The Direct Son of the Qin Dynasty

Not only does this book have too many incorrect views, but it also uses a set of rhetoric to repeat over and over again, without any new ideas. The author lacks the necessary understanding of the thoughts in the history of thought from the Renaissance to modern times, and cannot even talk about it. I really can't bear it anymore, so I gave up. Goodbye.

I don't know if the outline is exciting or not, but the storytelling level is as good as graduating from elementary school! Narrative rhythm, talk less, reduce narration, and let the characters move and do more; Write down the writing, use words with synonyms, refine sentences, and reduce repeated expressions; If you don't even know these points, no matter how well-conceived your story is, it will be useless 🤔

The theme was quite attractive at first, but I persisted until I got to the 500th chapter, and I couldn't hold on any longer. In the dialogue in one chapter, what the protagonist wanted to express was repeated in four or five sentences, which made me feel more and more confused... The characters in history were created. It doesn't stand out. It feels like changing the name of the vest can trick the next person. It caters to the protagonist to start the dialogue and has no independent thoughts (friendly counselors and generals) to seek peace and courage. Sorry... I quit, but I wish the author can write better and better in the future. Come on.

How many chapters does the author plan to write? Compare this book with "Qin Officials" (just for convenience, not for comparison) "Qin Officials" started in the Warring States Period, and this book is in the Qin Dynasty. From the perspective of story telling, the former is easier: ① There is enough historical data about the Warring States Period, and there are a lot of stories to insert the protagonist into becoming a participant; ② From the perspective of the whole book, the death of the second emperor of the Qin Dynasty was too short, and the starting point of the Warring States Period can be extended for the whole book to fully narrate and enrich the protagonist's experience; status and power; after unification, in the middle of the story, the protagonist cannot extinguish the ambition of the First Emperor, and does whatever the First Emperor asks him to do. I understand that once the First Emperor dies, the world will be in chaos: Anyone who doesn't watch the middle and later stages will know that, and the protagonist will definitely "reorganize the mountain" later. "River"; I roughly divide the story of "Qin Li" into the above three paragraphs, which can be described as cliche or classic. Thanks to the author's historical accumulation, writing style and some fun, the rhythm is very good. I think "Qin Li" is very interesting! Then back to this book, I started writing it after the reunification. It was too close to the death of the First Emperor in history and the great changes in the world. For the protagonist, what should he do before the death of the First Emperor? To what end? What results were achieved? What is the trend in the world? After the death of the First Emperor, what did you expect for the future? What preparations are there? What to do? How did it end? Did the author write an outline? Each chapter is a paragraph for you and a paragraph for me. You talk more than you do. But don't tell me that the world has changed and just retire to the mountains and expect hundreds of schools of thought to help you build a harmonious society, right? —————— If there are 5 chapters updated daily, treat the above as if I didn't say anything

Um, I don't understand what the main plot of this book is.

Haha, jump directly to the announcement of identity, the writing is okay, keep up the good work

To be honest, if the old Qin people were really treated like this, they shouldn't, they really shouldn't! Fearing power but not virtue is a true portrayal of most people. They need a sharp sword hanging over their heads at all times to ensure the most basic stability. "Political power emerges from the barrel of a gun" sums it up very well. It is not enough to have a law; it is also necessary to ensure that the law is mandatory and that it can be implemented. It is only reasonable to win over some and defeat others.

This book is really well written! In fact, a historical article like this must describe the actual situation at that time, while retaining room for imagination, and at the same time include a large number of classical Chinese texts, which is a great test of the author's literary level; at the same time, its fascinating narrative method is also quite interesting. Dare to think, dare to speak, and dare to do are the male protagonist's characteristics, and the core of it is always the same. I hope the author can continue to update this article, and maybe one day it will be adapted onto the screen.

