Cultivation of Immortality: Controlling Beasts for My Liver Proficiency

The setting of this novel is relatively new. The hero works as a spirit beast. The hero can lower the spirit beast's cultivation level in exchange for the spirit beast's talent. At the same time, he can use the spirit stone to acquire the spirit beast's skills and skills. The plot rhythm is not bad, but there are also shortcomings. First, the combat power is unknown. The hero's Qi training has not been improved. He has been practicing physical training, and then added a physical training foundation in the middle. Personally, I don't like this kind of physical training and foundation building setting. The dual-line improvement is cumbersome, and normal foundation building is also related to the body. This supplementary setting is basically only a special setting for the protagonist and his apprentices. It is too obvious (at least I don't see anyone else except the protagonist group having physical training and foundation building in the article). At that time, I was afraid that if there was another god training and foundation building, it would be 50 chapters. The protagonist's constant pressure on cultivation in order to obtain the early growth talents of spiritual beasts may be a bit satisfying for obsessive-compulsive disorder, but I personally feel that there are still many shortcomings. The early progress is slow, and the foundation building in the later stage is unparalleled. What is perfect? ​​There are many spiritual beasts, and there are also many growth talents. How can it be perfect? In fact, before the foundation building in this article, the combat strength was unknown but the protagonist was invincible. In order to achieve the so-called perfect foundation building and initial accumulation, the progress of cultivation was crazy. After a few years of foundation building, he was still basically invincible during the foundation period. I do not recommend this writing method. The protagonist's golden finger is actually very powerful. Everyone prefers to see the protagonist and the spirit beast grow together, rather than paving the way for a long time before the foundation building, and infinitely improving the male protagonist's spirit beast's various talents and skills. The plot and growth are all step-by-step. The accumulation before the basic foundation building in the article makes the protagonist group feel almost invincible. Just wait for time to grow, and the gains after the foundation building are the icing on the cake. The reader does not feel that kind of growth. Anyway, isn't the invincible potential still invincible?

The most annoying thing is that a foundation builder doesn't practice well and wants to save the world. This is too poisonous.

It's a good book but it's not popular yet. I've given you a monthly pass. You have to be more diligent and update more. The daily updates are too few.

My friend, if you want to write a serious article about cultivating immortals, don't be affected by your own daily life and find a prostitute halfway through, a bed warmer and a nanny, right? This book is obviously influenced by "Dao Zheng Zheng". Why don't you just write about Dao with all your heart and insist on inserting such a kick in the middle?

There is a bit of a mismatch between the job of squeezing beasts and the title of master and apprentice. Just change the title of master and apprentice to follow or recognize the master.

I feel like the protagonist is useless, so it would be much better to let Tietou be the protagonist. Hahaha

Those demons are so cunning. They will definitely play tricks on the skills they get. It is impossible to do nothing. With so many years of game experience, it seems to be increasingly useless. It is best for the protagonist to deduce and verify whether the skills are right or wrong. Otherwise, I feel very awkward. I believe that everything taken from the enemy has problems. This subjective consciousness must be carefully checked.

Recently, the mythical beast Palu has been on fire. It seems that the setting is somewhat similar to this book. The author can learn from it.

There are too many abilities, too complicated, too confusing for readers to remember, and neither can the author himself. The abilities that appeared in the early stage never appear again in the later period. You will forget about it after reading the book for a week or two. It is too messy and confusing for readers, and they have no choice but to give up their minds.

Suppressing the protagonist's cultivation level is too harsh. I mentioned the third level of Qi training before and then talked about the foundation building of the Wu family. To be honest, the jump is too big and it is a bit exaggerated. Moreover, the author did not talk about the protagonist's cultivation level. Why? He keeps collecting spiritual objects to build the foundation. It doesn't say that it is not done. At the third level of Qi training, go to collect spiritual objects, okay, okay, okay.

I have a question. Every time I get feedback from a pet, I need to consume the pet's cultivation level, and then the pet has to cultivate it again. Now you can cheat and rebuild your skills, but what about in the future? After the foundation is established, what happens after the golden elixir? How come the pet's hard-earned cultivation is gone in one fell swoop? How can the protagonist guarantee that the pet will not lose favorability and will not turn against him?

After reading so many books for so many years, in the field of fairy tales, there are really few that can be refreshing. This book can be said to be a white rabbit jumping out of the coal pile, a refreshing white lotus in the midst of filth. It is so rare! Nowadays, fairy tales are over-exploited. Many underworld cultivators, ordinary people, old turtles, and old turtles cultivate immortality. All kinds of old-fashioned and dull routines and studio novels make my old bookworms like me feel sick. By chance, I came across this book, which is really rare. It is mainly because of the author's writing style and ideas, and it contains many of the original vitality and luck of the original monsters! I highly recommend this book to everyone. You will definitely not regret or be disappointed after reading it! I sincerely hope that the author can maintain this young spirit, embark on the road to greatness unimpeded, earn an annual salary of tens of millions, and maintain the youthful spirit!

