One Person Attains Enlightenment

The writing is so freehand that every fight feels weird. It feels like the author is just making up a random fight. The thought of Buddha's light and the like can just make Pig's Foot realize it, and then a level of nonsense can make a senior boss suddenly lose. It seems that the writing is good, but the core is really no different from a novice's writing.

The protagonist encounters the "long river of history" and "the thought of destruction", which is really scary. "The long river of history" is a very abstract way of writing that comes and goes. It is usually seen in ancient times. At the end of the novel, the novel is unwilling to put effort into writing, so it uses this air-like thing to fill it with water, leaving a unnutritious mess in the end. As a result, I started writing this kind of thing at the beginning of the book 😰, which was scary. In my mind, the only text that regards "The Long River of History" as the main text is "The Tomb of Gods" written by the ancient great god Chen Dong. It talks about "traveling through the long river of history, morning bells and evening drums", "all living beings destroy the sky, and defy the heavens to change their fate". It combines some empty-headed things and some somewhat practical ones. Combining the existing things, I created some words such as "Dugu Baitian, the Great Demon King", "A bit of spiritual consciousness is immortal, and he returns to reverse the world", "Ancient giant claws, a huge black hand in the long river of history". The water is still the same but he writes it with great momentum. But even this kind of famous book cannot keep up with the times. If you ask people to read "Tomb of the Gods" now, what about the long history and the destruction of all living beings... 😰 I feel that the writing method of "the long history" is really too ancient, and it is very easy to turn an originally lively, interesting, self-contained, and immersive "novel world" into a rough abstract painting that is groundless, fake, and perfunctory. The second aspect is that the book has just begun. The protagonist has just started practicing. He is only in the first and second realms. He is still fighting against an ordinary general. He can actually take action on the "long river of history" and suppress a weapon similar to the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. The "thoughts of destruction" that have arisen from the changes of many dynasties and spanned the north and south of the Yangtze River are really full of contradictions, as if [a foundation-building immortal cultivator is playing with the three thousand avenues of ancestor Hongjun 😜] I find reasons for the author myself: the protagonist has something above "outer world", has a self-contained system of spiritual aura, and carries the dragon spirit of the clan. It is easier to come into contact with the "long history" in the Taoyuan of the black and white elders, and the insights gained are restrained against the "thoughts of destruction"--all this still feels not smooth. The "long river of history" is really not something that can be written casually. Later, when I saw the author writing about "Nantanbuzhou", I felt that I had found another reason, that is, the current land of China, which is similar to the Southern and Northern Dynasties, is just a corner of Nandanbuzhou among several major continents. The change of dynasties and the rebellion of the people in this small corner formed the "thought of destruction", and the "long river of history" is only the "long river of history" in this corner, a small corner of the big river. I saw that the author also said that this long river of history is only on "one bank" of the river. Except for this "long history" that scared me like a tiger, the rest of the book felt very vivid, so I couldn't help typing so many words. (I remember when I read pirated books in the past, I couldn't stand the part about "The River of History" when I read the book "Daoguo". At that time, I felt that the vivid and self-contained novel world formed in the early stage was washed away by a false and empty "River of History", and the world view of the novel was immediately destroyed.) When I think about it, the author is really obsessed with the "River of History", so he must exercise restraint... Restraint...

You are also a talent when you write a novel about cultivating immortals with violence.

Although the settings are large and numerous, the author's description is extremely delicate and systematic, not complicated. The characters are carefully drawn, and the external behavior and inner thoughts are clear and organized, with self-consistent logic. The pace of the plot is a little slow, but it is not slow. The protagonist's leap in realm and change of status in the eyes of others have greatly increased the expectations of the early story. The arrangement of Shuangdian is reasonable. Although the protagonist's strength improves rapidly and his entry into Taoism is perfect in one step, the setting and plot are foreshadowing. After reading the public chapter, I have decided to subscribe I hope this book will get better and better, author, please come on.

The first exciting point of this book is basically over. It is suppressed first and then promoted. The improvement of the character's status and the breakthrough of the skills are also written. But I always feel that the author buried the clues too shallowly, leaving some roots in the fun spots as if to pave the way for the next conflict. As a result, it is obviously a cool spot, but there is always something hanging underneath.

