those who like this genre may be looking at something else.

I really don't understand why some people are complaining about the protagonist using a sword. The sword is a gentleman's weapon and a ritual weapon. In ancient times, kings and disciples wore swords as a symbol of status. The sword used by Taoists is a ritual weapon. To put it bluntly, Taoist rituals are sacrifices. Every priest uses a big and heavy knife to chop at random. Taoist priests use swords for daily tasks. When fighting, they can pick them up and fight. You don't even look at the traditional Taoist priests' magical tools. Aren't the peach wood sword, floating and sinking, ruler, paperweight, and purification bottle all used for practicing rituals? The person who cultivates immortality uses a sword to show that he is a gentleman, uses a crutch to show that he is highly virtuous, and uses a whisk to show that he is an immortal. You bring a big knife to the door because you want to fight.

The writing is good, but the text is too dense and I feel like the paragraphs could be a little thinner.

The title of this chapter is too eye-catching, just like the one written by Shui Wen more than ten years ago

What you write is fine, but those who criticize are just brats who haven't grown up yet.

Another eunuch, even the dog enters the cigarette and rushes to become the chief steward.

This book probably went to the palace. Alas, it's a pity that a good book was lost.

Please give me two monthly votes to encourage you. Also, I would like to give you some advice. Since last year, there have been more and more fairy tale novels in the novel style. Your novels are also in this style. The advantage of this style is that it will attract a group of people like me, but the disadvantage is that it can only attract people like me. If you write like this, the subscription will not be very good. It can be appropriately whiter.

The writing is pretty good and the setting is pretty good too. It's just that the story is not that good, I always want to watch it.

It was good before you got the Golden Lotus, but you don't need to read it after you got the Golden Lotus inheritance!

Still there? How about just resubmitting this book and writing it slowly?

I don't know why I say the writing is good, but I can't even understand the punctuation marks.

👍 Very good. This is the second book I saw at the starting point that is not on the shelves. I will stick to it until the end.

There is too much nonsense. If a supporting character appears randomly, he has to start from his birth and recount his whole life experience. It feels like there is nothing to write about and the number of words has to be crammed into it.

Good guy, when I saw that the author had published a new book, I thought I had sent it, but it turned out it was updated.