The book is a good book, but updates are too slow. The advantages are actually very obvious. It can be seen that the author has thought for a long time about the reasons for what the Qin Dynasty did in the historical background of that time. In other words, the author should have started writing this book based on these thoughts about the Qin Dynasty. And some of the characters are well created, especially Qin Shihuang, the character is very brilliant. But the shortcomings are indeed quite obvious, mainly due to the lack of fluency and advancement of the main plot, and the uneven distribution of character creation. Some of the characters, such as low-level officials and occasional ministers, are actually flat and facial-shaped, and do not reflect the complexity of the characters in real situations. The characterization of novels does need to be detailed and detailed, but as an ordinary reader, I would rather see that the characters that appear, even if they are passers-by A, B, C, and D, will always have their own uniqueness, rather than being a tool to promote the protagonist's speech. For this book, I am basically fully subscribed at the moment. There are two main points. First, the author's three views are very upright. Although the writing style does not fully support the huge background of a great era, the writing has a vibrant flavor. Another one, as far as historical articles in recent years are concerned, this book is rare in its depth and contains the author's thinking and wisdom. Personally, I am willing to pay for the author's thoughts and reflections on the Qin Dynasty. Frankly speaking, for now, this is not a very standard historical novel. I actually read it more as a research article on the politics, humanities, history and other aspects of the Qin Dynasty. Of course, I also hope that the author can improve the existing flaws as soon as possible, balance the relationship between thinking and storytelling, and become a historical master.

What's the point of keeping the protagonist's identity under wraps? Everyone knows the identity of the protagonist, Qin Shihuang, and does not want to help Su ascend the throne. He also knows that he has experienced malaria and his body is getting worse day by day. He is still pressing the protagonist, waiting for the death of Qin Shihuang, and there is an uprising in the late Qin Dynasty, and the protagonist is trying to turn the tide. Why should he be born so early? And does it make sense to keep suppressing the protagonist? Readers feel uncomfortable reading it, and their grades are hard to come up with. Why bother writing it themselves? In fact, the book is quite good. The protagonist's modern thoughts collide with ancient thoughts, but it's too empty talk.

To talk about it in detail, this book is undoubtedly a masterpiece of Qin Dynasty. Although the plot development is slow, it is also due to the different styles. Although the entry point is personal, it does not affect the specific reading. I am the kind of person who loves to read "Zizhi Tongjian" and "Historical Records". Although I do not study history deeply, I can also say that I understand the humanities, customs, and politics of some historical dynasties. Especially I have some sighs about "Qin", "Han", "Tang", "Song" and "Ming"! Therefore, although some of the descriptions in this book are inconsistent, for example, Qin Shihuang had 23 children, but historical records describe that only four sons have their names, and the others were all killed by the second generation. But that's not to say there are none. Some unofficial histories have been recorded but not enough to be tested. The compilation of specific historical facts is understandable. What makes me feel wonderful is that the author can calm down and read the historical books carefully to consider the details of life. This is worthy of praise. I hope I can maintain my style, I might go bald quickly. My humble opinion, if there are any commentators, you can comment on it!

To be honest, I still can't understand the protagonist's logic and the author's thoughts. Under the premise that the First Emperor does not recognize his relatives and does not know that he is the tenth son, he has only two paths. Either he would wait for the First Emperor to win over the world, or he would take over the world himself. In this way, he would have to leave Xianyang and go to Sishui Pavilion to make friends with Liu Bang and a group of people, or go to the Six Kingdoms area of ​​Shandong to serve as an official and poach Qin's corners to form a rebel team. Either you are influenced by "high officials" and want to change the Qin state and rebuild the Qin Dynasty, then you have to enter the officialdom and climb up high enough to influence the first emperor. After the death of the first emperor, he will kick Zhao Gao and punch Hu Hai, and support Su to continue the glory of the Qin Dynasty. What is the protagonist doing now? After killing Yingbu proved that he could change history, he neither left Xianyang nor worked hard to enter the core of the officialdom. He first killed people in Xianyang City, and then passed the time under the guise of studying. He kept wandering around the Xianyang area and the fringe areas of the officialdom. He wasted more than a year in the Xianyang area. You must know that it has only been more than ten years since the First Emperor started kicking. There is not much time for operation. Is there such a waste of time? This behavior is completely unreasonable. This behavior is as if the protagonist knows that he is the son of the Qin Dynasty and is waiting for the First Emperor to come and recognize his relatives. This cannot be justified and is not reasonable at all.