Not bad. It's getting more and more interesting!

Can I send it

This is the first time I heard that cultivating an immortal requires reputation. Isn't cultivating an immortal an act against heaven? The kind of immortal who wants to cultivate reputation! Nowadays, don't those celebrities no longer need to practice? !

You are also an old author. Why do you still write about conflicts in such a low-level way? How many books do you think start with conflicts within a family? This routine is so old, it's just bad. This is no longer the time for you to write about results. After so many years, you should change your routine. Don't fall into the monotony of pretending to be slapped in the face. And most importantly, you are really not happy enough to write a book. There are dozens of depressing plots in the past, and pretending to be B may only be one or two chapters, and it will pass by in a hurry. Of course, I don't expect you to change this old habit of yours, but today is different from the past, and your grades may really get lower and lower.

🤔I think Chen Cuo plans to repay the favor he owes to Xianmen Aren't you planning to repay the update that your battle robe owes?

Excuse me, Roe Deer, how did you drop from lv.5 To lv.4?

😂Taoist Master Qiu Yuzi, are you covered with only that gourd spirit wine?

In fact, I explained this part of the problem in another friend's post, but that post may have been buried because of the resolution of the controversy. Let's talk about it separately here. In "Chen Shu. The Biography of Chen Fangtai", the protagonist's brother, the eldest son of Chen's mother, is described. Interested readers can go and see what kind of character this is. To put it simply, he is an unscrupulous character who has done some amazing willful things. At the same time, as his brother, Chen Fangqing is more cautious in character. Judging from the text description, he should be an introverted and sensitive person. When I was looking for character prototypes, I made some inferences based on this situation. Youdao is a loving mother who often loses her son. According to the things Chen Fangtai did, it can be inferred that he has been favored since childhood and has the mentality of a little emperor until he grows up. It is just a matter of high probability, so the author made this setting. In fact, from the perspective of raising the eldest son, it can also be discussed whether Chen's mother acted fairly. Similarly, if there is such an elder brother in the family, can the second son be more favored than him, or live a comfortable life? You can search Chen Fangqing on Baidu to see what kind of temper he is. We can also recall, what is the state of an unloved child who grows up in a family that is obviously biased or has certain feudal views? One more thing, there is a foreshadowing in Chen Fangtai's description in the book, so here is a disclaimer. In fact, when many friends mention the Wen, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties, they may think that it was a period when aristocratic families were rampant and had no scruples. But the fact is that in the late Southern Dynasties, the power of the aristocratic families declined greatly, especially after the Hou Jing Rebellion and the Western Wei Dynasty's capture of Shu and the capture of Jiangling. The Qiaoju wealthy families from the north had already declined greatly. Song, Qi and Liang can all be said to be dynasties founded by descendants of poor families, and Chen was the rise of Han people. Chen Baxian can be regarded as a southern native. From a certain perspective, the establishment of Nanchen means that the Southern Dynasty has got rid of the control of the nobles from the north to a certain extent. However, due to the degree of development and civilization of the south, in the periods of Emperor Chen Wen and Emperor Chen Xuan, a large number of nobles who moved to the south were still used. However, in this process, the family's control over military power gradually declined, and they were no longer able to fully control the government. As for the title, the title looks noble, but if there is no real power, it must still be subject to other feudal etiquette, such as filial piety. For a society to function, it must be orderly, otherwise it would be impossible to have an organized form of composition, let alone a country. It took a while and the update will be a little later at noon.

I hope that the protagonist will achieve great success in the future, and after being invincible in the world, he will not pretend to say a few words to end the story, but will clean up the world properly, and do not let those who designed the protagonist to deceive the protagonist to live a good life without any trouble.

This book is a bit lousy but Ke Qiyuan feels quite good. It's just that there are too many dramas about court grievances, which makes the tone low. Moreover, the upper realm should not be mentioned in the early stage, so that people always keep a guess, thinking that there may be a fairy world, but there may not be. I took the initiative to suggest that there is an upper bound, but it suddenly felt boring.