I was confused by the author. Whose cultivation level will be reduced by shared talents?

The most unreasonable part of this book is that the so-called proficiency is not linked to the realm, making it a joke that there is a period of Qi training for full proficiency.

Isn't it funny to jump into a gang and board the ship during the airship battle? The reason for playing water battles is because you will drown if you fall into the sea. Even if you don't drown in the water, you can't hit the boat. Even the monks can fly. Isn't it nonsense that you still play this game? In a tank battle, will anyone jump into a tank to destroy the enemy?

It would be very awkward to have a board chairman in the world of cultivating immortals...

I have read Chapter 149 of the book, and I think the first part is okay, but the later chapters are getting worse and worse. I feel a bit cheated.

Is the writing quality good? Why don't you write it? If you stick to it, you will definitely become popular.

The author wants to finish it. Is there anyone still following me? Every once in a while, the body is faked. Are you married and staying with your wife 24 hours a day? Can't find time to write a 2,000-word chapter? My sixth sense tells me that the marriage you mentioned is just an excuse to start a new book.

It broke again, and I knew that this kind of breakage couldn't be cured. Brothers, remember, brokenness cannot be cured.

Has the author written any other books?

Thousands of tempers and hundreds of refinements create true immortals, thousands of hammers carve out deep mountains, and there are good books to read. There is no doubt about the accumulation of Qi training and foundation building. The key is that there is too little explanation on the improvement of combat power and the system of cultivating immortals after foundation building, which is a bit confusing. 1. To suppress demon cultivators of the same level is to win through skill. If the combat power is equal, there is an advantage. It is no problem to use formations to defeat demons to earn profits. The key is that there is basically no description of the talent. Guessing the word corresponds to the increase in combat power. It is a bit vague. 2. The portrayal of human nature is very successful, and the description of the fighting scenes is also in place. However, the combat power system is vague, and all I see is crushing. Some people can't figure out where the crushing is. In fact, there is no need to describe. Some paragraphs in the foreshadowing chapters can explain, and everything is said to be a sure victory. The early foreshadowing has been done, and then the pursuit of fighting can be overturned. Maybe it is because of the reader that I understand the author's intentions. 3. One sentence in the article is very suitable for the protagonist. Going to the Demon Realm to become a demon cultivator corresponds not to the protagonist's story line but to the author's own improvement. The author has the ability to control the protagonist's direction and have an outline of the main thread of cultivating immortality. This is another success of the author. 4. The author's original intention directly explains the success of the protagonist, without too much depression and grievance, and is very refreshing and suitable for the style of the book. There are also some doubts, and the accumulation is gradually lost. The key points of success of extraordinary talents cannot be grasped, which leads to the blurring of the combat power system. It is a bit foggy. Reading hundreds of thousands of words in three hours may be too fast and leads to nothing. There is no need for numbers to equal combat power. There is no need to deliberately say that the problem is powerful. The author's description is too secretive? 5. The descriptions required for the three levels of foundation building are a great help for this book. Various materials representing strength such as lifespan, mana, and talent are the ideas that lay the foundation and prepare for the sweep of the golden elixir. I feel that the power system is almost unbearable, and then there is the golden elixir, or some chapters in the middle and late stages of foundation building are not available, and others have not been written yet, which leads to confusion. It is enough to carry on the above and see the follow-up. 6. It is reasonable for the description of mini-games to slowly fade into the background. The problem is that the book has already described the realm of refining the void, and there are gods in the sect. The mini-games bring out the role of talents. It is too urgent. Without games, there is no talent, without talents, there is no combat power. It is completed in one line. This is a The author's order of the main plot is really too urgent. Don't abandon the mini-games. It seems that the talent is more important than the game. In fact, it is not brought about by the game. The combat power and main plot of many articles are scary and can only be regarded as cool articles. However, this book may have the potential to become a high-quality book or a divine book. 7. The above content is just a reflection. I hope the author will work hard and update 100,000 words a day. The donkeys of the production team will not dare to stop. If they stop, they will have no fodder to eat. 8. It is estimated that the author has not saved the manuscript. There are many places that can be pondered without the word "water". I wish the author will get to 5 as soon as possible and make a lot of money every day.

How should I put it, the writing is actually good, but the end of the previous chapter and the beginning of the next chapter are always inconsistent and the transition is abrupt.

It's a rare product, you can promote it on Longkong.

There are currently 40 pictures. There are no obvious poisonous points, and it is not like other novels that desperately suppress the protagonist.

I quickly changed the submission area. If you vote for Xianxia, ​​you will be popular🔥.

The plot arrangement and writing skills of this book are very solid, and the foundation is very deep. It's just that now everyone has more new tricks, and there are also many new ideas and ideas. Maybe the author's works will need more whimsical ideas and plot arrangements in the future, so as not to fall into the clichés

Well written, just keep this rhythm

The writing is pretty good, there's nothing major wrong with it, please update it more often.

As in the title 😰😰😰