Fellow Taoist, Your Opportunity Is so Useful.

Cut it, it should be, what is this all about? Two of the three chapters are boasting about how awesome the supporting characters are, and what other people say, and the fight between little noobs is about to break the void. You think you are writing a fantasy novel from ten years ago, and you still put it in the Xianxia area. It's weird if you are not a prisoner. Who among the people here is interested in reading this kind of book you wrote?

After reading a few chapters, I think your book should be placed in the fantasy section.

The last book I wrote was very good, but this one is too long. After cutting it, don't rush to start a new book. Go out and relax, and think about the ideas for the next book. Come on.

Since physical fitness is so important, why not just practice medicine with people who have good physical fitness and can kill pig feet?

No regrets at all. The roads are often boring.

What's this? It's so rotten.

Can the author explain the levels of cultivation levels, spells, treasures and elixirs? I don't understand.

Publish a single chapter, not even one chapter?