Dream of the Red Chamber: Starting with Lao Ai's Template

There is Lao Ai for sexual intercourse, Dong Zhuo for army and military affairs, and Cai Jing for political and financial affairs. With all three of them playing the leading role, there is no need to worry about failing to achieve a great cause 😏😏😏😏[fn= 58]😏, maybe this Jia Mu can also taste the taste of King Chakravartin😏😏😏😏😏😏

In fact, I have always had an idea when reading these historical novels. If the protagonist wants to pretend to be a genius, the author cannot write it. In fact, AI poetry can be used to set scene elements. I have seen that AI poetry written by others can sometimes write some good sentences! , The key point is that the level is stable, basically not bad. Then in some key places, copy the terms of famous historical teachers. Isn't this good?

The author forcibly promotes or overestimates the status of ancient talents in the feudal dynasty. It takes at least five years to gain fame and develop in the court before you can hold power. If you want to become a prime minister or a powerful man, you don't have ten or twenty years to dream. By then, the grass on the Jia family tombs will be tens of meters high. The emperor is in an embarrassing situation and has no military power in his hands. The emperor is about to die. No matter whether it is for reputation or for the sake of a solid foundation, he will not take action against him, so he only seizes it from the hands of the four kings and eight princes. The killing power is supported by the nobles and civil servants. There is now a consensus among people in the Red Mansion that the Jia family either broke up and severed ties with each other, or forcibly cheated with this book to continue their lives. The only way to break the situation is to join the army. Whether it is to join the emperor or do nothing, as long as you have military power in your hands. If it is not clear and the foundation is not stable, it is a rebellion, and you are already invincible. Afterwards, if you take the civil service route, even if you become a civil servant, you will still be rejected by the civil service group. It is useless if the civil servant becomes the number one scholar. Even if you become the prime minister, in ancient times, the emperor would still confiscate the whole family. Without military power, the Jia family must die. The system is already invincible. Wouldn't it be good to just take the military general route to start an unparalleled defeat?

There are almost no emotional scenes. The main character traveled through time purely for animal desires and calculations. To be honest, people in ancient times wanted to be promoted through imperial examinations for too long. No matter how good your golden finger is, if your writing is more reliable, the Jia family has long been copied. The good Red Mansions fan fiction written now basically started with military exploits and no military power. The royal family won't be afraid of it at all. Even if you don't rebel and don't say anything about the prince of the opposite sex, you can at least be a marquis. Not to mention hereditary, at least it can be hereditary, and the garden opera is also what many people want to see. Your book is purely for the purpose of collecting gold hairpins. It is a pity to discard it and it is tasteless.

A fool who copied poems as soon as he woke up. Are you still studying when you are stupid?

The author comes to explain that the protagonist, as an imperial envoy, goes to provide disaster relief. Such natural and man-made disasters must require subordinates to run errands to find out information. Then. . . . . The protagonist sets off alone. At the critical moment, the messenger has to be sent to the onlookers to go to the inn to find the messenger, and then the corrupt officials are ready to intercept and kill the messenger. . . What does the author want to express when the protagonist is asked to provide disaster relief alone? ? ? The protagonist's invincible martial arts? ? ?

I think the biggest problem with this book is that there is a gap between the introduction and the content. The introduction attracts spies but not fans. But not enough SP

I was so embarrassed that I even convinced Jia Daixiu, the leader of the Jinling clan! The author should read the original work, "After the second Duke of Ningguo and Rongguo, there were a total of twenty houses. Except for the eight families of Ning and Rong who were in the capital, the current original residents were the twelve." "Ning Guo is the leader", the patriarch is the heir of Ning Guo, and the only caretaker of the Jinling ancestral house is the housekeeper. In the original text, Yuanyang's father and mother are the stewards of Jinling, responsible for taking care of the ancestral property. The Twelve Meridians of Jinling do not even have titles, they are direct descendants attached to the capital. How to fabricate a Jinling clan leader? If Jia Yun recognizes her ancestor and returns to the clan, will she be removed from Shenjing? When the original text talks about Jia Yun and Jia Qin, they are direct sects and side branches. Take a look, the side branch of the direct sect means that there is no fifth service, a grandpa, the fifth sister-in-law in the corridor, which means the children of the fifth family of the direct sect. Jia Qin is the child of Sanfang. You, a direct descendant of Shenjing, went to the Jinling branch to recognize your ancestors and return to the clan. You are also drunk. Take a good look at the original work and the changes, it's so embarrassing!

There is no harem at all. Everything is written to the point. Then there are the various hydrographies. The imperial examination papers were submitted in advance. Lin Ruhai's princes became an ordinary family. It doesn't reflect the prestige of a wealthy and aristocratic family at all.

Are you an imperial envoy? Go to disaster relief alone? Investigating a case alone? Can you use some brains? The more I write, the worse it gets🤮