I Became a Taoist by Refining Weapons in the World of Immortality

I feel that the suppression of the protagonist is a bit harsh, and the suppression of the blessing entries is increased by multiples, which scares me to death. In the future, I will not be able to perform the blessing once in several years, and it is equal to nothing.

This book gave me a different feeling, it started anticlimactically, or it ended like a dog's tail. I have read 173 chapters so far, and I will know the general content by looking at the chapter names. When I looked at the previous article, I thought it would be a fairy tale with a system and a preference for traditional fairy tales. It would have its own setting in the world of Kai Ling and Ten Thousand Spirits. In the future, the protagonist would slowly upgrade and then improve the strength of the weapon refining, mainly leaning towards tradition. But later the author told me that this is not the case. After the protagonist reaches the middle stage of Qi training, his weapon-refining strength begins to improve by leaps and bounds. Moreover, the improvement of the weapon-refining strength has nothing to do with the system. This is obviously biased towards Shuangwen. The key is that the weapon-refining strength is biased towards Shuangwen, itself. His qi training strength is still slow, which is a bit like Gou Dao style. In addition, the protagonist has not been told that his understanding is good, but the protagonist is good at refining weapons, seals, and formations. This tends to be a genius style. In short, the protagonist is like a genius style + Gou Dao style before forming an elixir. When the protagonist is waiting for the elixir to be formed, the author will perform a time tribulation, isn't it just to forcibly enhance the protagonist's strength? The protagonist also has various avenues of understanding, especially time, space and cause and effect. These three avenues are rarely understood in the world of spirits. This is equivalent to the protagonist coming out of that secret realm and being invincible under the gods. Those above the gods may not dare to attack the protagonist for fear of cause and effect. Then isn't it just a matter of pushing and then ascending? Isn't this just a cool article? In this case, what are you doing in front of you? You can just write a cool article from beginning to end. This is just an anticlimax, or a tail end. In addition, the title of your book is about weapon refining, and the system is mainly about weapon refining, but I don't understand your experience of that system very well. I suggest you read novels about data flow. This is not important. What is important is that I feel that after the protagonist comes out of that secret realm, he will know so many great ways, so weapon refining is not important. Moreover, the protagonist can refine weapons, make talismans, alchemy, and formations. It gives the impression that the protagonist is all-powerful, and refining weapons is not important. This way of writing does not highlight how good the protagonist is at refining weapons. This makes me feel that this system is not dispensable, and it does not necessarily have to be a weapon refining system. You can just create a system that can open entries for magical weapons, talismans, elixirs, and formation disks. Then changing the title of the book to "Four Arts to Become an Immortal" is better than yours. Anyway, this book gave me the feeling of inconsistency. As for whether it starts at the beginning but ends at the beginning, or ends at the end of the day, that is your own opinion.

Personally, I think this novel on the art of cultivating immortals is very well written. Many novels on cultivating immortals nowadays are just a pile of resources without any understanding, and are purely materialistic. Some people cultivate immortality in the underworld way and engage in all kinds of evil behaviors. There are also systems that cultivate immortality, and the protagonist becomes a support. These three categories have no celestial spirit at all. If you don't want to save sentient beings, you should at least do good to the world.

Although it cannot be said to be a fairy grass, from the immature writing style, it can be seen that the author has worked hard on the same system of cultivating immortals in Shuangwen. Many settings have been carefully thought out and are already very powerful! And as the chapters increase and the plot becomes more and more fleshed-out, maybe if more people read it in the future, some people will say something like the poisonous point, but we have to admit that the author is not following the crowd but trying to write something of his own. This is something that many system writers from Qidian are missing. After all, they are either making fun of jokes or cool text templates.

Was there a change of characters in this book? As soon as Zhao Huo'er came out in the early stage, the protagonist's character changed from a slut to a wild one, and then until the senior sister was given away for free, he completely felt like a disciple. I didn't see the fairy spirit at all, but the urban spirit became more and more intense, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. After looking at the table of contents, I found that the article has become more interesting. Why was it so depressing in the early stage? The sect was slapped in the face and the daughter was given away. It was hard for people to hold back.

I prefer the genre of reasoning themes, but the dispute between book and art that the author added is too unreasonable, and it is too blunt in order to increase the conflict. This is fundamentally different from the dispute over sword energy. The two factions, Ben and Yi, may have different ideas, but cultivating immortality is very personal. Where is the conflict of interest between the two? Is it so sharp? The most outrageous thing is that art represents a producer. In theory, it will be richer and more able to create wealth, and wealth can overtake others in corners and cultivate faster. You may not like to study your skills and concentrate on your practice, but if you hate others studying their skills, you won't be able to stand up. Those who have no hope of breaking through in spiritual practice, don't they delve into their craft? So which faction are they? Moreover, this sect is still a sect based on skills. The two sects of this art are not so incompatible with each other.

The novel was well written and I read it in one sitting. However, I always felt that there was something wrong with the pace. During the foundation building period, I wanted to cram everything into the protagonist. New things, new world views, and new characters appeared one after another. The foundation building and golden elixir even involved the Immortal Lord. , After the golden elixir, I can't write anything and just speed up with one hand. Are those Taoist things really possible with foundation building? The protagonist understands them in one click, and he can use them after he understands them. It's so much that it's a bit funny. It feels like he can't stop writing and can't stop the car.