The front-end operation logic of Qidian becomes more and more confusing as it changes. The location of recommendation tickets is hidden in the lower-level options. Pictures in book club posts cannot be returned for a long time, and the feedback does not change. Sooner or later, I will be ruined by Tencent.

This book's cultivation system is really mysterious. It's entirely the author's words. Anyway, I can't understand it. After reading it, I felt that it was boring to read and it would be a pity to abandon it.

How are these great powers ranked according to their strength? The old beggar, the unknown Taoist who discussed Taoism with the Dragon King of the Temple, the Heavenly Emperor of Tiangong, Jiang Ziya, Emperor Zhuanxu, the seven people represented by the seven big trees, the old man in the picture scroll, Yinglong, Tianwu and other ancient gods, Sanqing PS: Personal People think that the old beggar should have opened the sky in seven steps based on the description, Jiang Ziya should have also taken the seventh step, and the unknown Taoist must have taken more than the seventh step to completely defeat Tian Wu. The Emperor of Heaven should be the weakest among these people, after all, there are not many gods who have returned to the truth. . Zhuanxu should be similar to the ancient god, the ancient god must be stronger than the seventh step, Yinglong should also be considered the ancient god, the old man in the picture scroll should be one of the Taoist masters represented by the seven big trees and must be beyond the seventh step, Sanqing should be three of the seven big trees, Tianwu is called Yuanshi Xiaoer, but it cannot be said that he is stronger than the Sanqing

Zhongnan Mountain was moved to the Northern Zhou Dynasty. In fact, there were already foreshadowings: The shirt has repeatedly emphasized that Zhongnan Mountain was within the territory of the Northern Qi Dynasty, but few people may knowThe territory of the Northern Qi Dynasty at that time: The modern location of Zhongnan Mountain is: I don't know if this isa foreshadowing of time and space~(￣▽￣~)~ However, few people may realize this foreshadowing when they see Zhongnan Mountain in the Northern Qi Dynasty. After all, the Southern and Northern Dynasties are biased, and even fewer people know the territory of the Northern Qi~ヽ( ￣д￣;)ノ Note: I didn't find ⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄㉨⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄, which was proposed by the operations officer {"NickName":"caowuefeng","UserId":3051586}. . .

It turns out that he is the author of Daoguo. No wonder the writing style is so familiar and both Shinto, Immortal, and Humanity play together, but it feels not as good as Daoguo? The fairy tale does not write about magic weapons and supernatural powers, the Shinto does not write about majesty and grace, and the humane does not write about human nature and sophistication. Generally speaking, the writing is good but not very exciting.

I think the captain can spend some time summarizing and systematically improving the cultivation system, and it is very possible to create a new path - [Two-in-One·Dao]. In this way, there will be nine paths, and this path is obviously better than the current one. Side theories such as "True Pigeon is Bu Ge·Dao" and "Today's Five Updates (typo + leave)·Dao" will be much easier to accept by readers. From now on, the captain will be the founder of the sect‎|•'-'•)و✧

It was written in a foggy way, and many places were blocked, which made me feel inexplicable. Furthermore, the protagonist is a time traveler, a modern person. However, the thoughts and behaviors displayed are all the styles of ancient people. Some behaviors are very stupid and not at all like modern people. The whole novel is long and verbose to read. After reading dozens of chapters, I just can't stand it anymore.

In the article, the little beast that came out of the egg in Pangu's tomb should be Chaos, which can also be called Dijiang. The shirt here merges the images of Dijiang in "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" and Chaos in "Shen Yi Jing". Dijiang: Chaos: in "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" In addition, in "Zhuangzi", Chaos seems to be Dijiang: P. S. The above pictures and texts are all from Baidu. If you are interested, you can find specialized information.

The protagonist has just been reincarnated, and the maid explains to him that Zhou Youzi is a very important person. Even if he is not an immortal, he is still a friend of his father in this life. However, he feels wronged and dissatisfied when he is asked to entertain guests during dinner? Even if modern parents and friends come to play at home, you have to stop and greet them while you are eating. If the servants behind you become more tough, the protagonist will feel that he is not welcome. . . You say he is stupid because he changes his identity very quickly. You say he is smart and inexplicably arrogant. Summary: The author wants to fast forward and shape the protagonist's living environment without any preparation at the beginning. Is it a cool novel?

