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The demons are portrayed as too powerful, becoming bosses in the early stages and mere grunts in the later stages. As a result, when facing demons, apprentice-level characters are just ants, planetary-level characters might still be ants, and only stellar-level characters have a chance to stand on equal footing.

I suggest making the world of Swallowed Star the main setting and abandoning the demon world; the results will immediately improve.

Where's the update? Where did your update go?

Your synopsis for a Devouring fanfic is enough to deter readers. The main theme of Devouring is sacrifice and everything is for the sake of the race, while yours is about just wanting to develop one's own little plot of land? I don't even have the interest to take a second look. I'm already grateful that you're here to complain.

I couldn't stand it anymore. The demon world chosen for the main story was indeed poorly chosen, and the protagonist's cheat ability wasn't strong enough. Honestly, in a demon world, the protagonist, as a human, would be dead if discovered by demons, given his strength. The key issue is that the protagonist being human isn't a secret; many people know.

These seem like professional writers, paid by word count. They don't care about the quality of their writing; they just need to be able to write an essay after graduating from elementary school. They start with something, begin with something, and then write one page of explanation followed by several pages of elaboration. Explanations are the easiest way to pad out the word count.

I don't know why, but every time I write a fanfic about Swallowed Star, I have to add several more worlds. Wouldn't it be better to just focus on writing Swallowed Star directly? (No one reads my own creations.)

Having read over thirty chapters, the author's innovation is commendable; they've written something original. Ignore the criticisms and stick to your own ideas.

I remember in the original novel, the Golden Horned Beast, a level-one stellar being, was severely injured after withstanding a series of nuclear explosions, and even then, it was killed by several planetary-level stellar-level natives. Sigh... But in the main world, the author uses a stellar-level analogy to describe the commonplace Demon King's combat power.

Speechless, this is so painful to watch. What is "cosmic level" and what is "domain lord level"? In a world like Devouring Worlds, a domain lord level being high enough to rule over a bunch of star systems, and the Silver Blue Universe Kingdom where the Milky Way is located is ruled by a domain lord level, ruling over billions of inhabited planets...