I Can Travel Back and Forth Between the Dream of the Red Chamber and the Real World

I can't even count the writing as a novice, and I can't bring myself to think of it at all. The conversation with Xue Baochai was really eye-catching. He saved a woman on the road and opened his mouth to start talking awkwardly. He was so greasy! There is no reasonable arrangement in modern times! As a medical college student receiving compulsory education, the first thing you think of when killing people is swords and crossbows? What about modern medicines? Using a little more brains is a method that ancient people couldn't detect! The same is true in the world of Red Mansions. Being a businessman has no foundation at all. The one who kills you is the one who makes so much profit. If you use a mirror to go to Ahmei or other places to make AK revolvers or bombs, I will consider you smart! In modern education, everything you learned in the past was dragon slaying! You have no ability to protect yourself at all. It's up to you to be embarrassed. It's really hard to see that there are three bedrooms and one living room! If you don't have some writing skills, don't write about Red Mansions! But this is the first time I saw the cross between the two worlds in the Red Mansion at the starting point!

The defense of ethics and education is bloody. The normal outcome of the first chapter is that you are killed and all the maids and servants who know about it are executed. Don't doubt whether the Wang family has this strength.

I came here with the intention of watching the theme of Red Mansion, but in the end I was trying to sell it like a sheep. It was just a story about Red Mansion. Most of them were original, and they were clichéd originals with clichéd ancient plots.

The protagonist is an 18-year-old innocent child... You have no awesome cheats, no family, no force of your own, do you think you are Long Aotian? The consequences of treating ancient people as fools is that you will not survive a few chapters. Those with social experience and brains will be shocked after reading a few chapters. Students in school can read it as a pastime...

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good. I take a lot of things for granted, I don't understand that era, and I don't understand the operating rules of ancient society. It's just a slap on the head and a random write-up.

I am a descendant of the future. I was a guest in the Red Mansions occasionally, and when I played Jin Chai in Rong Ning Mansion, they all said that I was too crazy to talk about dreams. Winds and clouds suddenly change many times, gathering and dispersing is like nothing. I know the cause and effect in the illusory world. When I look at the world, I can turn everything around.

The subject matter is very good! But don't think about it. If you, a stranger, fall into the boudoir bathtub of four ladies, the only outcome is death, and all the servants who know about it will die. Don't treat the ancient feudal dignitaries as good babies! To a certain extent, they themselves represent the laws and rules of that feudal era!

It's just a piece of writing that doesn't show any logic at all. But if it shows up with a little bit of logic, it will be beaten to death in the third chapter.

Hair, clothing, language, are you sure that what they saw in the first chapter was not a monk suddenly appearing in strange clothes, but a young man? That's it, a halo of wisdom.

It's time to cut it, eunuch! ! ! ! ! The ideas are fresh and novel! The writing and plot are completely confusing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !