Healing the World, I Only Want to Live Forever

In order to survive, I have to wait until it is safe enough to forge ahead. Even though I have reached the pinnacle in the secular world, I still dare not modify the Mohist policy. There is also the inner breath technique. Upgrade it. You told me that there is only one more incarnation in the body, and then you add a setting that will not be used all at once. In order to suppress Although I don't understand the author's follow-up outline, as a fully-booked reader, it's too depressing. You may say it's great, but it's frustrating. Or you may say you're unhappy. The pinnacle of the secular world has come to an end, but you have already reached the pinnacle. Is there any difference between what you did before and what you did before? Standing tall and watching other people who are not as powerful as you argue? If you have an idea, why can't you express it yourself? Do you want to write a book to save the world? How come you have such an idea? Not everyone can read doctors' books, even if they can't bring it up due to productivity reasons

You, the protagonist, have a slightly lower sense of existence. You always talk about the sufferings of the world. Who doesn't know this kind of thing, but you tell it to make it sad and can't change the general trend Always talk about national affairs, but you can't change it, which can only make readers more depressed The writing is good, but the story is too depressing.

The book is a good book. Staying up late to read the latest chapters is very attractive to me. It can be seen that the author's literary skills are very solid. From time to time in the article, the plot progresses naturally without being stiff. The characterization is delicate but not brainless. The writing style is like two friends chatting in the mountains. The words flow away in the wind, delicate yet without losing depth. The overall feeling is very comfortable. Of course, there are still some suggestions that can be made despite being picky. In fact, the main perspective may not be entirely on the protagonist. The characters of the characters appearing in the book (such as Mo Qiu and Gong Shang) have been fully established. You can spend more time to develop them from their perspective and write a group portrait novel to enhance the layering of the storyline. After all, the protagonist is still not out of the world. Moreover, after reading about sixty chapters, the protagonist from the main perspective is still nestling in his own nest, but he can definitely write some unit plot stories to enrich the protagonist's character image, and it will not be boring to read. For example, there is a plot in the middle where he is drafted into the army to become a doctor. It can be written in detail in a few chapters. (You can add some side stories while promoting the main plot), write about the human side of the protagonist (the supporting characters are very humane, but the protagonist is not enough), and by the way, also write down the requirements related to collecting gold fingers (don't write too much about gold fingers). The title of the book is Hanging Pot to Help the World, there should still be such a thing (this should also be the main plot, right?). The protagonist is still only over 30 years old, not to mention that the protagonist is a time traveler. The current protagonist should and needs to have some idealist color. Even if the protagonist has bad intentions at first (a personal idea of ​​a literary youth), the protagonist's Xuanhujishi in troubled times should also be shown, and Xuanhujishi should also occupy one-third of an acre in the book. After reading the book, I thought about it in bed for more than half an hour. After much deliberation, I still wrote this much. I apologize for any shortcomings. The suggestions are just personal opinions. The author should develop according to his own outline. The book is a good book and the future is promising. The author gives a lot of support 🙂🙂🙂

The characters are full-bodied and the writing is indeed strong. However, in the group portrait novel, the protagonist's sense of presence is not high. The whole book is too depressing. It always contains some tragic stories, but the protagonist cannot change, and it will become boring if there are too many. The title of the book might as well be changed to, Dynasty Struggle for Hegemony: Immortality to Experience the Sufferings of the World

I really don't understand, Mo Qiu has already been made into a saint and the author pulled him down again! At that time, it was already perfect if it was really dead. It does not mean that perfection is the best. The pig's foot did a lot of things to save him, and even put it in the fairy's coffin to create a resurrection weapon. He was martyred! Although the career is not yet completed, it is perfect to die practicing the truth, but what happened with the pig's feet is very awkward and disgusting. Other characters can be resurrected by pig's feet at will, but Mo Qiu has been made into a saint, so other Mo masters can kill Mo Qiu at will, right? Even if the immortal coffin is placed in front of Mo Qiu for him to choose, he won't use it himself! This is contrary to His Word! It looks very awkward and stripped-down. It looks like the pig's feet are focusing on love and justice, but they are actually corrupting Mo Qiu's way! The meaning of Mo Qiu's martyrdom was completely different. What an ambition to sacrifice! This role can come to an end, but if I have to drag it out and keep it afloat, this role will not survive.

Seeing now, summary: the protagonist is on the way on horseback

Fuck, I'm so confused when I read your book, I feel like it's useless even if I'm invincible.

The writing style is sophisticated, and it is considered top-notch among longevity essays. It's just that the title of the book is a bit useless, and after reading the latest chapter, there is almost no saying that it can help the world by hanging the pot. Also, in my mind, "Xuan Hu Ji Shi" refers specifically to doctors who treat illnesses and save people.

Although the protagonist achieves immortality, he seems extremely childish in this book! Originally, I had the golden finger that could save the world, and my martial arts had reached a level where I could protect myself. Then instead of practicing medicine, I could do other things and save my longevity to break through the immortal magic. The road ahead for martial arts was already confused, wasn't it? In addition, the characterization of Mo Qiu and other characters is good, but I think it is a bit overdone. This book is about the path of the immortal. When you write about the life of a Guangweizheng character such as Mo Qiu, you want to set off a splendid experience in the immortal's road to immortality. However, writing too many of these people will make the protagonist's sense of existence too low, or it will appear that the protagonist is just a commoner. Such ordinary people are not lovable even for immortals. Finally, the author needs to pay attention to the plot settings. There is no feeling in the double points. People can be calm and relaxed, but your plot cannot be as bland as water, otherwise the reputation will definitely decline if it continues like this.

Can the queen leave the palace at will? He also often goes to the protagonist's house. The emperor can tolerate this 😐😐