Leading to the Throne

The amount of information in the first few chapters is a bit large, and the logic is a bit confusing 😒

To be honest, none of the subsequent books are as impressive as Data Eye.

Dreaming back to ten years ago! To be honest, this kind of book title is not suitable now and I can't find an introduction to the topic. At least one of you must tell everyone what kind of story you are going to tell. To be honest, I don't have that strong desire to click in. The time cost is too high 😠

Is it my problem? Why do you feel that the protagonist is so reckless without any trump cards? Goldfinger is similar to the underworld~ It has not been developed or utilized. It only collected three souls when it came up. I don't know what the others are doing? A collection of riddles. The more you read, the more confused you become, and the more you read, the more irritated you become~ The feeling of being pushed along by stones in the river is particularly heavy. There are too many debuffs in the early stage, so I have to move here and there. The rhythm is too anxious.

The protagonist has been solving crimes and helping the police, but they didn't show any sign of it. The protagonist was very cheap.

Every time I see my ex-girlfriend, I want to give up. Can we maintain the excellent tradition of previous works - no heroine? Don't let women stop you from pulling out your gun and subscribing.

Top ten speakers, wait for this book to become popular. I followed the fire.

I don't understand how I want to be cautious and obscene but go ahead without considering my own strength? This is completely God's feeding. If there is danger, it will be directly suppressed by higher-level forces. The hidden dangers have delayed it for so long, and this is the result? After a ritual, he benefited the most, but his power level was still at the bottom. He is the one who can turn pigs into immortals. Is it better to feed the protagonist than a dog? Outrageous

A paper contains dozens of chapters

What is it written about? A mess. The protagonist has no wisdom at all and relies entirely on Goldfinger and Na.

I thought this introduction was a Western fantasy, so I almost gave up on it.

The protagonist is about to die, but he still wants to pay off the debt, has a world with super powers, and still wants to be a social animal. I am really speechless.

The rhythm is very poor. You have been involved in many big events. It gives people a feeling that the world will not change without you. You want to be a virgin. Goldfinger is so strong. The IQ of the protagonist does not feel high.

It's better to go back to writing history + cultivation style, this is your strength

See it, you guys discuss it? ? Is there anyone who dares to write about pig's feet saving heaven and earth and saving the world? ? Do you have that writing style? ?

Let a cutting-edge scientific genius become a soldier. No one with a brain would do that.

The Battle Robe is an author I like very much, and Daoguo is also very successful. The God Throne may be because the author wants to change the subject, similar to the Lord of Mysteries, but I want to say that, at present, the God Throne is not good-looking, and I still like the fairy tales written by the author. As for the author's new book, it should be as easy to understand as possible. There is no need to lower one's standards in order to cater to the readers, and it will only be lost to everyone.

The basic structure and writing style are okay. It was originally a supernatural drama, but in the end, half of it was filled with all kinds of pretentiousness and slaps in the face, and I started writing a medical article to treat cancer. This plot is like cancer to this article. How to treat cancer in a different world with 10,000 words? Come on, do you think everyone will want to read this kind of plot? Who wants to watch "Popular Science: How to Treat Cancer in Another World"? If you are a medical drama, you should make it clear from the beginning. I faint.

The plot-driven description feels too passive. The protagonist follows the plot like a puppet instead of the protagonist driving the plot. The writing is a bit messy.

The opening scene was very confusing. The dead extraordinary detective couldn't just tell who the criminal was, but he was still reasoning to find the criminal!

I feel that the author has a good feel for writing oriental novels, but after reading some of this book, I felt that the immersion and comfort were much different, which is strange.

The previous book "One Man Achieves the Tao" has always been well written, but it's a pity that it is not popular. The writing skills are not inferior to those of the great masters, but the publicity is lacking!

After a wave of blood loss, basically all orders were made. I wanted to save more and read more, but it just failed.

. . . . He actually gave up so quickly

It's such a bad ending. I'm really sorry for my subscription. I'm so disappointed!

When will "I Am Such an Author" be updated? Been waiting for two years.

What a pity_(:з∠)_

Why are you writing about mystery or magic lately?

🌝I came here to spend the remaining points before I quit the network, but it turned out that Chapter V only had 666 points, which was a bit embarrassing and I slipped away. This account will be deprecated.

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