The logic of the writing is good, although it is a bit like following the trend, but the protagonist still has a brain at present, and it depends on the operation later. However, the appearance of a boy about 10 years old will change greatly when he grows up to 18 or 20. Generally speaking, he will tend to look like his father or mother. If there are no birthmarks or tattoos, it is generally difficult to identify unless he looks exactly like his father or mother. This is why in ancient times, people used other people's tokens to pretend to be other people's heirs. Under different living environments and different nutritional supplies, the appearance of even twins will undergo major changes.

Heroine: If you like a single heroine, you can leave it. If you accept three heroines at once and don't have enough emotional scenes, it's very inferior. Highlights: There is also an inexplicable and passionate plot, where a woman violently kills more than 20 people. She is about to serve her sentence but ignores the dissuasion of the soldiers and runs out of the prison area to save people under the nose of the First Emperor. . . This is a story about knowing the law and breaking the law. . . . Summary: Why didn't I control my hands and voted for the monthly vote? I wanted to give myself a big buck at that time. . .

I can't follow it anymore, more than 300 chapters! Basically nothing in history has changed! The image of King Qin is becoming more and more paranoid. What the protagonist does feels like he is barking incompetently. The plot progresses through more than 300 chapters, and the plot has progressed by about 20% at most. Two of the three chapters are nonsense dialogues.

After thinking about it, I decided not to recommend or vote. The author's writing was too depressing. According to logic, it is time to reveal his identity, but the author still did not consider revealing his identity. Is it really as others said, after the death of the First Emperor, there will be another way to fight for hegemony in the world? If it were that kind of plot, I would abandon the book 🙏

Reading Taoism for ten years is enough to practice Taoism? In other words, can you become an immortal by reading?

After two more quarrels, he will leave, and this post will be used as proof. No more talking nonsense in the middle chapters. Now he's beating like crazy again, preaching at the same time. We are not primary school students. We need you, the author, to preach to us in the tone of Qin Shihuang. I originally thought it was well written, but it became too preachy and I didn't want to read it anymore.

It is difficult to write about the pre-Qin Dynasty without a certain literary foundation! Hope it continues. Don't be a eunuch.

This book was okay at first glance, and you can continue to read it. However, after reading it, something was wrong, and it completely turned into a quarrel, which was endless. Summary: Pig's trotters said that this should be like this, the king said that you are wrong, and pig's trotters said that I was wrong, and I was one-sided. After that, pig's trotters did this again, the king said that it should be like this, and pig's trotters said that I was one-sided again. I have written hundreds of chapters in this cycle.

Book friends, call me when it was announced that the protagonist is the young master. I can't stand it anymore. I don't know what I'm dawdling about.

To be honest, the advantages are obvious, and the shortcomings are also obvious. The writing smells of the Qin Dynasty, but the writing is too petty. It is still written to inculcate the concept of Qin Shihuang. It is a pity that the good subject matter is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it! Too suffocating

From Chapter 1 to Chapter 347, I feel like the protagonist has his own opinions. Doesn't it mean that the opinions you put forward must be wrong? Did you admit your mistake and deny it as soon as the First Emperor said this was not possible? Could it be that the people at the bottom in Chapter 346 can only be the bottom farmers forever? It is full of benevolence, righteousness and morality, and it talks about serving the people. How much has actually been done? It's not that I'm superior, I want to laugh

The inability to coordinate or even conflict between productivity and production relations is what the protagonist needs to resolve. The mouth is high, the mind is lustful, and it is helpless. Going ahead, Wang Mang ended. Power is king, and fame is the only way to gather people. If you are still pretending to be arrogant, it will only increase your laughter. In other words, it's just the word count of water. Either the protagonist reveals his identity and gathers popularity to ride the wave, or the world is corrupt and treats Guizhou as an ant, and the world continues to be turned upside down. What else is there to do in time travel? Is it just playing a game, and human life is like a piece of grass? History repeats itself forever and does not need to be elaborated, not to mention that not all 24 histories are true. Are talents really talents? The butt determines the head. The identity of the book is not clear in the two hundred and close to three hundred chapters, and it does not fit the structure of the novel. The climax is not obvious, and it is a bit dull. It's not criticism, but anger at the protagonist's indisputability. The author still needs to work hard.

How about the author just kill the main character and the whole book would be finished! It has been suppressed, and the books that could have become popular have been suppressed! Who still likes to read such frustrating books nowadays?

It feels like you are enjoying yourself with the updated content during this period, and I don't have the desire to subscribe even after looking at the chapter names. You play slowly, I'll keep it up for a while. After a week, I can still delete it at this progress. There are already so many chapters? When will you admit it?

The king of Qin swept Liuhe, what a majestic sight! "Okay!" "Next, let's take a look at the equipment of the Qin Dynasty that unified the six countries - the Tiger tank!" Crew: 5 people (commander, gunner, driver, loader, radio operator) Engine: Maybach HL 210 P30-12 650hp (early) Maybach HL 230 P45-12 700hp (late) power 700 horsepower Maximum speed: 38 kilometers (highway)/15~21 kilometers (off-road) Range: 110-160 km (highway) 80km (off-road) Fuel consumption per 100 kilometers: highway 450L off-road 650L Fuel tank capacity 540L Trench width 2.3M obstacle clearance height 0.79M grade 35° Total length: 8.45M gun barrel pointed forward 8.451M gun barrel pointed rearward 8.379M body length without gun barrel 6.280M height: 2.86M gun central axis height 2.195M ground to chassis height 0.470M turret height with commander's tower 1.200M Width: 3.4-3.7M Body width with combat tracks 3.560M to outer wheel disc body width 2.822M Combat track width 0.725M (attached: body width with transport tracks 3.230M) Weapons: 2 X 7.92 MG34 machine guns and 88mm KwK 36 L/56 tank gun (early) 3 X 7.92 MG34 machine gun (rear) 6 135-150 mm 0 degrees Ni-Chromium-Manganese high-pressure cast steel (non-overlapping part) Turret front 102 mm 9 degrees PP7182 Ni-Chromium-Manganese-Molybdenum rolled steel (completely obscured by the mantlet) Turret sides 82 mm 0 degrees E22 Nickel-Chromium Manganese rolled steel Tiger line diagram Turret back 82 mm 0 degrees E22 Nickel chromium manganese rolled steel Turret top 40 mm 90 degrees E22 Nickel chromium manganese rolled steel Hull front upper 102 mm 9 degrees PP7182 Nickel chromium manganese molybdenum rolled steel Hull center center 63 mm 80 degrees E22 Nickel chromium manganese rolled steel Hull front lower 102 mm -25 degrees PP7182 Nickel-chromium-manganese-molybdenum rolled steel (sometimes with additional tracks attached) Vehicle side top 82 mm 0 degrees E22 Nickel-chromium-manganese rolled steel Vehicle side bottom 63 mm 0 degrees Steel type E22 Nickel-chromium-manganese rolled steel (hidden by road wheels) Rear of car body 82 mm -15 degrees E22 Nickel-chromium manganese rolled steel Front top of car body 40 mm 90 degrees E22 Nickel-chromium-manganese rolled steel Vehicle rear top 25 mm 90 degrees E32 Chromium-manganese rolled steel Hull bottom 25 mm 90 degrees E32 Chromium-manganese rolled steel Main gun penetration: (shooting at an angle of 30 degrees) 50% probability of penetration High-quality target plate Ammunition 100m 500m 1000m 1500m 2000m Pzgr39 armor-piercing bullet 120mm 110mm 100mm 91mm 84mm Pzgr40 armor-piercing bullet 171mm 156mm 138mm 123mm 110mm Radio equipment: ultra-short wave Fu.2 Receiver Ultrashort wave Fu.5 Transmitter and receiver Scope: Carl Zeiss T. Z. F.9B scope

If we continue writing this, Qin will still be in ruins as before, so what is the use of the protagonist and what is its significance?

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The preface does not match the postscript, and it can even kill the assassin of the First Emperor. He can't even beat a barbarian slave in the back. The First Emperor's secret guards were still following and investigating, but when these things happened, the First Emperor was like a blind man. If the First Emperor only had this kind of control over Xianyang, he would be dead long ago. Knowing that Qin Shihuang's purpose was to starve those high-ranking officials to death, he still wanted to save them when it was all over. Finally, I also used a method of making ink to turn it into a piece of shit, and then the First Emperor was like a shrimp, not even knowing about it. To get such shitty fan points, I had to pay two coins to come and spit. Oh Te ಠಠconvex