From this introduction, I thought it was the flow of dynasty luck, but it turned out to be the flow of abandoning one's family and ancestors and becoming an orphan and cultivating immortality.

Aoyu, also written as "Aoyu". The allusion here comes from Fengshen. In The Romance of the Gods, the Wuyunxian who intercepted the teaching was the incarnation of Aoyu, and was finally fished to the Bade Pond in the west by Zhunti. IntroduceWu Yunxian: Wu Yunxian was caught: Wu Yunxian's real bodyAoyu: Aoyu is different from Ao! Ao fish is a fabulous fish body, while Ao is a big turtle. Finally: I wish you all a prosperous future in the new year, leap over the dragon's gate, and come out on top! ! !

🤔Obviously, the two offerings were dragged into Taoyuan... Why do some people still ask, the two offerings are useless... But I am curious, it was the painted-skinned hungry ghost who sent them in? How did the painted-skinned hungry ghost hook up with Taoyuan?

Today I was curious and looked up the protagonist. I thought the protagonist's current identity was Chen Cuo, but I couldn't find it... I searched for Chen Chao according to the picture and found it... Then I posted it. Chen Fangqing (6th century - 589), a native of Changcheng County, Wuxing County (now Changxing, Zhejiang Province), was a member of the Chen clan and officials of the Northern and Southern Dynasties. Chen Fangqing's grandfather was Chen Xiuxian, King Zhongzhuang of Nankang, the younger brother of Emperor Chen Wu, Chen Baxian, and his father was Chen Tanlang, King Min of Nankang. Chen Fangqing and his elder brother Chen Fangtai stayed in Nanliang when their father went to the Northern Qi Dynasty as a hostage. He was quick-witted when he was young and read many books. When he grew up, he was talented in strategy. During the Tianjia period, he was granted the title of Marquis of Linru County. Soon he was appointed as a horse washer for Shizhong and the prince. He was temporarily appointed as Zongzhengqing and served as minister of the province. In the ninth year of Taijian's reign (577), he served as General of Light Vehicles, Jiajie, Commander-in-Chief of all military affairs in Dingzhou, and Governor of Dingzhou. After his term was completed, he served as a regular servant of Sanqi and concurrently as Zongzhengqing. In the second year of Zhide (584), he was promoted to General Zhiwu and Governor of Wuzhou. At first, Ma Jing, the governor of Guangzhou, had lived there for a long time. He was very popular and prosperous, which aroused the suspicion of the court. Therefore, he appointed Chen Fangqing as General Renwei and governor of Guangzhou, and sent troops to attack Ma Jing. When Ma Jing was killed, he was promoted to General Xuan Yi. He was honest and prudent in character, making the people harmonious; in the fourth year of Zhide (586), he was promoted to General Yunhui. In the third year of the Zhenming Dynasty (589), the Sui Dynasty army crossed the river. Wang Yong, the governor of Donghengzhou, sent Dai Zhilie, the governor of Gaozhou, and 500 cavalry to meet Chen Fangqing, intending to elect him as the governor-general to conquer the military to support Taicheng. At that time, the Sui Dynasty's marching general Wei Gu led his troops across the mountains and announced the edict of Emperor Wen of the Sui Dynasty: "If Guolingnan is pacified, Wang Yong and Fengzhou Governor Zheng Waqing will be allowed to stay in office." After learning this, Chen Fangqing was afraid that Wang Yong would betray him, so he refused to obey Wang Yong and led his troops to resist Dai Zhilie. Dai Zhilie defeated him, beheaded him in Guangzhou, captured his wife and children, and obtained his subordinates.

😂This Qiu Yuzi talks so harshly and is so picky about everything she does.

I got to know the author through Daoguo. Unfortunately, except for the later part of Invincible World, which was a bit interesting, I gave up after reading a few chapters. The three golden chapters. It doesn't matter what kind of world you build in a book. The characters you create are lovable, otherwise there will be no sense of immersion and it will not retain people. If the three golden chapters are not well written, the retention rate will not be high. After a wave of traffic passes, it will be difficult to start again.