After Four Lifetimes of Accumulation, I Asked About Immortality in the World of Immortality.

The profile of a pretty guy with bad views makes people less interested in reading it.

If the Ninth Life Reincarnation Sutra does not reincarnate for nine lives, wouldn't it be unfair to the name of this practice? The protagonist is now in his fifth life, and he should become an immortal in the future. However, the five worlds of mortals alone have not reached the extreme of this skill, and the skill has not been perfected. This kind of immortality can only be regarded as barely reaching the threshold of becoming an immortal. In the mortal world, one person is above him, but in the immortal world, he is below ten thousand people. This seems to make people sigh.

No matter how much the art renaissance happens, I don't think the situation in the introduction is any better! Instead, I felt quite embarrassed and it was a huge poison! The benefits of being low-key and seeing a little growth every day are the eternal pleasures. Only children find it pleasant to show their holiness in front of others.

The girl in white hit the protagonist three times, and then the protagonist went to the bamboo forest in the middle of the night. I think the reason why he didn't come is that the protagonist didn't go alone.

It spends too much space describing the contradictions and conflicts between the lower-level disciples, and also tries to make the protagonist use tough, wise and powerful methods to solve these disgusting troubles. Is this projecting reality into a different world? The difference is that the real world is a low-military world, and the people at the bottom have the value of being incited and bewitched. The world in the book is a world of high martial arts, and the people and disciples at the bottom have no value at all in being instigated. And there is some mystique in the writing technique, which makes readers feel uncomfortable when reading. The author's writing power is somewhat lacking, and he doesn't handle it well when trying to ambush the pen, making the reader very uncomfortable. It is recommended to either improve the level of processing, or simply reduce the so-called ambush and write more straightforwardly so as not to make readers too tired. It is not impossible to bury foreboding pens, but don't bury too many. Too many will appear mysterious and cause readers' aesthetic fatigue. The author writes very seriously, but I feel a little tired after reading it.

There was no market for this kind of novel at Qidian. It has more than a hundred chapters and only a few comments can tell. The whole novel has no main plot.

What can I say? It's well written. Good luck to the author. It's just not in line with my personal taste. I couldn't see the plot that was going around in circles at first, and I was confused and couldn't figure out what the situation was. I gave up. We are destined to see each other again after a long journey.

Nine reincarnations. If there is basically no hope of becoming an immortal in the ninth life

"Sword Cut Ascension": [Immortal Hero] + [Goldfinger (touch corpse)] + [Fairy Birds and Beasts] + [Immortal Realm] + [Ascended Person] + [Sword and Magic Dual Cultivation]... Ascended Person? Isn't that the kind of person who comes up on his knees to beg for food?

Oh my god, the author has written more than 200 chapters naked and updated them on time. With great perseverance, you are the next starting point to become a god. Come on! I haven't read the book, but even if this one fails, you can always excel as long as you find the right subject.

Even a handyman who was on the first level of Qi training was dealt with, and he was forced to create a conflict. It was extremely blunt.

Cultivation of previous lives, perhaps reincarnation-like exercises are very common among old men

The plot in Pharmacist Wang's story happened too suddenly and was a bit inexplicable.

In the fourth reincarnation, you still keep suppressing me

The writing is not concise enough, the plot is too deliberate, and you don't act like you have been reincarnated for four lifetimes. If you have a goal, then you should write in order to move forward in the direction of the goal ✍ (four life experiences, survival methods, what you know, how to move forward, human feelings), unimportant plots should be abbreviated, and it is not reflected at all in your book. Show it.

There will probably be several heroines 🙂

I have accumulated a hammer in four lifetimes, but the top-level sacred tree and supporting techniques are still slow to practice?

Nothing makes you unable to understand. Chapter 30 has been being controlled. Haha.