Since the appearance of Zhen'er, the character logic and plot rhythm of this book have gradually lost control. The cool writing makes people feel awkward but not happy.

It dug a lot of obvious pitfalls, and the writing was very rough. The level of Qi training worried Yuanying's heart. Looking at the early stage, it felt like a eunuch novel, giving people a feeling of rushing to the street.

Do you think I won't recognize you after you put on a new vest? You old eunuch.

It would be nice if this book didn't write about women.

There is a breath of fresh air in Cultivation of Immortals, which makes people feel comfortable watching it. Even though I don't like Cultivation of Immortals, I actually enjoyed it! The author continues to maintain that cultivating immortals should not be all about fighting and killing.

I am most afraid of the kind of protagonist who has obviously joined a sect and likes to be a lone wolf after being organized. This kind of protagonist also reflects the author's personality in reality, which is probably very withdrawn. Obviously some common sense knowledge in the world of immortality is taught every day in the sect, but the protagonist does not know it and needs to ask an outsider to understand it. This kind of protagonist really regards himself as the protagonist.

I like it so much. Please update it and think about it carefully. I am optimistic that this book will become a god. Come on author! ! ! !

I have read more than 90 chapters and would like to share my thoughts. Except for the heroine's setting, which is a bit off-putting, everything else is pretty good. Why does the diaphragm respond? First of all, you said that love comes first, so there is no controversy in your choice of Senior Sister Zhao. But you turned around and made a three-part agreement with Senior Sister Zhao, saying that when he completes the dual cultivation method, you will go back to find that beautiful Qi Practitioner Sister Where is your Taoist partner first? That qi training sister's qualifications are not described well, right? At most, he has a middle-level spiritual root and has no background, right? Then abandoning Senior Sister Zhao and looking for Tong, isn't it just because you are greedy for her body? Then you just write that the protagonist likes Tong very much, but you talk about the couple first. Is that inconsistent? Author, you wanted to create a protagonist whose moral character comes first, but in my opinion, you didn't create it well. Instead, he was a bit like a villain in this aspect If you want to open a harem, what kind of moral character comes first, and what kind of character comes first? I think it would be more reasonable than what you are writing now to intersperse some instructions from the boss to marry Senior Sister Zhao instead of pursuing the absurd idea that Tao comes first, or you can just make Tong a hidden identity with a backstage and only the protagonist knows about it, not Tong himself. Furthermore, when it comes to Taoist couple, this couple refers to partners. You don't necessarily have to find a woman to be your husband and wife to be considered a partner, right? A male Taoist friend who is of great help to your Taoism. As a friend, he often discusses the principles of nature and the truth of the Tao. Isn't that also considered a kind of companion? Or it can give you psychological comfort so that you are no longer lonely. For example, isn't that second brother also considered a kind of companion? The so-called Tao comes first to the partner, which means that you will stab the partner in the back at the critical moment. . Maybe the author wants to write that the road walks alone, the protagonist will not stop for them, but will only walk on the road. The couple cannot follow the footsteps of the protagonist, and the protagonist will abandon them for the road. But author, have you ever thought that you, the Tao comes first, and the partner comes first, which means a bit of backstabbing. For example, if you want to get an opportunity that has a great impact on the protagonist, you need to backstab your partner. According to the Tao, the partner comes first, will you take action? This is a problem. I don't know if you, the author, wrote the harem to cater to the market, or if you just wanted to write it this way. I can only say that it was not written well Except for your heroine setting, I like everything else. Because I really like this book (except for the heroine), I wrote a long article about it, and that's it.

After that, Zhen'er completely collapsed. When he couldn't make any achievements in refining weapons, he started to enjoy raising his apprentice's wife, which was extremely boring. Setting up a cultivation factory is extremely poisonous, and seeing a space-traveling murder ring is even more poisonous. Not to mention whether the setting of this kind of thing is reasonable, the collapse of the worldview caused by this kind of irresponsible killing and the collapse of the character caused by the face of unlimited money-making, demonstrating a magic weapon can kill other people, and make me spit out my lunch.

Rubbish, the people around you are either geniuses or children of Qiyun. Once you level up, you can randomly create some really awesome real spirits. They are one and cannot be controlled. Let's not talk about the wives, but they still turn into nine clever elixirs at every turn. It's really worthless. Not logical at all. Give up the trap

To be honest, it made my eyes light up. Although some settings are different from other traditional immortality novels, they can still be justified. But for me personally, there are still some things that make it difficult to read. The first is that the settings for practicing instruments are too complicated. They are very detailed in terms of techniques, exercises, etc., But I am just a reader. I don't need to know how to practice. I only need to know how to practice high-quality instruments. I can't understand the too detailed and complicated process, and I tend to be impatient if I can't understand it. Mainly, I don't like to skip reading. The second thing is that I don't really like this kind of protagonist who only practices qi, but is in a chess game that involves practicing virtual power. . . I don't think it's necessary to make it clear at the beginning that it involves high-level monks. It can be revealed step by step. For example, Qi training can involve foundation building, pill formation, and foundation building involves pill formation and Nascent Soul. One or two realms higher than that is a more comfortable range. It was explained at once, but it made me feel very bad. Sometimes knowing too much is not good. In the end, it's still the same author, cheers.

Cultivation of immortality, how come you have luck after cultivating? It's really confusing.

Can you write less about education? What you write about is refining weapons to achieve enlightenment. These chapters are all about teaching people.