Logging In, Starting with Devouring

The monsters are written too strong, and the bosses in the early stage are just miscellaneous soldiers in the later stage. In the end, facing the monsters, the apprentice level is just an ant, and the planet level may still be an ant. Only the star level can hope to be on an equal footing. According to the rhythm of swallowing the stars, the protagonist will be suppressed for more than a hundred chapters. Realism is realism, but it's a pity that I chose the wrong subject matter. Most of the people who clicked in came in for the fans of Swallowing Starry Sky. They had a good sense of Swallowing Starry Sky. As a result, the ceiling in the early stage of Swallowing Starry Sky was worthless in the different world in the fandom. To be honest, I felt uncomfortable watching it. If I were not a fan of Devouring the Starry Sky and simply wrote about that world of demons and chaos, perhaps my results would have been much better. It's targeting the wrong readership. Those who want to see original works will not come in if they see that it is a fan work. Those who want to see a fan work of Devouring Starry Sky will come in and feel uncomfortable and then leave. The writing ability has reached a level that I can follow, but I don't like the content very much. I'm looking forward to a major revision or the next book.

It is recommended to use Devouring Starry Sky as the main world and abandon the demon world, and the results will immediately go up.

What about updates? Where did your update go?

If you are a fan who writes about Devouring, your introduction will directly persuade them to quit. The main theme of Devouring is about dedication and stressing that everything is for the ethnic group. You come here and just want to develop your own one-third of an acre of land with peace of mind? I'm not even interested in taking a look at it, so it would be nice to come over and complain about it.

Some can't stand it anymore. The demon world chosen for the main world is really not good, and Golden Finger is not very good either. To be honest, in the world of demons, as a human being, with the protagonist's strength, being discovered by demons means death. The key is that it is not a secret that the protagonist is human, many people know it. Without Mrs. Bai Jing's various care, the protagonist would have died long ago. The author of Devour also arranged for the protagonist warrior to start the game. Force the inheritance of the Fallen Ink Star to Luo Feng? The question is why I clicked in to read this book despite its average performance? Because there is Devour, there are actually some readers who want to see the protagonist compete with Luo Feng and search for opportunities. The author took care of some students who didn't want to see the protagonist compete with Luo Feng for a chance, but he also lost the hearts of readers who wanted to see this.

I feel that these are professional writers, who are paid based on the number of words. They don't care whether their writing is good or not. They just need to know how to write essays after graduating from elementary school. They start with something, start with something, write one page to explain for several pages, and the defense is the best way to make up the words. You listen to me making up... No, you listen to me explaining...! The readers are not even given the chance to make up their own minds.

I don't know why, but every time I write a fanfic about Swallowing Starry Sky, I have to write a few more worlds. Isn't it good to concentrate on writing about Swallowing Starry Sky? (You have to make it yourself and no one will see it)

After reading more than thirty chapters, the author is very innovative and writes something of his own. Don't pay attention to those who are trolling, stick to your own ideas

I remember that in the original work, the star-level golden-horned behemoth withstood the detonation of a series of nuclear bombs in an instant before being seriously injured. It was all killed by several planet-level star-level wheels native to the earth. Alas. . . In the end, when we arrived in the main world, the author used the star-level analogy to compare the combat power of the demon king in the streets. However, according to the author's description, the destructive power of the demon king has just reached the planetary level threshold. . . Therefore, 99% of all Devouring fans who came here for the title of the book were filled with depression.

I'm speechless. It's so uncomfortable to watch. What is the universe level and what is the domain lord level? With such a high ceiling in the Devouring World, the Territory Lord level can rule a bunch of galaxies. The Silver-Blue Universe State in the Milky Way is where the Territory Lord level is sitting, ruling billions of living planets. As a result, converted to the main world, it is not even considered a big boss at the end of the level? Is that too much? What kind of world is this? A big place can still be the main level of energy production domain?