I Am Raising Taoist Soldiers on the Journey to the West

It's quite interesting, but I couldn't watch it after more than 30 chapters. The Xinyao Dragon Girl is too poisonous. Why do every author insist on writing strong female characters? Obviously it does not add color to the article, but will lose readers. . .

This is an original Journey to the West fanfic, and I have only seen this one for more than ten years.

The author's writing style is not bad, and the writing style is more in line with Journey to the West. As long as you don't stretch your hips later, it should still be a good book. I have read Chapter 10, and the only thing that makes me feel a little inappropriate is the pattern of the supporting characters in the book. This cannot all follow Journey to the West, but it should be improved if it continues to develop later (I hope you don't add any plots of the Ancient Gods at random, the three are based on three completely different routes, and random writing will definitely ruin the book)

It's not easy to write a pure Journey to the West. I listened to my brother's words and deleted that chapter. I collected myself and continued writing. It's 70,000 words and 3,000 yuan. It's pretty good. If you feel it's not good, just change it. It's easy to tell before it's put on the shelves. Also, don't take what readers say too seriously. There is a huge gap between the upper and lower limits of online proficiency. Many people don't understand anything. They just criticize if they like it or not. In particular, many people have no independent opinions and just like other people's good opinions. If others say bad things, they will follow suit. In fact, they don't have any ink in their stomachs. They can't write three paragraphs for two hours by themselves. If you feel uncomfortable, just set your fan value to speak. If there are any unfriendly chapters before they are put on the shelf, just delete them. Sometimes I feel unhappy and say a few words. It is understandable that the author deletes what I say for the sake of profit. After all, I just read books for fun, and the author wants to make money.

I found an interesting thing. According to the author, the heaven and the earth reopen every 129,600 years, and then one day in the sky and one on the earth. Doesn't that mean that the longest life span of the gods in the sky is 355 years?

It's well written. If you keep this level, it shouldn't be a problem for you to order a thousand copies for the first time, and maybe it will be a high-quality product in the future.

Update, brother, don't force me to beg you.

The author should update it soon, I'm worried to death

Don't cut it, author, if you look at the book that ranks number one on the list, there are also a lot of people who are criticizing it.

What the hell is going on in the latest chapters? Price drop

How did you cut it? It looks great.

The front part is very interesting, but when I saw the plot of the monkey, I felt that the protagonist was Yi Xiaochuan.