I Have a Cultivation Good-Luck Charm

The beginning is the poisonous point. A body that has been buried for thousands of years and is immortal. Are you telling me that it is a mortal body? Take a shower and sleep

It feels like the writing is very confusing. I don't know if the author has an outline. Moreover, the content seems to be pieced together. The further you go, the more you feel this way.

There is a reason why it is not popular. In Chapter 5, a master is forcibly inserted. The dialogue content is extremely embarrassing and far-fetched, and it is extremely poisonous. . . If the beginning of a novel is not good, no matter how good it is, it will be useless. No one will read it later.

After you finish writing, take a day to look at what you have written. Dialogue. Plot. No one saw it. As for Goldfinger, I could bear to watch a few pictures.

When I saw San Gong Reconstruction, I knew it was impossible for me to continue reading this book. Before leaving, I would like to say a word of encouragement to the author.

Apart from the setting, I really don't know what else. Do you want to make a TV series? Hundreds of years of grievances, several people came to challenge, they jumped on the horse and attacked together, can't they be beaten to death? My least favorite genre is fantasy world reasoning.

Highly poisonous, be careful! The writing is very poor

It was ridiculous to be chased and saved at the beginning. If you encounter a monster in such a big forest, it would be more reasonable for two monsters to fight than to be saved.

Tomb robbers in the world of cultivation are still afraid of a zombie with an incorruptible body! ! The land of cultivation, the blessed land, has no precautions, and is still full of monsters. Think that all the monsters are idiots! ! !

There is no description of fighting at all in this book, and the parts involving fighting are brushed off and the context is not coherent. But the setting is very novel.