Don't Mess with That Turtle

Overall, it's good, but some of the foreshadowing is too low-level. The realm setting is good. It's a bit messy, but it's okay. It's a bit novel. Two shortcomings. 1. The emotional scene is no good. It must be a straight line for normal travel and development. When there is an emotional scene, the straight line will be concave, so it seems quite uncomfortable sometimes. 2. The foreshadowing is too low-level and too revealing. The purpose is to be known at a glance and can easily cause counter-effects.

It's quite good-looking, but it's not very popular, but it's a bit confusing, and for someone like me who can see everything at a glance, it's hard to remember.

Duan is a bandit turtle, snatching food and opportunities. After being reincarnated and cultivating the Xuanwu body, he also has to seize the inheritance of the Turtle Clan. He was reborn as a turtle and took away the Wolf King's demon fruit at the beginning. This turtle was so arrogant that he was later hunted down by the wolves and provoked many other races. He was always on the verge of fighting and testing wildly. But for such a turtle, he finally became an immortal and became his ancestor...

The emotional line brought this book down, but the plot was originally pretty good.

~Readers who have finished reading this book or are new to the book and don't quite understand it, please read here~ Many people say that the timeline of this book is messy, but that's not the case. I'll give you a brief explanation (it's not a spoiler, it's not complete). From a normal timeline, it is assumed that the order of time is 1~9. Then at 2 o'clock, the big boss Yuan appeared, and Daozu killed him several times (it was set that Yuan was immortal and could only be killed under certain circumstances). Among them, Daozu's disciple Tiandi went against the river of time and stopped him before 1. Many people have made preparations to completely eliminate Yuan. Among them, a Tiance Immortal discovered the body (the male protagonist's previous life) containing the breath of "Yuan" (Tao Te Ching), and snatched it (only the source can fight against the yuan) and planned to reincarnate him. He was resurrected at 9 o'clock in the normal timeline. The male protagonist can control time (the ability is not the same). Not obtained at the beginning) Return to time point 8765432 to retrieve what the Immortal Lord, Dao Ancestor or others planned for him to use to improve his own strength, and finally return to the normal timeline 9 to lead the world's strong men back to before 1 and completely kill Yuan. The above is the overall timeline. The author writes it in the male protagonist's time, so it reads like the male protagonist is constantly jumping back and forth in the timeline, which is confusing. In fact, everyone did not understand it. The author of this book is very well written, with a clear mind and clear logic. He uses a lot of uncommon words in the article, which shows that the author has a very high literary quality. I hope what I wrote can give you some help. The novel is more complicated than mine, and the content is very substantial. I just gave you an outline to prevent you from not understanding it, thinking that the book is not good, and wasting a good book. Not a spoiler, not a spoiler.

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The logic is self-consistent and all the remaining pitfalls have been filled in. It is much better than those little white articles with simple accounts.

It was quite interesting at first, but then it became too boring and messy, just like reading a text.

It's humorous and has no typos. It feels like you've read one chapter and then moved on to the next. I'm very satisfied!