Under One Person: Fairy Boy, Six Ding Liujia Protective Body

I have written more than 20 chapters under the guidance of a master.

I can't tell the difference between good and bad, why? Because the plot is dragging and there is too much nonsense. If you've seen it, you haven't seen it. In fact, that's all.

Chapter 31: Apprenticeship, what else do you write?

How did you manage to make more than 30 pictures as a disciple?

Food supply is running low, the plot is just about apprenticeship, and the description of the content before apprenticeship is too procrastinating, so wait and see.

I think it's okay. Looking at the comment area, some people feel that the front part is procrastinating, but my personal opinion is still acceptable. Because I came here for the title Fairy Boy➕Six Ding Liujia. It did take more than twenty chapters to get to Maoshan, but killing bandits, murderers, and gray fairies along the way, and saving people all showed Liu Ding Liujia. If you came here for the "Maoshan" in the introduction, it would be really procrastinating.

The writing is very ink and watery. The protagonist does not practice hard and relies solely on unknown mysterious power to become stronger.

Chapter 30 Apprenticeship, it's been delayed like this, I can't imagine how much trouble you'll have after it's released.

Is there any Lightning Thunder Fist? Recently there have been several Maoshan books

Having a family in the background is never a problem. The main reason is that it is easier to write if you are an orphan. Failure to handle the relationship is a disaster, so there is no need to add extra difficulties. The protagonist, Qingmei Xinghua, has a round face and a slim body. In those days, rural people had to work, and physical development required nutrition. How come she can photosynthesize? It was another traditional slap-in-the-face plot on the train. I rushed to save someone but was threatened and disliked. Is it to lure the Lu family out of this person named Lu? No matter how long it takes to become a disciple at chapter 20, your top priority now is not to write a bunch of side plots. Instead, quickly enter the main plot and let the protagonist develop.

It's okay. The abilities of this fairy boy and Liu Ding Liujia have been shown before. Even if the protagonist has so much common sense in practice, there is no explanation. However, if you are an orthodox Maoshan disciple, it should not be very easy. You also have to examine your character and so on.

It's too slow. Don't you know how to write a plot?

When a dog barks, a group of other dogs in the village also bark. Aren't there enough fast-paced, mindless and cool stories about one person? Just go and see it.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. The plot progresses as slowly as a tortoise, and it's almost as if you haven't watched it.